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twilightsparkle3562


I am a man from Massachusetts with Autism who enjoys MLP, Disney and writing!

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In between the events of "Rainbow Rocks" and "Friendship Games," Sunset visits Rarity's boutique, seeking a new outfit to reflect her new personality and outlook on life.

*Written at Fillycon 2016 in Philadelphia, PA.

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Comments ( 10 )

Awwww, this is cute.

Although I can't help but imagine Trixie bursting in ten seconds after Sunset leaves and shouting "Rarity, quick! I need to look as unspeakably evil as possible!" :scootangel:

Needs at least three or maybe ten sequels. :twilightsmile:

You know, I never thought about this, but Rarity did probably help Sunset choose her new outfit. Great story!

Thanks so much for writing this story, twilightsparkle3562. I really appreciate it.

Although I do have one minor nitpick, and no it's not how Rarity is involved in the plot like in A New Haircut for Starlight Glimmer. It makes perfect sense for Sunset and Starlight to go to her for their respective new looks since this is her area of expertise. No, my nitpick has to do with Sunset's jacket. You do know that her two jackets have very distinct appearances, right? I mean, for one thing, her second jacket has the same orange marks on the upper sleeves as her second boots. Also, the torso area is shorter in length.

But other than that, good story you wrote.

I don't think that sundress works with the jacket, jeans, and boots.

Short and sweet. I like it! :twilightsmile:

You should change the Rarity tag for the new Rarity(EQG) tag

I think she looks great!

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