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Cola_Bubble_Gum
I'm an irritating fangirl who also writes. A lot of my stuff is sad. I am sometimes overly sex-positive, so if you are sex-negative, I might have called you an elitist taint jockey. Sorry about that.
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Firsties!
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Fisties!
And now for a legitimate comment.
I'm liking what I read so far. This is gonna be a interesting story to see...
Especially if there's come TwiLuna in this...
~Skeeter The Lurker
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This is one of the rare times I'm posting a first chapter without knowing how long it's going to be, or some of the major plot details. So, well, if this doesn't work out, sorry about that!
Hopefully it does.
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Nothing wrong with that.
This be a solid start to it all.
~Skeeter The Lurker
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How's this for a 'legitimate comment'
I think this is a fine introduction to what could become a genre defining clop fic, the kind that does away with shameless sex and adds dramatic depth and weight to the characters and situations they find themselves in.
Keep up the great work cola!
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Better. No stupid 'first' comment.
That's a bannable offense, I think...
~Skeeter The Lurker
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I got my first two downvotes on this! Lovely.
Well, just wait until the foalcon chapter. I should get a bazillion.
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Better be careful. Knighty has ears all over the place :-p
LONG LIVE THE QUEEN
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WON'T SOMEONE THINK OF THE FOALS
I laughed way too hard at that
Anyway, this is an interesting idea, and you have certainly got my attention. Favourited and I look forward to watching this unfold
Who could it be? Celestia? Luna? Chrysalis?
What the f
!? BLASPHEMY!
Oh, they are just having fun? Well, that is different, then, is it not?
It was all a wet dream? Damn, well I should have saw it coming from the description.
Since when does the sun come up at midnight?
Overly omniscient narrator is overly omniscient. All you need is an ellipses (...), and to remove the quotation marks from between the period and the A.
This phrase is oddly worded.
I suppose when you are talking about Celestia, it would be really awkward to say, "Celestia knows."
You need a space between the period and the I.
Considering the nature of this story, this line, is hilarious.
Rainbow Dash is best Butthead, however, this is Twilight's version of Dash. Is that how she really sees Rainbow, or is her sex addled brain clouding her perception? Poor Twiliy, how long before her... whatever the mare version of blue balls is, how long before that will be cured?
Pretty interesting story so far. I look forward to reading more. Even though there was no... release you still deserve an ahegao, have a Twilight, in hopes of her future... relief.
As Winston Churchill said, "KBO."
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The original opening was borderline horror that turned into rape. I altered it so I can save the rape dreams for later. (Literally.)
As for the goddess/Celestia thing, honestly, I figure it's a figure of speech so often used, and Twilight's so stressed, she wouldn't realize she was saying it that way.
Time! Oh god, time. Okay. Look, I know this is going to sound insane, but -- there's an eight-hour "day" in Equestria. There's not a transition into night and day, like we have. So there's a clean break. Eight hours of day, eight hours of night. Day starts at one, noon is four, up is down, black is white! I know, it hurts my head too, but it's the only way I could reconcile the way they show time and day working on the show. If you have better suggestions, I'm all ears. I considered just pretending they had our day/night cycle but that seemed incongruous with, y'know, Luna and Celestia being directly involved.
I'm glad you liked it, despite the flaws. I'll go fix the typos soon.
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Also, that's like the only thing Dash says in the chapter. I just realized that now.
Glad you liked it, and I hope future chapters don't disappoint!
This is interesting. Will be following this story.
Is it too early to think that Spike will show up in one or more of her dreams/nightmares.
3390429 Your time concept is... intriguing
. However, you may have to find a way to cleverly work an explanation about it into a future chapter, otherwise it may be confusing.
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Nope.
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I can probably manage it.
3390989 I am quite certain you can.
Yeah... that last dream is probably what she needs to fix her problem. Not dream repression or certainly not just repressing her emotions.
3389629 More like you'll get a bazillion up thanks to me and the Foalcon Army.
I just hope the foalcon chapter and the snuff chapter aren't hand in hand.
...Oh, no, I've given you ideas!
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OH WAIT, THEY DON'T EXIST.
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well... this is a story i need to follow up...
Oh good, that was just a dream. whew I was worried Spike was gonna miss out on an orgy. He will be in on one, right?
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That's a brilliant, brilliant fucking avatar. Seriously.
Now I have a terrible urge to write a Bebop/Angel/MLP crossover, where Spike, Spike, and Spike can all interact.
Spike's going to be in a future chapter. I don't think he's going to be in an orgy, tho.
3399717 So far I've only seen ine instance in which the Buffyverse Spike was in the story.
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I've had a long-standing fic idea that'll probably never get off the ground for an Angel/MLP crossover. Like, literally cross over -- the Angel gang in the mid-to-late fifth season gets dimensional again and lands in Equestria. Cue name jokes. "Spike?" "Yes, Twilight?" "Oi!" and "Oh, I have to feed Angel." "Heh, I thought you didn't know anyone here, you cheeky devil?" Probably have to let sunlight not hurt Angel in this case, because, well, Equestria and all, but yeah. Someday, maybe.
3401812 All those over-arcing names: Spike, Angel and Twilight have so much joke potential. Although Twilight was only featured in the comics and not the actual show. Also I'd rather forget Buffy season 8 ever happened...
3399717 Thanks!
Huzah! The Spike has been tripled!
This story is truly the first sip of a delicious ice cold glass of Cola.
I like it!
gives me chiiiiiiiiiillssssssss
I'm okay with this, but not the fact that it hasn't updated yet.
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Well, funny you should say that . . .
wow, just discovered this moments before you updated.
lol, twilight having chronic wet dreams that are developing a mind of their own...... persuming the gory stuff is still within the realms of her dreams, as whatever is causing this strange string of erotic narratives of the mind to continue grows...... worse maybe. also opens a lot of weird and or sexy scenarios to happen too.
clop with a narrative.. interesting.
actaully this reminds me of a narrative i was working with some time ago. it had pinkie pie beginning to have nightmares of her basically acting out pinkie pie slashfics. the grow icnreasingly more and more horrific to the point that she becomes convinced she will kill someone. she eventaully tries to kill herself, unwilling to let anyone harm her friends, hrself especially.
either way, very interested in how things progress. and figuring out why she is having strange, random wet dreams.
also like how you described luna's dream walking powers. while incapable of just knowing all the dreams, but able to sense the emotions of the dreamer. pretty how i understood it from that episode. like it.
I know the Romance tag isn't there, but I'm still pulling for a Twiluna
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There are Reasons! that have been worked out. I'm not sure how long this thing's gonna be, but I'm hoping to reveal most of the Big Reasons later in the game.
I'm glad you like it!
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Another excellent chapter! (Though I am disappointed twilight chose to end the dream)
I'm aiming this towards a Spilight.
Whether you like it or not."
She moves him out the room and now she's having sexual dreams/nightmares because of it. That and her body probably wants Spike, her mind is in denial to the idea, and her subconscious is like, "Fine! You keep cock blocking yourself, but I'm going to have everyone else you know fuck you in your sleep!
Good and interesting story. Keep it up!
3548947 nifty............
i gotta wonder how her friends would react if theyfound out she almost had a dream of them gangraping her...... noticed that you have also ensured that nothing lasted long enough for anything to happen.
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That won't always be the case. First chapter, my intent was to demonstrate a wide range of kinks were involved and lay out the premise. Second chapter, I needed to finish up with some heavy lifting for the story. Third chapter and onwards, I'm looking at a slower trickle of information about the outside circumstances and more information about Twilight's psyche and sexuality (i.e., more dream exploration).
Hopefully it won't disappoint!
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The NMM dream will eventually happen, but it would have destroyed a lot of tension to do it too early. Don't worry; I've got plenty of plans for awful things along the way.
3549236 when do you think the enxt chapter will materlize itself?
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This was a hard chapter, so hopefully less than a month for chapter three!
I like the premise here, but I feel the story would benefit if the chapters were longer. More breathing room and all that.
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It's a bit of an experiment, so they might get longer from time to time, but mostly I'm just trying to end them when it feels organic to the story.