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Being the only human in Equestria can be a bit daunting at times, but it gets much easier when you have friends there to support you. But, as the days go on, I start to realize that maybe I need something more in my life. I've never been in a situation like this before, but all I know is that I want to see where it goes.
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Oh, a rare HumanXPinkie. This is like a needle in a haystack, considering that Pinkie is the least shipped pony in the mane 6.
Well, this is oughta be interesting.
I admit I'm a fan of this pink pony finally find a romance fic with pinkie
Ooh, now this is interesting. I faved.
Frankly I admire you for doing this even though you don't like Pinkie yourself. It's definately a bold move. As it stands, I like it so far, and I'll like and fave the story so as I can see how everything turns out.
Cool to see pinkie in a love story.
I really want to see more
Waitwaitwait...
Is this a pinkieXhuman romance fic?
There is seriously a shortage of romance fics concerning a lovable pink mare and a human. ^^
OMG a
love story whit a human this is rare.... so here have a pony.derpicdn.net/img/2013/9/6/420355/large.png
omg pinkie/hum fic! yesh
Pretty good. I like the story so far overall, but there are some errors with runon sentences and poor comma usage. Additionally, there are a couple events that I wish were expanded upon: Rarity asking Anon to disrobe, his first experience with Gummi, learning that Rainbow is into mares, et cetera. Bringing the events up in as little detail as you did somewhat cheapens the world you're creating.
P:S: If you can only elaborate on one of the events, I really want to know how Anon learned Rainbow was a lesbian. It sounds like either a really touching or really hilarious (or both) story.
I love Human X Pinkie romance
I dunno what it is but it's WAY cuter than any other ship
Great first chapter, surprising you actually dislike pinkie and still working on a romance story with her.
I love the interactions of anon and spike and hope to see more.
As well as RD, actually from all the characters I like the characterizations you have on them very well done and enjoyable.
[popularity intensifies]
Quick tip; A lot of people will choose not to read this purely because there are spelling errors in the description. Gives the impression that your writing is really low-level. just thought you should know =)
because i love the song im going to check this one out
How come nobody told me surprize was the US spelling of the word?
Other than that, good fic so far. Much better written than a lot of stuff out there.
It's me, Fluttershy. Anon
Fixed that for you.
HumanXPinkie?
Not clop?
Well, shit. 'Bout fucking time this happened.
Alright! Amazing story, mate! I really wish I could be Anon right now. I want to live in Equestria! I'm so favouriting this!
It is kinda odd that this kind of ship is as rare as it is, since to me she seems like the most likely to end up in a relationship with a human.
I like how this looks so far. I'll be favoriting this for later chapters.
I will, however, make a point of how there's quite a few spelling and grammar errors. I don't normally try to make a fuss about that, but I figured i'd make a point of it anyway.
Ok I like it so far, you set up a good first chapter. I kinda know what you mean about Pinkie being annoying, but I've always wanted to see a good Romance fic with her in it. I feel like too many people focus on how funny she can be and ignore the fact that she's still just a pony. She can get mad, sad, lonely. I feel like this has the potential to become a very good fic. Either way can't wait for the next chapter!
What's it with every HiE story calling Rainbow Dash skittles?
Oh d'well. Nice story, just a tad bit disappointed about the tenses getting mixed up, but a great story none-the-less!
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Really? I dont see anything wrong with it. Then again I'm still learning english, so it would help if you tell me what's wrong in it.
If I were to be completely honest, this chapter felt like a "let's get all that boring backstory stuff out of the way" type of deal. It's not bad, it just feels a little rushed.
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If you ended up in Equestria, wouldn't you?
3667078 If I ended up in Equestria it would most likely be burning by some accidential gas inferno. Simply 'Cause I got trolled every time I am about to make one-liners.
That didn't make sense, did it?
Herp Derp.
P.S.: I would be more likely to call her a sour jujube worm, one way or another.
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You just missed a word; "I never been in a situation like this". Insert "have" after "I".
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Yep, that's the internet all right. I don't make the rules!
But to be fair, it's probably because everyone who spends time on a site like this is either a hardcore reader or a writer. A story can still be engaging even if the characters are not acting within their established persona, but a spelling error can be really disruptive to the flow, and is especially jarring if it is in an otherwise enjoyable story.
I am sad to say that i have had to drop stories in the past because the errors made it impossible for me to properly immerse myself in the story, even through the plot was creative and it had a humorous and exiting story line.
I'm just saying it's a shame to let something like that drag down a good story, and it is definitely worth spending a little time finding a good editor or two now, and make sure you story gets off to a proper start
I like it 4 gingers
out of five
Oh God, I couldn't stop laughing and smiling. Please keep this up, I'm very interested
The name Anon is the most uninspired uncreative lazy name to ever occur in fan fiction. The writing is solid and enjoyable, but I cannot read another story of anon. It pulls me out of the experience. Sorry.
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Really? How about I change the name to John Doe? Would that make you feel better?
3669083 Any name is better than Anon since it is not a real name. You might as well named him rock or tree. Also no it would not make me feel better. Write your story to please you, not me. The only reason I said anything is I never thumbs down without telling why.
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Well I think the fact you thumbs down a story because of a name is rather moronic to be perfectly frank. Maybe you don't understand why I use the name Anon? It's not because I lack creativity, in fact to think that while reading my fanfic should seem a little redundant. Anyone can think of names, hell anyone can google them. Now the reason why I use the name Anon is because he is in fact you, he is me, he is anyone really. Without something as absolute as Rick, Tom, John, Anon remains an unknown. Maybe he has traits you have, Maybe he thinks like you, maybe he is you? That is why I use the name Anon, it is a way to make the reader feel something more for the story, even if it doesn't seem like much, I know in my mind it is enough to make a difference.
So to down vote it soley for my name choice.. Shame on you.
3669182 Shame on me? I have the right to down vote any story for any reason. There is a little thing in entertainment called suspension of disbelief this is what you fail in by naming your OC Anon. I understand you reason for naming him Anon and like I have already said its uninspired and lazy.
I just have to say that the sentence structure and general grammatical style kind of mad this painful to read for me. Though, nobody else seems to be complaining so maybe its just me? Other than that though the story seems ok, I considered giving a downvote but I decided against it because of this.
Regardless, good luck with that whole "mastering the language with the most fluid and eccentric sentence structure and word order protocol" thing.
Cheers, Null
P.S.
I'm not going to lie, thats just cold dude.
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I never said you didnt have the right to downvote this story. I was simply stating that your reasons for down voting it are petty at best.
3669386 I'm sorry you see it that way. I don't consider causing a reader to experience disconnect petty. I wish you luck with the rest of your story.
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I'm just going to agree with this, I do not see "Anon" as a self-insert, I just don't, "Anon" is an absolute bundle of 4-chan mess.
It's not so much of a disconnect, as it never connects in the first place, and I end up thinking "Who in Equestria is actually named Anon, why is he okay with this name? Seriously..."
I have issues with the "name", such as it is, and they are by no means confined to this fic. Anon is the lack of a name, and I don't think it should be used as a name, I would be much happier if he were called something like "David".
I assure you, I have the imagination to insert myself into Anon's shoes if I so choose, regardless of what his name is.
Additionally, the story is way way too run together, it's like I'm reading an endless summary where everything is glossed over as rapidly as possible.
Holy shit that's my name!
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FACT: The character who gets turned into Rainbow Dash's ORGINAL HUMAN name was Annon. Just thought it was interesting to know.
You misspelled best. As in best pony.
Edit: Internet snarkiness aside, I'd like to say how impressed I am that you are doing something outside of your comfort zone. So I did. Anyway, please continue.
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And I have a cousin called Anon. Was a mistake on his borth certificate, he was supposed to be called Aron.
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I guess he must have a blast reading AiE strories.
--Sollace
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He's not a brony sadly
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Sadly.
They will all be assimilated... someday.
Well, I've gotten to reading this. Sorry to say I didn't finish it. It's very nicely written, but is just not the type of story I can get into. The plot seems to progress very slowly.
Of what I did read I'm happy to say was mostly mistake free except for these few I noticed.
Missing an 'is' here.
'grin' should be singular.
Missing a 'have' here.
--Sollace The Bearded