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Cola_Bubble_Gum


I'm an irritating fangirl who also writes. A lot of my stuff is sad. I am sometimes overly sex-positive, so if you are sex-negative, I might have called you an elitist taint jockey. Sorry about that.

Comments ( 40 )

I love the notes section on this. "Woe to thee reader, if ye ask for more we shall smite thee."

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Hey, you said no trollfic. You didn't say I couldn't tease the reader. :twilightsmile:

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If this story was a human being I'd have scooped its eyes out with a grapefruit spoon by now. Seriously, I have grown to hate this story so much.

Blah, in a week or a month or something I'll probably be okay with it again. Dunno why it was such a pain to write. :unsuresweetie:

I have a boner. I seriously cannot think of anything else to say.

2843255 That's almost as bad (though it doesn't break the rules)

So I just need to knowhow old sweetie is in this? For it to be in the group.

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I don't really like using numbers for this stuff, personally; there's not really a consistent maturation process between horses and humans, and age is never made explicit on the show. My intent was to imply that she's just above the age of consent in Equestria, and I figure all the main characters are at or above the age of consent when the show starts (since most of them have jobs and several live alone).

Short version: In this, she's the age Rarity is in season 1.

Make an actual Story! I wanna see it! :raritydespair:

pls no

ew

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Well, I'm glad you liked the story -- but don't pull yours! :raritydespair:

I know the end was, well, yeah. Totally intentional; I figured in this case the old adage "always leave them wanting more" made sense. :twilightsmile:

i will read this later but i already love u for doing this. i love sweetie belle x rarity and adding pearl in? best thing ever!

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I can't rule it out as a possibility, eventually, but my male characters tend to be, ahem, "substandard".

finished reading it and i love it, so great and sexy, thnk u so much for this

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You are welcome, on this count, let me tell you. Older mares with all that experience and padding . . . mmm mmm mmm. :twilightsmile:

Pearl needs more love! :pinkiehappy:

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You know not what you ask! Yea, for while this piece is short and throbby, lo, if I continue writing this story there's every likelihood that there will be agony, consequences, pain, and misfortune! :raritydespair:

Seriously, it was really hard to write this and not start digging into OH MY TRUST ISSUES! OH THE PAIN! as it was. I can't rule out the possibility it could change in the future, though. :twilightsmile:

2852513 why not just finish this scene then?

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A valid point, but even if I do continue the story I'd likely move ahead in time. Boring, I know, but I'm like that. :unsuresweetie:

So, so naughty . . . and I liked it.
Does that make me a bad person?

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:rainbowlaugh: For liking words on a page? If that's the criteria, we're all fucked.

Loved it and that's all need be said.

i keep coming back and rereading this, its just so awesome i had to say again what a great job yiou did with it and thank u so much for writing it!!!!!!

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Well, I'm really glad you like it. :twilightsmile:

I desperately need a continuance my good sir

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It's ma'am, actually. But a continuance might happen all the same, in theory. :twilightsmile:

I need the ages of the characters when sex takes place, please. (Fillyfooler Group business)

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The age Rarity is in S1. She's somewhat inexperienced sexually in this, but nobody's shocked that she had sexual experiences, I put a picture of Sweetie at an adult age up, and I explicitly stated that in the blurb about the story. Nothing in it suggests she's underage, simply that she's the younger sister. :twilightsmile:

Hmm. Not sure if I should read this or not. Do YOU think I should?

Well, this fic is alright. Well-written and somewhat arousing, though that's about all I've got to say. It ends a bit abruptly in my opinion, and it's not the most exciting thing I've read, but I am glad to have read it. Thanks.

I've read many story's with the sweetie bell tag but this is the best one of many

are you doing more on you story cola bubble gum ?

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I'm hoofing a few ideas around, but haven't got anything shoed just yet. But I am around a bit. :twilightblush:

so you planning a sweets for sweetie part 2 cola bubble gum ?

hey cola bubble gum have some ideas for the sweets for sweetie story ?

hey cola_ bubble_ gum i have an idea for sweets for sweetie

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