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Twilight Sparkle and Rainbow Dash awake to find themselves in a mysterious, compromising position. It's up to the brilliant mind of Twilight to deduce what series of events led them to this.

This story has sequels entitled Twilight Holmes: Sabotage After Sunset followed by Salting Snails.

Written for the Annual Twidash Contest.

Dramatic reading Part One and Part Two!

Let's Read blog by bookplayer here!

Remaster edited by Formerly Committed and Shellsh0cker.

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Comments ( 151 )

This is gonna be good. :pinkiehappy:

It was, indeed, good.

I feel you could have done without the last two lines, but hey...
Despite the occasional error, this was pretty damn good job anyway!!:twilightsmile::rainbowdetermined2:

I shall read this at a later time ^.^ comments make me want to read.

Hahahahaaha this is one of the more amusing and adorable twidash fics I've read in a while! Here's hoping you do well in that contest my good writer!

PS - Have a mustache or three :moustache::moustache::moustache:

Oh bats, u so silly :rainbowkiss:

It was cute and funny!

I like it! :moustache:

Well, that was awkward, escalated quickly, stupid and sexy. :rainbowkiss: You earned a thumb.

TeXXy #9 · Jan 16th, 2013 · · 2 ·

No! It is middle school!
I liked this.

Very good! I love light-hearted Twidash!

Had fun reading it

thanks for writing it

That was very good. I love twidash. feeling kind of at a loss for words, I suppose its because the fic truly speaks for itself, and it says good things.

Great story, like it. :twilightsmile::rainbowkiss:

I would love to see more of this vary good "the game is a hoof":twilig:rainbowlaugh:htsmile:

Ohhhh funny and cute, its funte ...or cunny? whatever, a good one indeed

and as always nicely done

Loved it :twilightsmile::rainbowdetermined2:

A nice way to start my day.

Witty, smart, sensible, I like it. The way you spoofed Holmes was amazing and hilarious. :rainbowdetermined2:Awesomeness approved, dear sir.

I had a lot of fun reading this. Some of the best TwiDash I've read in a while.

That was very well written :pinkiesmile: I loved how it all was a misunderstanding :rainbowlaugh: I just could imagine how crazy Twilight got when the magnifying glass was lost :rainbowlaugh: At the end it was very cute how you got them together :twilightsmile: well done.


Yeah, sure ya do. :ajbemused:

I found one pretty major problem in your story:
It's tagged 'complete'
Please correct this as soon as possible.



This shall remain a standalone story. However, if an idea strikes me that I can't ignore, I may write more stories in this same continuity. Detective spoofs are kinda sorta extremely fun to write. And I can't get away with only writing Twidash hook-up fics; we need to get some already together stories up in here!

Well, I certainly had a fun time reading it. The moment where they found out what happened was priceless!

... That was pretty good. *Clicks like*

This was very good, it had a believable (and hilarious) premise, the characters were well done, and the events felt well paced and well described.


>> Subsolar Drift
Yeah, sure ya do.

This had me rolling :rainbowlaugh:

And they lived happily ever after! :twilightsmile::heart::rainbowkiss:

Twi actually reminded me of the Holmes from the new movies. Nice.

That was perfect, oh my! :raritystarry: Very fun to read, I could only imagine the ambition you must have felt when you crafted this story :twilightsmile:

your doing Coming Back? awsome I hadn't notice you were the same author. I love that fanfic. keep it up.

Oh god this was hilarious. Is it wierd that I expected it to be Pinkie giving them something with a dilluted form of the love poison?
But the misinterpretation driving them crazy, and then that reveal at the end! You have been faved!

Star ... check
Thumb up ... check

Twilight dies at the end?! How could you, you monster! I thought this was a light-hearted comedy romp!

Yup, she dies everyone dies eventually.

Celestia, Luna, and probably Cadence don't.

A very mysterious and compromising position? ME LIKEY! *Read later*

Saw the resolution (that nothing had happened between them) coming from a mile away, but that's the pleasure of this story, isn't it? It's the journey, not the destination that matters.
I loved that they went through town and visited all their friends, finding out about different adventures at every turn. The real mystery for me ended up being why they were watching one another so closely. Wondered if Pinkie had drugged them.
Thanks for sharing such a pleasurable story with us :pinkiehappy:

At least this didn't end with Twilight falling off of a roof.

awwe thats so cuuute
and Twilight brush your mane :ajbemused::pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

Saw it coming a mile away, but that doesn't mean I am disappointed, far from it. This was a well put together story. A sequel would be quite funny, with the explanation and all coming into play.

Spike glanced up from the pile of books he was sorting. “Oh hey, Twilight! I was wondering where you went off to. When you came in last night you asked me to remind you about the note you tucked behind your ear.”

Twilight’s eye twitch was back.

I was just thinking about death stares at that point, I think Twilight must have looked a bit like this:

There's something in the donuts.

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