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On the way back from Fluttershy's house, Starlight takes notice of a young filly under a tree and soon discovers that she is without any known parents. Starlight wants to take care of the poor orphan, but is uncertain if she has the qualities that it takes to be a 'mother'.
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Plse write more!
Huh, Starlight being the one to adopt a foal for once.
I'm a bit surprised, as I'm pretty sure this is the first fic with Starlight being the adopter in a non dark way with her not using a foal for some insidious plot. Just for that, you get a like and a track.
I am so excited for more I hope she adopts this mystery filly
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I shall!
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And you get a thanks, Bricklayer!
More please
Fav and sub
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Thanks!
Could use a slight polish, but other than that, I like it.
More please!
Ooh, this looks like the first Starlight Glimmer motherhood story I've seen before, and it's starting out really well. I like the mystery behind who the foal is. A bit of grammatical errors here and there, but I'd be more than happy to help you with that.
And you should definitely submit this to Motherhood is Magical if you want it to get more views. By the way, I have a popular adoption story up on here, so if you need any help, just feel free to ask!
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Will do, Thanks! Working on chapter 2 now!
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Hope it goes great for you!
Definitely like the concept which makes me want to continue reading. In desperate need of an editor but errors are not too destracting. Hoping to see this continued soon.
Well this seems interesting so far. I'm looking forward to more chapters.
Interesting...
This really looks interesting. Looking forward for future chapters.
D'awww... Starlight may be still new at this but she's going to be a great mother, I can tell already.
This has potential, a like for now!
Damn u making a great fic here, i like fics like these 2 read from time 2 time please keep writing more chapters 4 dis fic
Awww!
That's a colour I never heard of...
Awww so sweet :3 I can't wait for more shes gonna be such a good mother
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Oops.
It's actually good. I can see using the ship on Sunburst & Starlight in this story... But that should be in a sequel.
I do feel like this story rushes in conversations between characters... I think it's only Starlight rushing it.
You could add some comedy into the story, might actually make it fun between Starlight & Aqua
D'aaaaaw!
You do realize that infants are newborns, right? I would suggest changing it to young instead.
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I was trying to convey that she was still in her infant stage and on the verge of growing out of it....
But your idea's better.
I have a serious soft spot for parenthood fluff, so please do continue. So far it's super adorable!
Aww, very nice so far, I can't wait to see more.
I'm excited to see what happens next.
bravo to you for sucha beautifully written and told story! have a like and a follow.each new chapter will well worth the wait!well done to you!
Yay you got featured great job :3
Too much ADORABLENESS!!
For a split second, I thought I didn't look at the tags right...
There seems to be less grammatical errors this time around, and your writing is already improving. Congrats on the feature!
7349648 and the white, oozing pre-...I'm just gonna stop. Yah.
7348700 I don't know, there are plenty of adults I know who the term "infant" describes perfectly.
GlimGlam mom is best mom. I like this.
This is just about the most awedorable story I have ever read! (Awedorable is a combination of awesome and adorable) I can't wait for more!
This is off to a good start. Still got a few spelling and/or grammar errors floating around but great start, looking forward to more.
7348647 Starlight Sunburst and aqua best family ever
this is going to be great.
Aqua calling Starlight "Mommy" later on in the fic... and when Aqua meets Sunburst, later on... "Daddy"
It's rare that I bookmark something these days.
Good work, following.
Omg! I LOVE THIS! SO! STINKIN!! CUTE!!
A very interesting concept I haven't seen executed this well before! You, my friend, just received a like and a track!
So her name is Aqua, huh?
I have a guess that she'll only be able to say very specific things. Specifically:
"You are the ocean's gray waves...
Destined to seek life beyond the shore, just out of reach..."
7349662 didn't I see you before ?
Best to be named after what you look like.
If that were true your name would be ugly hoe
7351521 and you?