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A great start to what will likely be an amazing story.
Edit: I'm surprised I'm not only the first to comment, but the first to up vote, too. Cool.
i like her... i like her a lot... good new fic from an epic author
You've done it again, an amazing story so far. Cheers!
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on her mane on
Dispose of the quotation mark.
within the hive mind
A quiet what?
Various what? (Also, this might be present in AotH V)
to each other
Heated groans of delight left
...is... is Chitin... slowly discovering the more emotional sides to sex... ON HER OWN?
Does Antecedence mean nothing to you anymore?
There alot of sex in this... Maybe too much. Kinda takes away from the story.
One dislike so far. I bet it was a unicorn nobleman.
So much SEX! But still a great story to read.
Commence read.
Excessive, indeed so.
Wondering how else Chitin shall go about future situations, without defaulting to sex.
You can't really blame the writer for putting a lot of sex scenes in a changeling story. For one they feed on love or lust and the easiest one to come across is lust. Another thing is that these changelings are still getting used to "civilized" life I'd suppose you'd call it that. There's common place things for every pony species that don't bother them if anybody else sees, and for changelings its sex. Ok, with my rant out of the way, my opinion on the story. It's very good. Sure, lots of sex, "big deal", but overall the story was completely enjoyable. I'd like to see more chapters, and I'm also going to go back and read this series from the beginning since you said this was a story based off another one you wrote. So...yeah....I guess that's it for now
5243788 Nah m8
5244183 It's based off a series that is not up to volume five. So there's like... two novels worth of stuff there to read through
You're also quite correct about the changelings and sex.
I put in plenty of casual references to sex to illustrate specifically that they are like that. Especially without guidance!
5244201 I'm reading the first volume now and I'm completely hooked. Good thing it's the weekend and I have all of today and tomorrow to read it. I'm a really fast reader when something really interests me so it won't take long for me to zoom through it. Surprisingly I can still easily remember details even when I read so fast
I know this is a long shot but, does anyone recognise the Egyptian symbol on the cover art that a stoner guy wore in the British tv programme 'The young ones'?
So, will these chapters be released at the same time as the volume 5 chapters, or just whenever they happen to come out?
Edit: Also, this cover art confuses me. I thought only changeling queens had manes, and the rest just had frills. Or has Chitin altered herself to give herself a mane?
5244321 ?? The Ankh?
Cheacky
You
Me
God
It
I didn't realize there was another story up! But I suppose you did mention that it would happen when you began the other fic. Great story!
Say, is there a, y'know... fuller version of that cover pic?
5245006 On derpibooru
It's pretty goddamn awesome.
The artist is Derpah.
*snerk* woodworking...
5245044 I've noticed that you praise Derpah quite a bit... Is it because of the Fanart?
5245253 I've paid for every picture he's drawn for me
I'e followed him since he started drawing pony, and he's my favorite pone artist. Gawd, he just draws the softest, smoothest ponies <3
5245264 yeah, I've seen his work xD and if you didn't click the fanart link, do it (the link is safe and goes to derpibooru)
5245006 Yes, yes there is.
This is the changing story I've always wanted! Thank you!
When she was still speaker, I thought she was going to be the most civilized, I was so incredibly wrong.
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...I have a changeling OC of the exact same name... Except the character is male and the concept is quite different. Oh well, I suppose it doesn't matter that much.
5244390 yes
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I cant control my horny level.
Woah Woah Woah, a Sequel? Why was I only informed by the Home Page of this?!?
Oh yes, very good. Once more, exemplary work, my dear Anonymous!
That was a... very strong start to a story.
Interesting. Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work. Deus tecum.
well at least the stallions arent having a hard time with the changeling integration
Talk about starting things off with a bang.
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Wow, for 5000 words, that was dense with both smut and world-building. I eagerly anticipate more chapters!
5247747
Alright Chris Hansen
I see what you did there.
Advantages of being a changeling: free, painless ear piercing!
Also, hawt stuff. Will follow.
Mini rant: it's catching, not "cottoning". I don't even think that's a word in the context you use it.....
Rant aside, this was fun. Seems Chitin got a head start taking the role of Speaker. Think maybe down the line she'll become a Royal?
Keep going! ;)
5255028 I'm
Sorry
I
Can't
Hear
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Me
Being
Right