Scootaloo. Abandoned by her parents, left at the doorway of an orphanage in Ponyville, living there for a few years.
Then came Rainbow Dash, Scootaloo's idol. Every night, she set aside her dreams of being adopted, and those dreams turned into being like Rainbow Dash.
Eventually, Scootaloo got adopted. But by who?
One-shot.
This is way too fast paced
5891257
Stop criticizing me. I get that I'm not perfect and neither is this story. Okay. I understand that. But to criticize me, tell me that the story made you angry, and that I need an editor?! It just makes me angry. I respect your opinion that you disliked the story, and I can read some of your stories to help myself, if you don't mind. But don't post stuff that just makes me feel like I'm a bad writer.
5887791
Thanks for the advice; I'll remember that in the next story I write.
5898103
It's okay. And some of your comment was understandable, like the part where you said it was to fast.
Also, sorry, but I don't agree with you when you say I shouldn't delete comments. Sorry.
Her real parents, rainbow dash, or flutter shy
5902646
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5903231 da scooter gift
5903231 da scooter gift
5903366
One of them is right.
5903463 Fluttershy or the parents
5903499
You'll see.
*friends
It's french. The correct spelling is "Déjà vu".
As to who gave her the scooter? It was her biological parents.
5909479
I'll correct it!
5902646 of course not you idiot!
what he meant to say is that they couldn't be because the parents are unicorns.
6157452
Actually, it was Scootaloo's biological parents.
6160812 who are unicorns
6171666
Who are Unicorns who still care about their daughter, but just couldn't keep her.
The anonymous ponies are her biological parents!