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bats


Writer, blogger, saucy chat mom, occasional bitch. Hablo espaƱol. She/her/ella.

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Curious, interesting idea, scribbles and snippets to feed your ever ravenous fans. :rainbowwild:

I see what you did there at the end. 'Twas a charming little story.

I like these, they are relevant to my interests, please continue. :twilightsmile:

For a lack of editing, these are definitely well done. I can't imagine why it has downvotes. Actually, I can imagine, but the reason is downvotes for the sake of downvoting or simply because the subjects are not relevant to their interests (even though they are warned by the title) and that seems stupid so I shall upvote and look forward to more.

let the dragon deal with cleaning, it's time to kiss :rainbowlaugh:

This reminded me of growin pains, for some reason. Still, t'was good. I'm enjoying these

I think this is a good little fic. But i think the idea could by a full length fic with a good back store to how she lost her wings or how took them and how twilight and her got together we might jest be looking a grate fic. But it's jest a thought :twilightsheepish:

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I don't know that I could stomach writing a full-length story that would be primarily sad like that. There have been plenty of Rainbow losing her wings stories before and I'd just be adding another to the glut, too. Who knows, though; maybe the inspiration to write something sad like that will get the better of me and I'll expand this to full-length. After all, just because something's been done before doesn't mean new life can't be breathed into it by tackling it from a different angle. I'd have to actually plan something out if I did; frankly I have no idea how Rainbow Dash lost her wings when I sat down to write this. :twilightblush:

2168763 Oh well it was still a nice thought also can't believe you didn't know what happened to dashes wings lol:rainbowlaugh:

even if it wasā€¦appledashā€¦I liked it!:derpytongue2:

Funny, this short one-shot was more profound than most ship fics on this site.

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It's a Sweeney Todd song. That might be helpful to know. :derpytongue2:

I see our group has infected you with AppleDash. Carry on! :pinkiehappy:

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Infection log:

It has been a week since I was bitten by that Appledash fan. In a foolhardy mistake at the time, I had thought them simply over-exuberant, but that was before I learned the truth. Even now, in the throes of the transformation, I remember shreds of my former self; my beloved Twidash ship, the color of my ex-wife's eyes, the smell of lavender...they come to me clearly before my mind clouds again, replaced by thoughts that aren't mine: "Consarnit," "Awesometastic," "Barn-raising," "20% cooler." These are foreign notions deadening my synapses as the full transformation takes root. My fellow Twidashers have me quarantined in the barracks. They know what must be done when the transformation is complete. There is only one known cure: removing the head or destroying the brain. Hopefully this log will gain them valuable insight into the disease and will lead them to a breakthrough. Hopefully, there will be something left to read before I fill it with doodles of apples and lightning bolts inside of hearts.

My only regret is the loss of Twidash. Without it, how will a bookish unicorn learn to relax and a headstrong pegasus learn to think things through? It is a loss that is simply unbearable to me, but with each passing moment grows distant, twisted. Soon it will be gone. Even now I can feel the lucidity slipping. I fear this is my last entry...

Applejack swept a hoof across her brow, eying the blue pegasus hovering above her. A small smile played at her lips as she asked, "So tell me, RD, ya ever think about mares?"

*a door opens, the air is filled with the noise of struggles and moans. A gunshot sounds and the room falls silent*

And by that I mean, Appledash is adorable and I'm quite having fun! :derpytongue2:

Don't worry about going slightly over. If you've noticed, some of ours end up being closer to 800 words at times. When we say it's a loose guideline, we mean it. :rainbowlaugh:

I must say, you write some very good AppleDash. I've enjoyed your TwiDash for a while and now you're writing both...

You wanna know what's better than TwiDash and AppleDash?

...AppleDashLight. :rainbowwild:

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Lol, you're the third person to try and push me into writing Appledashlight. If I felt I knew how to write polyamory, I totally would. But I've never been in a polyamorous relationship, so it'd all be guesswork and that's not fair to polyamorous romance fiction. I don't know what it feels like to be in that situation, and that's the heart of writing romance successfully.

Glad you're enjoying my Appledash, though. There's a one-shot somewhere on the horizon that'll come out of me.

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But therein lies the challenge. I honestly have no clue how to write a polyamorous relationship either, but I do have plans to hint at one soon, then maybe even continue that if I like it. I find it a lot of fun to try new things that I might fail at. That may just be the programmer in me talking.

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Yeah. If an idea for one strikes me, I'll consider it, but I'm not gonna be actively hunting.

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And in the meantime, I'll enjoy the AppleDash even more! :rainbowkiss:

AppleDash, again? These are great stories you got here though. but give me more TwiDash, I'm getting stir crazy over here!

these are supposed to be kind of experimental, right? I challenge you do choose the strangest pairing you can think of for the next exercise!

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Ouch. The strangest? You got it.

Be warned. :pinkiecrazy:

I will speak of this at all times, at all of the events.

All. Of. Them.

I think you did well, all things considered.

Probably a good thing you didn't take any of my suggestions; they were waaay too wild. I don't ever want to think of them again, actually...

Anyway, congrats on a job well done! I like ScootaBelle better, but you actually managed to make me care about this pairing!

Not sure if that's good or not...

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Scootabelle is true Scoots ship. Scootabelle is one of three OTPs; Twidash, Scootabelle, Snowmac.

But ANY ship works. ANY SHIP.

ANY.

It was all I expected and more. I feel truly graced to have inspired such a masterpiece. It's praises shall be sung throughout the millenia as the peak of the written word, and each song will include my name. The instigator, the random commenter, that one guy. My master plan to inject myself into the cannon of western literature is complete!
Oh, and I guess bats did a good job to. Maybe.
((I can't believe my comment actually worked. Thanks!))

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Haha, you're welcome. You're right about these being experimental. They're also about practicing genres I don't write very often, getting a feel for characters and pairings I'm not familiar with (hence the multiple Appledash prompts in a row), gear myself up for writing in general, clear my head, or just for fun cuz I'm bored.

No promises I'll do that again, though.

Pfft, that's not a strange ship. Twilight x Canterlot, that's a strange ship. :trollestia:

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One of the suggested pairs when I was fishing was Shining Armor/Winona. I don't write crackfics, though. Even if they're funny, I try to make them coherent. Twilightlot is crackfic nightmare fuel. :rainbowlaugh:

Me before reading this: "What the f:yay:k am I about to reeeeeeeeeeeaaaad???"
Me after reading this: "Actually that was kinda great I could read this pairing"
And that is how you know you are a great author.

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Haha, success! I'd made a personal challenge to myself at one point to eventually try my hand at writing a bizarre ship fic and making it work. Not 100% successful, but it turned out pretty well for less than 500 words! :rainbowdetermined2:

That was cute! And it made sense, in a way. Nothing wrong with this apart from the randomness of the pairing :scootangel:

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