This is actually a pretty decent Friday morning, and not because of the lack of school for the day. It's easy to notice the magnificent details of your morning; the drizzling grey of the sky that made you sleepy all over again, the mattress you're lying on that you swear is made of clouds, the fluffy blankets causing your enviroment to be comfortably warm and the simple fact that you don't have anything to do for the whole day.
Wait.
Who's leg is draped over your side?
(Random idea I had for a long time...that didn't sound right. Rated Teen for brief memories of bed-wrestling. *wink wink*)
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That ended better for our protagonist than I expected.
I always have a soft spot for ponies (or Equestria Girls) in my bed.
Have a like & fave.
Was good. I enjoyed it. 7/10
No plans. Waking up to someone after an obvious night of sex?
Might as well get back into bed and see if you two can replay the events fro before. :P
I'd kill for some more legend of everfree-based stories
doesn't this need the 2nd person tag?
You have a funny "Sense of Humor"
You probably need to edit this, or have it edited by someone. For all the lovely descriptions, there are a lot of little errors; for example:
Last I checked, "foot" wasn't spelled "fout"; also, the thigh and the foot are in completely opposite directions from the knee.
As for the story itself...
It felt really incomplete, like it should be a scene of something larger.
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How much larger can it get?
So is "your" girlfriend Sunset, or is there an extra layer of awkwardness to this?
If this was any better, it would include what happened last night. Otherwise, you did noice things with your girlfriend, who is in fact Sunset Shimmer the other night... F*CKIN' SCORE!!!