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Coloratura is asked by the family of a loyal fan of hers who is dying of cancer to sit at her bedside in her dying moments.

*Written at Trotcon 2017 in Columbus, OH

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That was dreadfully sad. It's also most terrible that some lose their lives to something as murderous as cancer.

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And sometimes that early.

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Indeed. That's why many organizations such as Make A Wish Foundation exist in order to help children who are afflicted with cancer.

Dang, that's a sweet story.

Could be extended, allowing for Rara to have quiet moments would leave a bigger impact, but an impressive work nonetheless. :twilightsmile:

"Choose losing the ones you love, then as they fall from view, a piece of you dies with them. Until you can see that one day in the future, piece by piece, they will all be gone and there'll be nothing left of you to call alive or dead."

This is very heartbreaking. Great story.:fluttershysad:

Absolutely beautiful and touching. Reminds me of that famous story with the boy who died in Santa's arms.

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I listened to this the whole story. as you can imagine, that made it much worse.

"Andrew used real tears."

Dying from cancer is one of the worst things that can happen. Who cares when someone's time runs out? Who cares if one more light goes out?

Well I do

We all do

That was truly sad...:fluttercry:
But it was written beautifully. Thank you. :pinkiesad2:

"I did what I had to do, AJ," replied Coloratura, sitting down at her sofa. "Double Clef is at peace now and that's all that matters. And you're right, all that matters is that she is at peace, AJ."

And I just realized that you had Rara say the same thing twice.

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