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TittySparkles


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I rather enjoyed the headcanon provided in this.

~Skeeter The Lurker

It's out ☺

It may be well written, but I think I'll skip it. It's a shame it's not lesbians.

Hmm, interesting take on the spring ... thing. Rogue Changelings running an orphanage ... interesting possibilities ...

Have an upvote, if nothing else for intriguing ideas. Though I always thought the changeling 'breeders' were the green eyed monsters.

No hard feelings, but your seriously pushing the limits on the no nsfw cover art rule here:twilightoops:
Many clop fics have been doing that lately for some reason.

“Oh no you don’t. You either have sex with me or I’ll make sure you get sent up to the Canterlot prisons!” Twilight snapped back as she lit up her horn and grabbed a hold of his curved horn and pushed his head against the ground.

Yeah, bye.

4919386 not just relevant. It's the idea behind this fic

4919265 Lesbians make everything better.

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Hah! I came to post this as soon as I read the title but I got beat to it.

Heat? Gotta go find some random dick to use as a warm dildo?
No thanks.

I was about to propose Bad Luck Brian demot for this changeling.

Then things turned around.

Then the orphanage was mentioned and things suddenly got very creepy (because of one of the stories I read earlier, but even mentioning its name her would be a spoiler)

I know its a commissioned one shot clop but for some reason I want to read more pan and twi:rainbowlaugh:

Anyway great story and stay awesome^^

Is hawt. Liking approved:twilightsmile:

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If it doesn't violate site rules then there's nothing wrong with it.

4919471 Nah man, they're just hugging.

“Am I? Just because I’m a princess doesn’t mean I won’t hurt you. Plus you wouldn’t be the first creature I harmed with magic,” Twilight replied in a confident voice, vaguely remembering her encounter with Tirek some time ago. “Now, I’ll repeat my offer: You do this willingly and I’ll let you go free. You have my word.”

“Stupid mare,” Pan hissed angrily before his frown went away. “But fine, I’d rather not be raped by you.”

With the consent given, Twilight sighed and relaxed her body slightly.

Sorry, this stopped me cold. That's not consent. That's not in the same universe as consent.

If you want to write a rape scene, write a rape scene. That's some people's fetish or something; whatever. But to take a rape scene and then pretend everything is on the level is just not cool.

I wonder if the Diamond dogs get to have any fun.:pinkiehappy:

Pony- "I would like to adopt a foal"
Changeling- "Alright you can have this one."
Pony- "How did Diamond Tiara end up here? Also NO WAY"
Changeling- "To late you already signed the paper work." Pony then looks to see themselves with the paper work filed out.:twilightoops::twilightangry2:

It ended a bit abruptly and strangely, but I liked it.

Needs a sequel.:twilightsmile:

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Then that must be one hell of a hug

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Thank you both. Your comments gave me sufficient advance warning that I'm going to spare myself this story, and in the process, spare this story a downvote.

One more thing, why is there no warning that this a rape story, I mean for gods sake, Twilight is forcing the MC to have sex with her and she THREATENS to imprison him just because she's in the heat and he doesn't want to screw her.

Not to mention, Twilight is a total bitch in this story, like every mare in every heat in equestria story ever, in which most of the time, like I mentioned before, the mares, as in all of them, act like sex crazy rapist lunatics super bitch's.

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Yeah, gotta agree with you, there. I started out thinking that this was pretty alright, and then Twilight quickly becomes a total cunt with the "have sex with me, tell me where you're hiding out, and rat out your surviving brothers and sisters or I'll have you thrown in prison" line. After that whole grey area of dubious consent, part of me was hoping he'd just take a brick or his hoof to Twilight's face and hope for the best.

Kinda made it hard for me to enjoy the story after that. It was very annoying, but I won't give it a downvote for it. It's still fairly well-written.

Congratulations on getting my first ever downvote on this site. And it's not just because it's a clopfic. It's because it's a rape clopfic. He may have given his consent, but he was forced to do it. Whichever way you spin that, it's rape. Clop, I dislike... Rape, I absolutely dispise. I think that anybody who gets off to rape is sick, and needs to have their head checked. Not only does Twilight rape Pan in this fic, she then decides to put him and all the other changelings in the town in charge of an Orphanage. A building filled with screaming, homeless children without any families? No thank you. I honestly would prefer prison. Sure, the reasoning for Pan accepting it is feasible, but I bet that she only offered it to him and the other Changelings, because no pony wants that duty.

I did, however, feel as though this story was well-written, and the writing was the only reason I kept reading it to the end, not the content.
I understand that this being a commission, that the author isn't responsible for the content in this story, but the commissioner. And so, this comment is not directed at the Author, but to the person who commissioned this story. I really didn't enjoy this storyline, and the whole idea behind it, is in my opinion, one of, if not the most fucked up things I've ever read.

I'm sorry that I'm ranting a little bit, and I apologize for the harshness of this comment, but that's how I feel about this story, and I honestly wish that there was more positive other than "The writing was decent", but there's nothing that comes to mind.

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Too true. I agree.

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Ya, sure, let's badger at people who write fiction with controversial topics. I mean, if a person writes or reads about rape, he must be a rapist, yes?

Why do people feel inclined to be the knight of good morals and comment on something they don't like just to make sure the author is aware at how disgusted they are at them?

'But this is rape, this is serious, it's a problem in the real world!'

Well, so is murder, corruption and injustice in general. These themes are prevalent in every media you come in touch with. Hell, there are movies in which there are rape scenes.

I personally prefer someone choosing to express their perversion in writing than on the street. This is all make believe, mate. It's not a scenario or review of a real rape scene. It's a perfectly acceptable work of art, which you find disgusting. Look at the upvotes. Look at the reads and favorites. So many people understand that. Why can't you?

And besides the point above, this is HARDLY rape. In the end he enjoyed it and was NOT traumatized by the experience, getting a lot more than what he bargained for.

And I think that the orphanage is the perfect place for changelings to satiate their needs. I applaud Twilight for having an open mind and thinking outside the stuffy little box you seem to be trapped in. She not only managed to find ponies who would be willing to take care of the less fortunate, she also found a way for changelings to be useful and maybe begin their way towards redeeming themselves.

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I'm curious, did you read all of my last comment, or just the first paragraph? Because in the second paragraph, I said:

I understand that this being a commission, that the author isn't responsible for the content in this story, but the commissioner. And so, this comment is not directed at the Author

I agree that it is better that rape is played out fictionally in stories and other media, but that still doesn't make it okay. Rape, fictional or not, is still rape, and it is one of my biggest prejudices. Anything that has anything to do with it really gets on my nerves.

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Then why expose yourself to it? Unless someone drove your face to the monitor and forced the lecture down your throat, I see absolutely no sense in downvoting the fic, which is showing the author you dislike what he wrote simply because you have prejudice about the subject matter.

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right here, i can see a simple case. There's no trigger warnings. I had no clue rape was involved in this fic until you two brought it up, as I haven't read it. So downunda likely thought as i did, a simple clopfic with no big triggers. So he read it, and found there to be rape in it. He wasn't made aware.

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Problem is there is no rape :facehoof: It ends up being consensual. If anything, I'd call it powerplay.

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I read it because I try to be objective about anything I read. And when I start to read something, even if I despise what it is, I don't stop until I finish. I try to keep an open mind about almost everything, but Rape is one of those few things that I will not be quiet about. Even if it's fictional. You mentioned Rape scenes being in Television and movies, and you're right. They are, and I really despise anything that portrays Rape. Unless the end result is the Rapist getting what they deserve, being several years in a penitentiary. If not more. More often than not, anything that portrays rape, doesn't show the rapist getting any sort of repercussions for their actions, and I think that that's just wrong. It's almost saying that if you rape, you can get off scott-free. Just like Twilight in this story. She's not going to be punished for what she did to Pen. Sure, he might have been enjoying it at the end, but he was still forced into something that he didn't want to do, and if you were in his hooves, you'd feel violated and used.

I may be just reading too much into a story based off of a kid's show about talking ponies, and I know that this is completely fictional, and it never happened, but I still feel that Twilight should have some punishment for what she did. If Pen was an equally sexually-active pony, and he was fully consenting to it, then I wouldn't have a problem with this story, but the fact that this isn't the case is why I have a problem with it.

You're entitled to your opinions, and if you feel that this sort of stuff is fine, I might not agree with it completely. but that's your opinion. I'm entitled to my opinion, and I've given it, along with my reasoning for it.

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Have it your way *shrugs*

I guess it depends on your tolerance. As far as I'm concerned, it was power-play with a happy ending.

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You say "Power Play" But how did Twilight get him to participate in the first place? She threatened to throw him in jail, for all we know, forever. She blackmailed him, and she threatened to have her way with him regardless. I'm sorry, but this is Rape any way you spin it. Anyway, I'm done for tonight. Any future replies will be ignored. Like I've said, You have your opinions, I have mine.

4922729 That's not consensual, that's coercion.

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I really didn't enjoy this storyline, and the whole idea behind it, is in my opinion, one of, if not the most fucked up things I've ever read.

If you think this is one of the most fucked up thing you've ever read, then I think you need to harden up a bit there, hun.

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And besides the point above, this is HARDLY rape. In the end he enjoyed it and was NOT traumatized by the experience, getting a lot more than what he bargained for.

It's not stories about rape that start the comment avalanche. It's dangerous misunderstandings like the ones I quoted here and above, and the problematic attitudes behind them.

Twilight forced him into sex with both physical and legal threats. Period. Full stop.

If you truly believe that forced sex can magically become not-rape just because of A) sexual pleasure and/or B) post-coital gifts from the rapist, please stay far away from women before you ruin someone's life and get yourself thrown in jail.

The line here is clear. If you want to write a rape scene about fictional characters (and properly label it as rape), nobody is harmed. If you want to enjoy a rape scene about fictional characters, that's about what goes on inside your head, and I don't give a flying fuck. But if you want to argue that forced sex is not rape, that opinion has real-world consequences for our community — when people think rape is acceptable or certain kinds of rape "aren't really rape", it leads to real people getting hurt or leaving the fandom to avoid getting hurt. That is not okay.

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The changeling was given a choice. Sex or being handed to authorities, which she should have done to begin with. He's a changeling and according to what we gather from the world-descrption, they are at least being treated to a trial-less sentence of jail or worse. Twilight is evil because she spared a fugitive and enemy of the state.

You're right, having near-consensual sex while being hunted and having to struggle with day to day survival is so much worse. Let's call it 'rape' when the world is clearly portrayed as men having it really tough during the heat period, hinting on forceful sex during that period being the norm.

Let's disregard the story-world, let's totally apply these weird rules to our real world and call people sick bastards for enjoying it. We surely couldn't just enjoy it for what it is, no, what matters is that his first instinct wasn't to attack or agree to have sex which could expose him as a changeling.

As the previous guy said - you have your point of view, and I have mine. The ladies are fine around me, and my boyfriend is happy. End of story.

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Completely not related to horses,

but have you ever seen a cat in heat?

They're evil, fucked up little rapists!

That is all. :moustache:

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Are you trying to argue that it's not rape when the victim is a fugitive of the law? Like if you found an illegal immigrant and told them "blow me or I'll call INS on you", that would be okay? Just to be clear

I really don't care about fictional rape; hell I get off to it. But all this effort in here to try and call rape not-rape is kind of funny.

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I never said that any of this way okay to begin with. It's just a premise to this particular story.

And answering your question, how is it rape? The person clearly has a choice. They can either agree to have sex or be imprisoned. Just because they are moron enough to be a fugitive, that's their deal. No one is forcing him/her to choose one thing over the other. That's called powerplay, taking advantage of someone while being in position of power to do what you want, in this case satiate Twilight's natural desire.

The only reason people keep replying is because this is about sex. If this was about murdering the changeling, eating it's flesh or making it do house chores till the day it died no one would bat an eyelid.

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According to a number of states' laws, a "power play" used to receive sex is also known as rape. So, borderline, but it's there.

Besides, that's not all she did. She threatened him with physical violence, and that makes it totally rape.

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> The changeling was given a choice …

Hissing at Twilight and thinking about his options, Pan started to realize that he had no choice in the matter. As much as he loathed the idea of fucking a pony in heat, he valued his life more than anything.

Being given a choice between sex or loss of life/liberty/etc is the literal legal definition of lack of consent. Don't take it from me, take it from penal code (link goes to New York's, but your local jurisdiction is likely to be identical). The term for it is "forcible compulsion". So, yes, let's totally apply these "weird rules" to our real world — because those are the actual rules that law enforcement uses.

> … and call people sick bastards for enjoying it
I argued exactly the opposite. You're confusing me with 4922524.

This shit is tame compared to some of the stuff I've read. Chuckfinley's The Sunday Session involves skin-crawling physical violence, and I upvoted it. Chapter 8 of theycallmejub's Eyes Without A Face is … oh, god, I can't even summarize it, and yet EWAF is on my userpage recommendations. Dude, I'm right there in the sick-bastard pit with you. (Seriously, go check those stories out; they're both excellent.)

The difference is that this story is trying to pretend that rape is not actually rape — the sentence that stopped me was the narrator stating that Twilight had obtained consent. That is explicitly contradicted by the text. She heard a "no" and then literally beat up her victim until he changed his mind.

Are you really defending that behavior? Think carefully about this, and remember that "Twilight raped him but I enjoyed the story anyway" is an acceptable answer.

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Okay, if you put it that way.

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