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GeodesicDragon


I'm just an ordinary Scotsman who writes ordinary stories, not all of which are of the self-insert variety.

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Princess Celestia has met many individuals whom she could call friends during her life. But given the fact she does not age like they do, she cannot bring herself to be there when they pass on. Still grieving after being forced to banish her own sister to the moon, she cannot face the prospect of losing those close to her.

Anthony, however, is the last human in Equestria; he is also the next to go. Now Celestia is determined to face her fears so she can be with him at the end.

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Edi: t I take it back I have read it and indeed it fits into the geoverse sorry, I did not was it before. A good one shot, maybe you should build up your storyverse more with story's about the Equestrian Humans. But first finish the main stories that were already finished you can always edit small changes then later if new ideas come up.

Lets do this.

Edit: Is this a prequel to one of your stories? I'm sometimes a bit bad with details

Nice read :pinkiehappy: .

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This story is a prequel to the Geoverse. I've added sequel information to reflect this.

it touched my heart.

Celestia can only keep her usual face for so long. :fluttershysad:

Good story!:twilightsmile:

3954313 i still haven't started reading the geoverse stories. I planned to do it, i planed it long ago but i still haven't even started. This will change this night. I shall download the txt files and read them in my bed.

I have yet to read the Geoverse, and honestly it never interested me at least till now, but the summary got me in.

After seeing those blasted human-slave fics this a breath of fresh air. You did good with this, capturing Celestia perfectly, and showing humanity at its best.

Concordia Invicta
Celestia's Paladin

As a person who shares the name of the human...feels

"So even it takes a hundred years, or even a thousand, you will be able to see again all the friends you've lost."

Do you mean "So even if it takes a hundred years"?

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I did. Thanks for noticing! :twilightsmile:

That was a great story:pinkiehappy:

Good story. With the ending at first i saw like what the hell a cliffhanger on a one shot; then I saw some comments about this being part of the geoverse. So now I have to read more tonight and by have to I mean get to.

Hey bud! Anthony is my first name dude! Wow! That description is what caught my eye, especially when I saw my name! :rainbowlaugh: I may have to give this a read now! lol!

i read this story listening to this

and i cryed my eyes out great job on this story.

I won't lie to you, the story was good and some what sad,. But the very last line

I didn't know it at the time, but this letter would ultimately end up changing my life forever.

is a good indication for a sequel even though you tagged this as a One shot.

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But... there is a sequel.

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This is the prequel to the entire Geoverse series. You can find a link to Part One in the 'Sequels' box on the right-hand side of the page.

Play this during his final moments...the combination made me cry so hard.....

My sequel sense is tingling....

I'd say you're alright at writing sad stories, a tear was shed in this story. :ajsmug:
... :ajsleepy:
...Okay, let's say atleast more than one tear was shed. :scootangel:

3960920 Lol! this comment made me laugh so hard! :rainbowlaugh:

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There is a sequel. See the box on the right of the page.

It's an interesting idea. Not entirely canon-compliant in terms of Equestria's known history but that's part of the point of fan-fiction, isn't it? I suppose this is, in a way, nothing but a single-scene story about when it was Celestia realised just what it meant to be functionally immortal in a mortal world and the losses it would inevitably bring her.

Not so bad although far from brilliant.

Enough to send a nail in my emotional coffin.
Which is more than can be said for most.

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Never mind the fact the sequel is also the first story I ever wrote. :trollestia:

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I wrote this as part of the rewrite of said sequel, since I felt a bit more backstory was required. :twilightsmile:

"It's... it's happening."

This was probably supposed to be dramatic, but all I can see is Ron Paul and lasers. So there's some mood whiplash here.

Comment posted by IAMCHEEZY deleted Feb 22nd, 2014

Why did I have to read this. Now I feel like re-reading the geoverse main stories. Never really enjoyed some of the side-stories for some reason.

Thank you Geo just thank you.

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Thank you, but I have to ask... What for? :twilightsheepish:

4117178 For being one of those who helps me to remember that not all humans are self-centered, sick minded, anarchists. I really need that sometimes, also thank you for the inspiration in joining this site and writing my story.:yay:

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I have to admit that I did follow the 'Humans Are Bastards' theory when I first started writing. But then I remembered that we are indeed capable of doing good things.

Also, people complained about it. :rainbowlaugh:

And you're welcome for the inspiration.

4117228 I'm trully grateful to you Geo, and to Greatodyer you guys got me to read HiE in the first place, and that's what I'm writing for better or worse that's what I'll do, just help me to stay honest with myself will ya? It's hard to see the good behind all of the ugly things to many of us do.

Dawwwww. That's so sweet and sad at the same time.:applecry::rainbowkiss:

This was sad but good. Thank you for the story Geo. :rainbowdetermined2:

4117228 hay I know that I have been talk info to you today but pony vill didn't exist till to generations befor twilight happed and neither did cantorlot I do t know how you can possibly change or fix or whatever it but I know you can. Anthony. Rest in piece(es) humans are basterds lol:rainbowlaugh:

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My universe, my rules. :trollestia:

4575502 got a point... Athou pony vill is to small to be more than three generation s old:rainbowderp:

Well I just read my first Geouniverse story and I have to say I'm intrigued.
The Leroverse/ Xenophilia is one of my favorites so it's gonna be interesting to see how this universe compares.

Now onward to the next Geo story!

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Geoverse, not Geouniverse. :derpytongue2:

onto the story....nice preamble there, it was worthy ;P

A SEQUEL IS DEMANDED :flutterrage:

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It has already been mentioned in the Author's Note at the bottom of the chapter that a sequel exists.

Sad, but the fulfilling type of sad. Thank you for writing this.

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