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WoW, never chatched a chapter in it's time of the birth ( 5sec ago). Well lets give it a shot. Few last chapters were... quite... hard to chew so I hope I will finally enjoy this one.
eee i wanna read it so bad
I hope the rest of the Terran Humans stop to help Max, I hate seeing Humans getting their asses kicked, especially by ponies.
So cool. Really looking forward to seeing where this all goes.
Welp, Max better find a SAVE point.
Interesting ... still teetering on the brink of un-following (admitedly still sour over the Celestia/Luna shit) but you have my attention as to what happens next.
Man I love reading this fic
It fills me with...
D E T E R M I N A T I O N!
You have broken the badassatory meter
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That IS the save point.
well... holy fucking shit, not that I didn't expect something like that, but da'um
So can Luna and Celestia be killed in their current forms?
Thoroughly enjoyed this chapter. Great work Max!
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To add onto the ASGORE stuff, we gotta have some good ol' Richaad
along with that, yay a new chapter
"LADIES AND GENTLEMEN! IT'S THE BATTLE OF THE AGES!!!"
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Actually, it fills me- with fury!
I
AM
SEIZED
WITH
FURY!
NEW CHAPTER! LOOK. LOOK WITH YOUR SPECIAL EYES.
I enjoy the antics of the equestrian humans very much, i half expected jane to mimic "ass cracker"
YEAH! you saved Primrose! I was basically bawling at that point, she was one of my favorite characters, (honestly mostly because she's a Sanguinarian) and I was really bummed out when you (supposedly) killed her in the previous chapter.
The man, the myth, the legend. Now we see what happens now. Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work. Deus tecum.
CHAOS HAS ARRIVED!
Oh my gosh yes. I so wasn't expecting this. The last time I checked the progress bar it was at 10%. I'm in the middle of writing a 12 page paper for college but this deserved a break from that. Max, you rock. Thank you for updating tonight.
6974945 Wonder who would win....If the iron man suit didn't have weapons?
Max has joined the fray!
It's awesome that Equestrian humans have magic, makes total sense.
Max still hasn't discovered his Hidden Power, we're interested in how that ends up happening.
Keep going! ;)
From where I sit, it is on 1:11 in the morning, and from where I sit, there are 54 others reading alongside me... I have to say, that's pretty impressive.
I've been wondering when this girl was going to make a reappearance.
Huh, isn't the term "confound" usually used?... Oh well, here's a picture.
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And so, ponies learned how the first rule of the apocalypse: aim for the head.
If you hear a strange thundering noise in the distance, that's just me applauding.
Huh, was there ever a moment where Max gave someone a crutch?... Unless, that's not the right word.
Well, no matter, it'll be nice to see Max have an epic fight scene with Discord. Knowing him, he'd probably suplex him, just because he can.
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Now things are getting intense!
Every creature that is blessed with sentience in the multiverse has something special about their race. ponies with their magic affinity. Dragons and their long life due to damage resistance. Zebra and their affinity fore nature and spirits withing. Equestrian humans and their digging. Discord however forgot what is special about Terran Humans. It is all throughout their history in every culture I have studied. What is it you may ask. Something so profound and yet not terribly usefull day to day. You see, Terran Humans have the ability to kill gods and imortals. Discord is about to be beat down.
I lost count on how many times this has been featured.
6975102 Must totally agree
KEEP GOING
6975174 "Dank u voor de kracht" appears to be Dutch for "Thank you for the strength". At least, that's what Google Translate says.
6975245 I think it gets featured every time Blackie posts a new chapter.
Okay, wow. This chapter was just what I needed to really get back into the swing of the story! I loved the Primrose scene, though I think the dream sequence may have been a bit drawn out. The combat was excellent. And there was forward momentum for Max and the second tier ponies.
Sure, the Big Bad is on the horizon (literally), the Mane 6 are MIA, and the big guns (Celestia and Luna) are corrupted; but we have a small light of hope in that our heroes are up and around and making progress.
I can't wait to see how this plays out!
6975063 Even if it didn't, it most likely would win. Because look at the Big Daddy suit. While it does have bits of armored plating here and there, it's not much. A lot of it looks more like leather. Meanwhile the Iron Man suit is all steel, or iron... basically all metal. Sorry to say, in a straight up fight the Iron Man suit would win because of much higher defense, even against the drill arm.
I good, you saved Primrose!
So, wait. Let me see if I understand this correctly. If Max is filled with Determination, doesn't that mean he can't loose? Well I'll be damned, I had no idea you could use save states with written literature.
And then Celestia extends her wings out and around her head. Wing Fort of Hiding Embarassment ... ACTIVATED!
XD I know it's the wrong character... but I don't care, the reference is from the same game...
Give 'em a bad time, Max! :D
I'm so curious how you'll wrap this up. Celestia and Luna ended zombiefied or something and i'm guessing Discord didn't just leave the elements and the mane six running about. Shit definitely doesn't look good.
After Max's quip about him resembling Iron man I found this line very ironic.
I get the feeling Discord is not the enemy.
PRIMROSE LIVES!!!!!
Now we just need Max to kick Dustin in the dick and backhand Discord through a wall.
In fact, here's how the dick-kicking should go:
Now this is a damn turning point! The last chapter was solid in that it really, finally got the ball rolling, but this? Fantastic. So much shit I was hoping would happen did. Massive spoilers incoming, so basically one big blot of spilled ink.
A few humans weren't the 'blindly answer hate with hate' types! Huzzah! This was really great to see... they didn't go full pitchfork mob; I can actually root for them. Ditto the Equestrian humans, AND we got an explanation (or demonstration at least) of their magical digging skills. So Terrans, which humans are really 'one with the earth'?
I was actually initially hoping his guards would find Max, suit him up, and go from there. This was better... and I was partially right anyway. Hilarious that Tanker got the Bioshock reference... Primrose being saved by Max (whether it sticks or not, she's not out of the woods yet, technically) was totally predictable BUT still awesome. Back when he mentioned 'never without my permission' upon finding out about her... I saw this one coming, and looked forward to it.
And last but certainly not least... Discord shows himself, in dramatic fashion. He's too far from canon to predict (which is dicey anyway) but the simple fact that's he's acting openly is great. Discord's a performer; he's been setting this up in the shadows so long you'd swear he wasn't chaotic at all, what with all that planning. Now that he's taken the stage... I'd be shocked if we didn't get some expositional monologuing, and man do I want some... Some big questions can hopefully be answered. Speaking of unresolved, I wonder if the Elements have a wolfsbane or silver bullet type setting...
Anyway, last chapter was good; it very much felt like, even without the answers, we were at least moving towards the conflict that would provide them instead of setting up more questions. But this? This had everything I could have hoped for leading up to a world altering confrontation. Well done.
"Human. It was nice to meet you."
...
"Goodbye."
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Yaay, Primrose got a human boost.
Tinman got turned into Spam inna Can, but you know the quote, if an enemy is down, hes worse than out, ebcause youve now forgotton about him till he suprises you from behind with a head crush.
If thats the Archmage Discord, does that mean Discord Discord is in another castle?
He really shouldnt be on the Crystal.
Drama Button
DANDANDAAAAN
The mistery go even more deep.
*It
Someone get Max a sugar cookie, AND HIS STYLISH EYEPATCH!!!
Whew. what a chapter well done, well done, heheheh eue.
NIce to see there are some Terren humans that aren't assholes, like the guy who stayed behind and those who didn't speak any english.
Nicej ob!
Well holy horseapples, that was great!
It's happening, it's realy happening!