This story is a sequel to This War of Ours
(This story is part of the shared Marvel/MLP universe created by this guy.)
Derpy was only trying to deliver a box of fireworks (that were due for transport days ago) to somepony by the last name of Lulamoon. As it happened, the pony turned out to be a really famous showmare and she didn't seem very happy when she arrived in the middle of the night, though the oddly emotionless mare beside her...well, she wasn't sure. Anywho, Ms. Lulamoon wasn't mad at Derpy; a really big metal bird thing demolished her home when it fell out of the sky, and she was really bent on finding the owner and giving them an earful. In her defense, Derpy didn't know she stepped on any buttons inside the blasted thing; nopony should leave stuff like that for a mailmare like her to step on. But then they were suddenly in this giant black space and Equestria had completely vanished. Then the showmare got angry at her. The other pony? She just kept staring blankly.
Lucky for them, these cool alien creatures came out of nowhere and offered to get her home once they finished a job they had to do. See, they're apparently Guardians of the Galaxy or something like that, and they help out folks in the galaxy. So, Derpy naturally assumed that they'd just tag along for now and they'd be home in no time at all, where she could finish her delivery andjust maybe keep her job!
Then the talking raccoon stole a few batteries from these golden people, and everything went downhill from there.
Like,way down. Like falling of a cliff into an endless void-down.
So, Derpy and Trixie in Guardians of the Galaxy Vol. 2? Sign me up!
Wait, he planted one on Equus?! Oh, shit...
Does this story have any spoilers for Guardians of the Galaxy Vol. 2 in it?
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Yes, if this is anything like the prologue, the story will follow GotG Vol. 2 heavily. So if you want to wait until the DVD comes out, I suggest putting this story in "Tracking" until you finish the movie.
In other news, if this story ends with Derpy and Trixie joining the Guardians. Then I am completely interested. If the prologue didn't seal it for me (And it did), I completely look forward to your story for the concept alone.
Well, this seemed interesting. Just a thought, maybe you should include more side characters like Shining Armor, or Cadence, maybe even Doctor Whooves.
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Well, i don't intend to follow it too heavily, but the plot is very much involved.
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Eeyup.
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Yes. Quite the problem.
Everything's better with Kurt Russell... and ponies, of course.
this reminds me heavily of guardians of the galaxy vol. 2 (which i watched last night)
Oh boy, looks like Howard the Duck is going to be making a quick stop by Equus, and I think he's going to have a few certain stowaways.
Because if so, pass.
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Well he plot of GOT2 will be involved, but it will be different.
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Different how? Because JD told us that This War of Ours would be different, but it ended up being virtually the same as the movie but with different characters filling different plot points. I'd rather that this fic do something that isn't... that.
Then again, I don't control it. But after seeing him deliver something so criminally boring after his fic before was the complete opposite, I'm a little skeptical.
So we begin a new adventure.
Excellent work so far. Keep it up.
Howard the Duck FTW! Also, it looks like the Incident in Equus is Ultron's near-extinction of the planet, whereas the Incident on Earth is the Chitauri invasion of New York. Loving it so far! Keep going!
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Duck Tales! Whoo Hoo!
You know, I've always found the chapter where the ponies watch Star Wars so funny, that I imagine the eight of them watching Nostalgia Critic sometimes. Or just the girl's reactions to some of the shitty movies and classic movies of the times. You know what I mean?
8380418 I wouldn't mind a ponies react YouTube channel.
I would have liked to see more MLP characters go with the Guardians, like Fleur de Lis.
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Hello?
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If I told you exactly how, it'd give away surprises. And JD himself has advised me to be more original after getting those kinds of comments on his story. So I've been thinking up new things for this.
I've definitely put Howard The Duck in a different position plot wise. :P
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Ok. That's already a good sign.
And the world could always do with more Howard the Duck.... that's not being sarcastic, by the way. I REALLY want to see a solo film by Marvel in the future.
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You sound surprised.
At first I thought he was talking about the Korbinites, but then I remembered "Oh right, MLP fic." So that's obviously not good.
And at least Meredith saying that in this version didn't make her sound entirely stupid. When someone tells me that a glowing alien weed will be "all across the universe, I don't just not ask hard questions and settle for "how they said it." Maybe Grandpa Quill and whoever else told you Ego was bad news might have had a point.
Also, I think the timeline in your story is kind of screwed up. If Twilight and co are still on Earth at the time of or shortly before Civil War, then it's already WAY past the time when Guardians 2 should have taken place in Oct 2014. UNLESS of course if this takes place in the year the film came out or some other time. Just the kind of stuff I tend to notice. Kind of like how Spider-Man Homecoming needs to flat out re-edit some things. Eight years my ass.
Neat
Even if you do change things to be original I hope you keep some of the humor and main plot points of the movie.
...I need to get my mind outta the gutter.
Retail work in a nutshell.
Maud. With the Guardians. This I HAVE to see.
I'm gonna take a wild guess and say those fireworks were blown up in Vision's face.
"Please stop jinxing it."
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Guess it sucks to be you, Howard.
And then, Howard was the first one to almost drop the f-bomb in the MCU. Well, second one. The Punisher was the first.
Oh, bringing Howard early into the story, huh?
Wonder what'll happen when someone comes across Howard?
"Dat's a DUCK! Dat's a DUCK, man!"
Ya think you could cool it with the nepotism, Trixie?
Oh, for God's sake, Howard.
Skrulls: That's racist!
Great timing, guys.
The ponies and the Guardians have officially made contact!
Also, this:
Oh, he's definitely up to something. Something big.
A. You misspelled some words.
B. I would be a happy man if you never say 'Molestia' again.
they are aware of doctor strange
Will the Soveign be in this? I found them quite entertaining and that first battle in the movie was EPIC (and quite hilarious as well)
Poor Derpy, or Muffins she was called in the show I think, just wants to be a hero
Oh, the banter of the Guardians never gets old! Loved Drax's lines in this chapter!
Doctor Strange reference. Gotta love it. That brings up an interesting question if the Guardians know about Strange, but we'll just have to wait and see.
Trixie's gonna have to apply water directly to the burn.
At last they meet.
Well this is fun, but I'm not sure if you need to put Rocket's dialogue in bold. And you should hire an editor to go over any spelling mistakes because I saw quite a few.
At least he's not a herald of Galactus.
Terrax the Tamer, huh? Cool!
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Gotta say, though, Maud definitely stole this chapter for me.
The feeling's mutual on the Infinity War trailer.
Another excellent chapter! Great interactions! However, I managed to catch this:
Gamora said that twice.
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Yeah the twice thing was intentional, though I did want it worded differently now that I think about it. :/
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Neat
Well, to be fair, she spent a thousand years in prison.
This would be adorable if it weren't for Daddy Thanos.
Also, it should be "Nothing can change that, Gamora!" she said, trying to look taller than her and failing."
Wait, where did they mention a don- *Thinks for a second* -oh.
Ooooo! Getting into the first battle of the movie! Love it!
I'm hoping Derpy dances with Groot during the fight.
Finally!
So excited for what comes next and the shenanigans that come with it
Maud Pie: Earthbender.
Small typo here, not sure what you're saying.
Well, well, it seems that out of desperation, Trixie was able to cast a powerful spell. Hopefully we get to see more of this progression as the story continues.
Hoping Derpy flies in to save Drax. That would be hilarious.
Another awesome chapter! Can't wait for the next!