With a little filly like Scootaloo, she needs some pony to take care of her, a big sister, a big sister like Lightning Dust. After Scootaloo and Lightning Dust parent abandon them. Lightning has to do so much just to keep the sisters afloat. Unable to be there Scoots finds a new big sister, Rainbow Dash the coolest pony in all of Equestria. Also spoiler alert, events of the show will be in the story.
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Chapters (14)
there were some spelling and grammar errors, but i did like the dreamy imagery. interesting way to start a story, it got my attention. i hope you write some more!
7385464 Thanks I hope you enjoyed it, and trust me there is plenty more to come.
You do know that Scootaloo has to O's right and should have a cap in her name because it is a name. Like Equestria beside equestria. You should read through your work before posting it up. I'm still going to read it, but if you having trouble go to Looking For Editors or Paperrater is a website that helps with spelling for free.
7387234 Thanks for picking up on that, I hope you enjoy the story.
Interesting. You could use an editor but I knew what u meant. Hopefully we'll find out more about this family
7389530 Thanks, unfortunately a editor is hard to find but besides that, I have plenty of stuff planed especially in the next chapter.
Lightning Dust is closer to green than blue
At least we know have a bit of back story which is good.
Lightning's gonna have to tell Scootaloo the truth about what happened at the academy sooner or later. Like I always say better you then someone else.
7400326 Eventually she will yes. But to be fair she did touch on it in Sisters Day Out.
lightning's such a good sister!
7404423 I know right
7400326 Well I hope your happy I have the confrontation chapter done.
7421197 Mhmm the truth had to come out sooner or later.
You realize Rainbow Dash is two words right?
Other than that, good chapter.
7425454 Thanks I will go back and fix it.
You've got my attention, let's see if you can keep it.
7465548 I hope I keep it. Or else I am not doing my job
Scootaloo will be adorable in this story, right?
7475667 yup
As much as I like non flying Scotaloo, I do wonder if the show will ever allow her to fly fly and not hover about.
Oh Dusty.
7480695 Does it matter it's still Scoots wheather she can fly or not
Awww, so cute.
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7567298 Honestly I never considered the idea of having Scootaloo being Lightning Dust's sister, but its a great fic, nice ideas.
7567314 Thanks because there is more to come
7567321 I look forward to it, I'm a huge Scootaloo fan
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Aw, Lightning and Scoots are best family pair. I like pancakes too.
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7628136 They are my favorite sister pair. But OMG I love the picture it is so amazing you did a amazing job.
But I do have to agree pancakes are the best
I liked it. Can't wait to see what you got planned.
7659547 Thanks
Sometimes you have to forge your own path in life.
you do realize that lightning dust is nothign more than a conflict character
7682193 can you please clarify?
7682352 well, all she does is destry property with no real reason, all she does is make RD look like a hipocrate
7682354 Thanks for the critique, I will try to fix it for the future.
7682367 hey, i just don't like lighnening dust
gilda was one thing, she must be something of importance to be friends with the element of loyalty for much of their childhood, but lighning dust was just a conflict character, all she did was made the wonderbolts look like oblivious idiots,
and making her buddies with scotaloo makes no sense, as if RD wasn't a bad enough of an influence on Scoots
7682376 I see your point, however I would like to point out that yes she did make the Wonderbolts look less than respectable, but the point of a fiction is to expand a character to be more than a conflict character. And to be fair there are some moments when Rainbow is a good role model such as Flight to The Finish. And the point of Scootaloo being a sister of Lightning is to make a good story.
7683266 well I admit
I do the same thing with makings unhurt and Gilda a couple in EG, I like to make an interesting story,
7683323 As do I, a interesting story is always fun to write. Which is why I chose this character, Lightning Dust. She is such a unknown character. We don't know a single thing about her so she is a good character to write about.
7683432 yeah, a lot of my shipping goes against fannon, but let's be honest SunLight has been done to death, Sweetie pMash stemmed from 20secomds in a fan animation, and RariJack is an abusive relationship waiting to happen
7683453 I dont mean to offend you but I have to ask. Because you don't like a character in the show, so any fan-fiction about the character will be bad?
7688255 well I'm less inclined to like it or read it
7688350 Well how much worse can a character get? It wouldn't hurt to give it a try
7688455 well just because something. Is highly rated doesn't make it a good story there may be some high-rated stories but that doesn't mean that it isn't a played-out romance fic or troll fic, some people give a like on a story just because it was well-formatted or starred a character the like
No offense
Dang it you beat me to the punch. I was working on a story similar to this one involving Lightning Dust and Scootaloo.
7762789 Sorry,
You can probably still write it. Besides you can probably write a better version than me
7762789 You should sent me a link if you do do it
Eh, I'm not much of a writer anyway. Better a professional than me. I have many other ideas anyway.
7763233 Thanks let me know, I would be glad to help if you feel you need it.