• Member Since 12th Sep, 2013
  • offline last seen January 28th

RabidTonberry


Yo, I'm a mid-twenties guy living in the Mid-West of America. I love the taste of a good IPA, or Stout, and nothing can beat a good bottle of Whiskey especially Rye.

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Brief glimpses into the life of Scootaloo and her new Dad King Sombra.



Now contains traces of a plot
Will I ever explain how they ended up together?
Probably not

Chapters (6)
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Comments ( 33 )

I liked how awkward Sombra acted around NM and how he couldn't see that it was Luna in disguise. I also found Derpy's interaction to be funny. You get a like and a fav.

sweetie it was a potion not a drug.... i think.

*sees description and goes "Wut!?"*

Riddled with errors and the pacing is rushed. Still, this is pretty amusing. Focus a bit more on the technical side and you're going to be fine.

Please...make more...its just too fantastic

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Don't worry there will be more. The next chapter has already been started actually, but I got another story I promised to update next. So I don't know when it will be out.

6132358 Glad you like it, now just don't get upset when I end up not updating for three months. Which might happen...I'm a very slow writer. :twilightblush:

6135274 Do not worry, i know you will do it when you are ready. :D

This sounds like it would be improved greatly if it was written like a proper story and had a backstory on when,where,how and why sombra adopted scotaloo

i think im jesus cos i started tracking this story yesterday and it was updated the next day

Man, Lyra is really a match for Sombra if she can nonchalantly ignore the fact that he traumatized DT and SS along with hearing how he learned black magic. I love this pairing so much.

This chapter wasn't bad.
It was hilarious.
I would say the part about what he did to DT and SS is what made me laugh the most, but after CotLM, it's kind of hard for me to find any torment they're put through hilarious.
Lyrra's reaction to it is kind of amusing, though.

And now my death threat *cough* MAKE MORE CHAPTERS OR ELSE I SHALL HUNT YOU DOWN FOR ALL ETERNITY AND CURSE YOU WITH THE CURSE OF THE ANCIENTS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:flutterrage::twilightangry2::pinkiecrazy: Deal?:scootangel:

Next chapter in 2016? The hell? Threat it is 'clears throat'-





I got nothing

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Don't worry I will be making more chapters I'm just very busy with other things at the moment. I already have the next chapter planned out. I just probably get around to typing it out till Januaryish.

5631250 I was under the impression he was just playing along until the end.

Wait, is Luna...jealous? :rainbowlaugh:

The date was great. I especially liked how Discord, Scootaloo, and Celestia spied on the date and that threesome joke.

Who is that 1 dick that disliked this!?!:facehoof:

Aku

Hmm, so you're not supposed to go naked on the first date?

If you don't update this I'll kill you.:trixieshiftleft:



Very good story keep going.

I applaud you my good sir, good stuff!

Honestly, I wouldn't be surprised if Scootaloo was genuinely good at gambling in cannon.

And I also wouldn't be surprised if it turned out that Changeling run restaurants actually exist in Equestria.

...... This story has my interest peaked. Well done, mon ami x3

I like this a lot so far. Hope to eventually see more. In the meantime though, imma like and track.

I enjoyed all the fiction, keep going the good work. XD

Will this ever be continued?

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