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In this sequel to Wrath of an Angry Prince, Spike enlists Rarity and Fluttershy to help remake Twilight's dresses that she wore as a unicorn to help remind her of the most important events in her life as part of an effort to help Twilight get over the loss of her library.

Meanwhile, Discord also joins in, determined to get on Shining Armor's good side by remaking Twilight's best mare dress.

*Special thanks to Pastelights for editing.

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Cute little story. Worthy of a fave.

I'm gonna watch dis. :pinkiesmile:

:moustache: Gosh ! Pinkies party cannon nearly blew my leg off!
:pinkiesick: Oh sorry Spikey

:raritystarry: Oh dear

:twilightoops: Oh I thought dragons were tough

:flutterrage: Ouch!

:applejackconfused: That's sorta bad there

:moustache: It's only my left leg

:rainbowhuh: Dude that's rude

“I certain wasn’t trying to.”

certainly
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PM me when you fix this, but you need to go through this story and space your paragraphs. Way to many of your paragraphs have 0 spacing between them.

Someone still owes a debt after been saved by Spike.

Twilight lowered her head and let out a deep sigh,

Twilight then let out another sigh and at that point, she revealed to her number one assistant what was on her mind.

Move down a line.
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My winter wrap up vest that the town gave me as all team organizer;

Cap. [Winter Wrap Up is a holiday. All Team Organizer is the division she works in.]
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My winter wrap up vest that the town gave me as all team organizer; my Gala Dress that I wore to the Grand Galloping Gala; my Best Mare dress that I wore in my brother’s wedding; the dress Rarity made for my birthday along with my Starswirl the Bearded Costume that I made myself. Everything in those outfits held a memory and those held the most memories next to my books.”

lowercase [Dress, and Costume don't get capitalized [unless they were used in a title of a publication.]
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Much better now a majority of the spacing errors were fixed ^_^.

What is that?” he thought as he crawled down to pick up the object, which was revealed to be a dirtied pink bow that was not charred by fire. Looking at it closely, Spike carefully examined the bow and realized exactly what it was.
“Incredible!” he whispered. “This is from Twilight’s best mare dress. I’d better get this over to Rarity and fast, just to be sure if it really is.”
So Spike ran as fast as he little legs would let him and soon he came up to the door of Carousel Boutique. Ringing the doorbell before fainting from exhaustion, the door was soon opened by a white unicorn with a long, neat purple mane.
“Yes, what can I do for…?” the unicorn started to say, but then looked down at the site of the purple baby dragon, causing her to gasp. “Spikey Wikey! What happened to you?”

Space bolded parts.
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“I was wondering if maybe Fluttershy could give me a hand here.

hoof [equines don't have hands.]
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Alright other than your spacing issues. Not to bad of a fic. You really need to work on making sure to work on your spacing though.

:derpytongue2: "Hi Twilight , I have a delivery from Dr. Hooves".

:twilightsmile: "It's all my stuff from the Library!"

:duck: Twilight Spikey and I have a little. . . ."

:moustache: Gosh, How'ed that happen, your stuff????

:raritystarry:*&%#$%%#%&*!!!!!!:twilightoops:

:derpyderp2: "My bad?"

You ever feel like Spike is played of being second fiddle, a sidekick, and/or pushed around like he wasn't important in his life?

:duck: "Spikey here's a gift for you too."

:moustache: "Wow special edition comics and a complete Power Ponies set! Thanks Rares!"

:raritywink: "Any time my precious scales"

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:moustache: "Oh those too. . ."

:raritywink:

5991765 Dang, your avatar keeps confusing me because it uses the same base image as mine but with a different caption...

remaking those dresses doesn't give them the same value as the ones destroyed.

6207730 At least they try their best. I wanted Twilight to get at least a piece of her life back.

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They should try and inspire her to make new memories. In the cannon they made that chandelier to reassure Twilight that she'll never forget her memories so she can let go of her pain.
Also, I would think that remaking them doesn't really do anything. Someone once stole a game of mine that was very important to me, I replaced it but that didn't help at all. You can't replace something like that and you also shouldn't try.

6342576 Ouch, I'm sorry to hear that. It's just that I read a fanfic called "It's all gone!" and Rarity offered to Twilight that she could always make her new dresses. That was what inspired me to write this fanfic to begin with. Yes, I liked that they refurbished the roots to create the chandelier, but I really liked Twilight's dresses a lot as well and I wanted to write something that addressed why they hold memories to Twilight.

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You can never replace memories, that's why they are very precious.

6342682 this was basically my equivelent of the chandelier. The remade dresses remind twilight of the important life events and like the chandelieier, inspire her to make new ones.

6342682 this was basically my equivelent of the chandelier. The remade dresses remind twilight of the important life events and like the chandelieier, inspire her to make new ones.

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They are not the same as pictures.

6342707 true, maybe they are not the same but they hold memories just as much as pictures. Take for example, twilights coronation gown, it was probably placed in a museum to remind equestria of this memorial occassion.

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yes but there are 2 differences; 1 it has value for the general public and 2 it is actual the real thing. Just like how they made the chandelier out of the remnants of the library.
They are basically copies that she can't even wear. I would think they would slightly change them so that Twilight can fit in them now and still wear.

6342752 It wouldn't be the same for Twilight if they were modified for her to wear them. However, you might have given me an idea for a future fanfic where Twilight opens up a museum about her life and places her dresses in the exhibit.

However they are not the same ones so they don't have any sentimental value anyway.
Twilight would never do something like that. She's very humble and doesn't like all the attention. Especially admiring of useless things, she wants to do something useful.

6343882 I wouldn't exactly call them useless. Those dresses are like a timeline of Twilight's accomplishments: her gala dress represents the first time she went to a big event with her friends; her best mare dress represents not just being her brother's best mare at his wedding, but also how she managed to expose Chrysalis and allow her brother and Cadence to defeat her and the Changelings, etc.

In short, each dress tells a story and holds a memory to Twilight. This is nothing more than just a head canon on how Twilight's friends attempt to get a piece of her life back. Head Canons and Show Canons are two completely different animals.

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But those dresses aren't the same ones.

I always enjoy reading this story.

I'm so happy with the way it turned out after it was all edited.

Your stories are marvelous, and I'm excited to see what you will present to us in the future <3.

Keep up the great work!

You know where to find me! :)

-Pastel

Ever since she had heard her brother mention of the best mare dress she lost in the library explosion while confronting Discord, Twilight could not help but think of all the sentimental items that were also lost.

First line and i found a mistake :unsuresweetie: I think you meant Tirek there

Shining Armor: It's not tears! It's liquid pride!

Operation: restore memories is a go.

We all know that fluttershy will agree to help.

“Some ponies are difficult to make up to, Discord,” replied Fluttershy. “I’m sure you can make up for what you did eventually. I know you are sorry for what happened, but you need to focus on the future and not the past.”

That is true.

Discord considered the matter but then, he suddenly began to think of what would happen if he did come into those towns, particularly Appleloosa. A thinking cloud came out of him and it showed a picture of the Appleloosians placing Discord at the gallows with a noose tied around his neck. Seeing her friend at the gallows caused Fluttershy to cover her eyes with her wing and Discord immediately snapped the cloud away.

Yikes

“I agree,” said Fluttershy, shaking off the sight of horror that was before her eyes. “If you want to atone for your actions, do it here first with those that are closest to you.”

Shouldn’t it only be the people he’s close to?

Fluttershy considered the matter and although she did give her own spin on Twilight’s bedroom, the matter of helping her friend with this tall order was something that she felt that needed to be done. After all, Fluttershy did have a freaky knowledge of sewing, according to Applejack. At the same time, she thought that this would be a good opportunity for Discord to start making up for his actions and try to get back on Shining Armor’s good side.

What’s the reason he’s trying to get on shining armor’s good side, again?

“All right,” groaned Rarity, placing her hoof to Discord’s chin. “But if you do anything garish, Discord, so help me…”

What does garish mean?

“Cross my heart, hope to fly, stick a cupcake in my eye,” said Discord, reciting the pinkie promise.

When did he learn that?

So, the mission to recreate Twilight’s destroyed dresses had begun…

I thought it already begun.

If you didn’t want to release him from stone, then why did you? I don’t know about discord, but I would have clapped back.

“If you don’t mind that, my dear Rarity,” chuckled Discord and Rarity transferred some of her magic into Discord that he would use for the presentation of the dresses.

She can do that?

“Why would I hate it, Discord?” cried Twilight, approaching Discord with tear filled eyes. “You may be a jerk at times, but you’re a jerk with a heart of gold. You have given my brother and me an important piece of our lives back.”

That is something I’d never thought I’d hear.

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Probably still feeling bad about letting the idea of running wild with his magic turn him into a traitor. He can't help that his nature is crazy compared to everyone else nature.

Comment posted by Pete100 deleted March 25th

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Doesn’t something bad happens if he doesn’t?

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