Even though she now likes Pears ever since she learned her mother was one, she never thought she herself would fall for one. She thought it was impossible.
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Creativa-Artly01
Epileptic-autistic eldest of four, artist, creative, and horse crazy girl who is obsessed with entertainment media and history among other things.
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I"ve got to admit, the premise is pretty good. And small AJ love story, it could be a nice sweet shot thing. But it did feel pretty rushed. They just talked and fell in love? And the chats between the characters sound a bit too formal. Especially since these are the Apples. I could understand AJ being more formal with her crush, but that's all I've got. Nice continuity with Sugar Belle though! Did you see the cameo of her in 'The Perfect Pair' with Big Mac? Not to mention, Mac's name is Mac, not Mack. Anyways, I'll just keep an eye out for this one just cause of the premise. Take this to heart, and I hope to see you soon!
Why are these chapters all so small? This is gonna be a pain to read.
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I'm working on making bigger chapters. Just be patient.
Wouldn’t AJ falling for a pear be considered incest? I know it would be distant but still.
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Well, there's probably some all throughout the apple family tree as they're all earth ponies. Let's just be fair (and realistic).
When will you update this story
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Just published the newest chapter.
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The chapter is good.
When is the next chapter coming out?
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Gonna write it now actually.
Thanks
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http://labgenvet.ca/en/horse-genetics-4-0-evolution-breeds-breeding-strategies-and-inbreeding/
Also inbreeding is more common in horses (especially amongst horse athletes/racehorses). There is precedence.