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Following the events of "Do Princesses Dream of Magic Sheep?", Luna is confronted by a troubled pony on the verge of suicide and must try to find a way to save his life before it is too late.
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Beautiful story, and nice to see Svengallop didn't take his own life. Seems everypony has the capacity for change.
Not a bad story, and nice to see one where the bad guy acknowledges his wrongdoings. Suicide is indeed no way to deal with one's hurt, and atoning for our actions is the only proper course to take.
May God bless you all.
I agree with the comments, interesting how you chose svengallop as the pony who wanted to take his life.
On an other note, remeber me? Probably not, but I'm Pastelights, your old editor. I got locked out of my account and I just kinda abandoned it
, but if you ever need more editing to be done, hit me up!
Just my own opinion, but I don't thnk that Svengallop, while still being pretty bad, wasn't as bad as some make him out to be.
Anywho, this is a pretty nice story.
7443163 He probably felt bad about himself because he spend too much time looking at the gallop polls.
Sainthood is fine and all, but isn't saving the world more of a superhero thing?
The story is fine, but...
SPOILER WARNING:
IMHO comparing actions of Luna to actions of Svengallop is a misunderstanding.
Luna became 'evil' because she was jealous of admiration Celestia got from their subjects during the day, while she got none during the night. She felt lonely and useless, and that slowly consumed her mind (unless the comics are cannon - then I guess this is more complicated).
Svengallop on the other hand wasn't at all jealous of the fame Coloratura had - he was just using her to get his own perks, and he was happy with that arrangement - just your standard greedy bastard.
At least that's how I see it, after watching the 'The Mane Attraction' :) .
This should have been an episode in mlp.