After a rather strange meeting with Luna, Twilight sees things she has`nt seen before. Some things she can`t bear to think about.
But soon, Twilight`s new reality puts her friends in danger; and she swears to protect them for all eternity.
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The Nightlife Chronicles book one; Bite Mark Bound
I did not draw the cover for this fan fiction, so please tell the artist what an amazing job they did! http://adalbertus.deviantart.com/gallery/40717965#/d5kkgez
The art piece also gave me a few ideas for chapter one.
Chapters (2)
Errors everywhere, the pacing is too fast and a few things need more time to settle.
But there's potential, you're looking to improve and you'll probably follow through on it.
Here's some advice from someone further down the same path.
Get a good text editor: Google Docs is a good start (it's free and it can text dump to FIMfic) but I'd suggest going for Libre office or Microsoft word as well. any of those will solve a lot of your problems.
Next, take a gander at the writing guide in the site FAQ. Good hints are always welcome.
The final bit of advice (if you're willing to go down the rabbit hole) is to visit the /fic board on MLPChan: http://mlpchan.net/
Visit this thread in particular, read the guide post at the top of the page and post your Fic's details and ask nicely for help. The people there may be rude occasionally, but they are often willing to help.
Good Luck and have a upvote.
Couldn't rather than could'nt. I saw that mistake at least twice. Also, you capitalize I when one is referring to themselves.
2373435 Thanks so much for the advice!
2373227 Thank you so much! I plan on fixing this chapter soon, though I am a bit busy with school right now. ( That`s why it took so long to post
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And I would really appreciate if you could help with editing! ( As you can probably guess, I am very new to this kind of stuff )
Hmm... interesting, really, really interesting. Not exactly what I had in my mind when I made the picture, but still an interesting take =)
2376379 that'sss got to hurt