• Published 30th Oct 2012
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Rage of Broly - chaos2012



When the Legendary Super Saiyan lands in the world of Equestria, friendship isn't something he want

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Decimation

Broly grinned while he charged a Ki blast in each of his hands. "So how would you like to perish? Slowly and painfully, or perhaps I could make it quick for you... Although it will still be painful." He laughed menacingly as he raised his arms to his side. "How about you tell me what you want then."

Gritting his teeth in anger, Gohan braced his feet beneath him as he raised his fists up. "You're a sick monster Broly for trying to hurt these ponies, they have done nothing to you."

"Why would I even waste my breath explaining to a half bred saiyan trash. All that you need to know is that you will be buried with these pathetic creatures!" Broly yelled as a Ki blast rushed out from his hand at the young teenager.

Gohan kicked off the ground just before the blast connected with him. The young saiyan flew up into the air, leaving a golden trail of aura behind him as he went to the roof of a nearby building. As soon as he landed on the top, Broly burst off the street after him and shot another blast towards him. Gohan quickly shot his own blast down at it, the two attacks colliding midway and detonating in a bright flash. Knowing what was coming, Gohan jumped up just as Broly barreled through the smoke and crashed into the building side.

Busting through the concrete like cardboard, Broly laughed as he came level to Gohan in the air. The gargantuan saiyan brought one of his fists forward and swung it down at his target, yet Gohan quickly ducked under it and flew back while shooting off several blasts at Broly's chest. Like before though the attempt simply exploded on the titan’s chest in a harmless patch of smoke. Laughing at the attempt, Broly charged and slammed his fist into Gohan's chest sending him flying into the building behind him.

Watching the structure crumble from the teenager plowing through it, Broly chuckled as he charged a blast in his palm. "You are just as pathetic as your father. Now go and join him in death."

Before he could release his attack, a blast of magic struck Broly's back and shoved him forward a few feet. Grunting in frustration, he turned around to see Celestia, Luna and Piccolo flying towards him. "Hmm, so you all want to come and die as well."

Reducing her speed, Celestia positioned herself facing Broly. Luna moved to his left, while Piccolo hovered until he was to the right. Nodding to the latter two, Celestia turned back towards her foe, her blood boiling in anger from the deaths he had caused. "Broly, you are going to stop this now! You're crimes against Equestria are beyond forgivable, but I will give you one more chance to stop this madness and leave."

"Ha ha ha! You really think you can make any demands of me?" Broly sarcastically asked, "A pathetic race like yourself doesn't even deserve to breathe the same air that I do."

Breaking through the crumbled building, Gohan floated up into the air behind Broly. His face and outfit sported several cuts and tears from his impact earlier, but he ignored it as he prepared for what fight was coming next.

"A monster like you has no place in this world. Just leave now and stop this sick game." Gohan stated angrily.

"Oh? You think I was playing a game? I was just warming up. The real fun starts now!" Broly yelled out.

Done listening to him talk, Gohan and Piccolo flew through the air towards Broly, both of them unleashing a barrage of punches. As they did, Broly just smiled as the attacks collided with his chest and back over and over, their strength not affecting him enough to worry. Throwing his fists out, Broly slammed his one hand into Piccolos head and the other into Gohan's stomach and sent them flying back. Out of the corner of his eye he noticed a bright glowing that seemed to come out of nowhere. He then saw it was Luna and Celestia charging up their magic.


"Luna, now!" Celestia shouted as she released her attack, Luna following suit. The two magical beams raced downward and blew up around Broly, yet coming through the smoke was the Saiyan again unhurt by their attempt. Grunting in anger, Celestia dive bombed him and released another energy blast towards his face.

Broly simply laughed as he swatted the beam away with his hand, flying up and reaching both stunned alicorns before they could react. Clotheslining both of them, Broly flew across the street and slammed them into the wall of a building, the structure shattered to pieces as their bodies smashed through the exterior. Luna screamed out in pain as she broke through a solid concrete column in the center of the building, her form falling down and becoming covered in a large pile of rubble.

Continuing on through the rest of the building, Broly threw a Celestia through the air, her body crashing into the street below. The legendary super Saiyan laughed as he watched the street burst open from her impact. "You pathetic pests don't even-

"Broly!"

Broly turned around to the call of his name, seeing Vegeta flying through the sky towards him. "Oh, so the prince wants to join as well?" He said with a grin.

Putting his hands together, Vegeta released three large Ki blasts outward, the balls racing towards their target. Laughing out loud, Broly flew right through them, casually breaking through the spheres like they were nothing but sparks. Grunting in frustration, Vegeta pushed himself through the sky away from Broly. Shooting off a volley of blasts backwards, Vegeta flew towards the center of the city in an attempt to escape his pursuer, but his speed couldn't compare to the power of his opponent as the titan came up in an instant.

Bringing his fists over his head, Broly swung down and hammered Vegeta into the street below. The Saiyan prince hit the ground so hard that several buildings around the impact shattered instantly, collapsing down into large piles of rubble. Broly grinned at the destruction beneath him, laughing menacingly into the sky knowing that they didn't have the power to stop him.

"You fools should just give up now! I'm even stronger than I was last time we fought..." Broly yelled below, "why don't you just roll over and die like the scum you are!"

From behind him, the broken building where he carried the princesses through exploded in a blue flash of magic. Rising out of the shattered concrete came Luna, her eyes glowing a bright white aura. Her face was twisted with anger as she stared at the monster before her. "BROLY! A FOUL BEAST AS YOURSELF DOES NOT DESERVE TO WALK OUR WORLD!" She boomed out with her Canterlot voice. "NOW PERISH FOR THE CRIMES YOU HAVE COMMITTED!"

The lunar princess conjured a dark ball of blue magic, it's exterior emitting pulsing streams of electricity. Instead of shooting forward like previous attacks, the sphere began pulsing as it grew more powerful. Suddenly, a massive beam of magic erupted out from the ball and rushed towards Broly. Smiling, Broly charged up a large Ki ball in his hand and threw it at the incoming blast. The green Ki ball whipped through the sky and collided with Luna's, the two attacks coming to a standstill. After a moment however, Luna's attack began losing ground, breaking apart as Broly's ripped through hers. Panicking, she released her grip on her attack and tried to drop beneath it, but Broly had already rushed below to wait for her.

Before she could scream out in fear, Broly's fist slammed into her face and sent her careening down to through the entire building beneath her and crashing into the street below. Luna gasped out in pain as she tried to stand, feeling one of her legs buckle underneath herself. "M-my knee!" She screamed to herself.

"Luna!"

Luna turned to see Gohan flying towards her, quickly landing and running over to her side. "Luna, are you alright?"

"I... I'm fine. We just have to-" her words froze in her mouth when she looked past him into the sky. "Look out!"

Spinning his body around, Gohan looked up to see Broly rushing down towards them. "Get behind me!" Gohan yelled out as he crouched his body down. Putting both of his hands to his right side, he focused his Ki until a pulsing blue ball grew in his palms. "Kamehame... Ha!"

Thrusting his arms forward, Gohan unleashed his kamehameha up towards Broly, the bright blue stream of Ki lighting up the entire area. As it did however, he was frozen in shock as Broly was flying through his attack unfazed before bursting out above. "No... No way..." Gohan stuttered fear as Broly clenched his fist above him.

Luna watched in horror as Gohan was sent flying through the street and crashing through several buildings behind her. "No..." She whispered out as she turned back to face the monster Broly. The next moment his hand reached out and gripped her face, pulling her towards him as one of his knees came smashing into her side. She screamed out in pain as several of her ribs cracked under his powerful strike. As she tried to pull out of his grasp still, Broly jumped forward and slammed her down into the street and forced her body to shatter the thick concrete. At that moment, Luna's body finally reached its physical limit, pain overwhelming every sense until her mind went black, darkness overtaking everything.

Stepping away from the limp alicorn, Broly chuckled in amusement as he lifted his body a few feet into the air. He loved having the power not having to worry about these worthless beings as a threat to him. Even Piccolo charging through the sky at him only brought a deep laugh from his throat. "Why must you all keep limping along like this. You should just let it all end for you!"

Kicking off the ground, Broly burst towards the namekian with his fist ready to strike. Piccolo began unleashing a mass of Ki blasts at the incoming saiyan, the energy attacks detonating but not leaving a mark on his chest. Grunting in frustration, piccolo flew backwards through the air and put his palms together. "Try this on for size. Masenko!"

A bright yellow flash erupted from his hands and shot towards Broly, who simply swung his hand and smacked the attack away. The green alien couldn't move fast enough to evade as Broly crashed his fist into his face, immediately knocking him out cold and sending him careening through a nearby building.

In a bright flash to Broly's right, Celestia appeared from her teleportation. As the light faded, the white alicorn felt her blood run cold when she saw the broken body of her sister. "Luna!"

Celestia sprinted over to Luna's body, scooping her up in her hooves. "Luna, Luna! Please get up!" Celestia shook her sisters form, but it still wasn't moving. "Oh please be alright sister..."

"Your sister is done for..." Broly laughed as he floated down towards the two princesses. "Even if she is barely alive at this moment, a few more moments won't count for anything."

The blood under Celestia's skin boiled like a pot of water from the fury growing inside her chest. She bared her teeth as she stood up from the ground and faced the monstrous warrior before her. "I warned you many times to leave my home and you refused to listen to my words. Now I have no choice but to make you pay for the acts against my world!"

"Ha ha ha! You are going to make me pay? You don't even have the power to hurt me."

The princess took a deep breath as she turned back to the area where she teleported to, a large dust cloud still lingering in the center. "Perhaps I don't have the power, but they do."

"Hmm?" Broly sighed as he turned his gaze up to the slowly dissipating cloud. His eyes caught sight of six different mares standing there , each of them wearing a different jeweled pendant. "Now what is this? You have little friends here to help you now?"

In the center of the girls, twilight stared in shock at the behemoth that was Broly. "This... This is the person that has been hurting everypony?" Then, her eyes became a pool of burning fury as she glared at him. “He’s the one who hurt my brother!”

"He is certainly something quite hideous looking." Rarity chimed in, "look at this place! He has ruined everything!"

Rainbow dash flapped her wings and lifted herself off the ground, glaring at the giant Broly. "This guy thinks he can do whatever he wants to our home? Let's show him what happens when he messes with us!"

"Darn tootin Rainbow! Let's get this jerk!" Applejack cheered on, stomping her hoof on the street in anger.

Seeing the sight before him made Broly laughed out loud. "Oh this is great! You brought these tiny little ponies to try and fight me? You must be truly desperate for help now."

"You won't be laughing when we use this. Now girls!" Twilight yelled as they all gathered up in a circle together. Shutting their eyes , their elements began glowing bright together as they lifted off the ground.

"Hmm? What's this now?" Broly said with a lifted brow. Suddenly, a burst of rainbow colored light erupted from the girls and shot up into the sky. The saiyan watched in confusion as the rainbow lifted high into the sky and began arching down towards him. "You think Something like that is going to stop me?" He chuckled as he opened up his palm and charged a large Ki blast. "You can't compare to my power!"

The Ki ball shot through the air to and expanded to over a hundred feet across, nearly blocking out the sky for all the ponies in the street. Rising up into the sky, the giant blast collided with the incoming element stream and forcing it to a standstill. "What!?" Twilight gasped out at the sight. "How did he stop the elements!?"

The two attacks pushed back and forth against each other, fighting for the advantage of dominance. After a few moments however, the giant green sphere began pushing the rainbow back up into the sky, until it shattered in a colorful explosion above the city and Illuminated the clouds in the air.

Celestia felt her body tremble as she watched the sparkling magic from the elements dissipating in the sky above her. "H-how is this possible? The elements are our most powerful magic..." Before she could say anything else, she saw Broly raise his hand up towards Twilight and her friends. "No, leave them alone!"

Broly however ignored the princesses words and laughed to himself. "It really is pathetic you even had hopes at beating me. How about you just let me end your fear for you."

Twilight and the others could only sit in fear as they watched Broly charge up another ball of Ki in his palm, the sphere glowing brighter until they couldn't see anything else. Fluttershy whimpered behind her friends As she heard the cold laugh of Broly echoing through the street. "What... What do we do?" She hesitantly mumbled.

"I can tell you what to do..." Broly answered for her, "you can die now."

"NO!" Celestia tried to run towards them, But Broly let his attack loose, detonating amongst Twilight and the rest of the element bearers. The princesses heart skipped several beats as she watched the entire section of the street explode, the several buildings behind them crumbling to pieces of gravel. "No... Twilight."

She could not believe it as the dust slowly cleared away from where Twilight and the others were. All that was left in the spot was a shattered street and a massive burn mark staining the rock. Celestia felt her throat choke up as she realized she just watched her student and her friends die right in front of her, and she didn't do a thing to stop him from taking them away from her. She felt a tear falling down her cheek, slowly crawling across her fur and dropping to the street. "Twilight, I'm so sorry."

Turning back towards Broly, she was met by his hand grasping her throat and lifting her off the ground. Gasping for air, she tried to pull herself out of his grip, but his strength was far to great for her to break. "Why.. Why are you doing this to us?" She wheezed through small gasps, "we haven't done anything to you."

"Your very existence makes my actions justified, princess." Broly coldly answered as he tightened his grip. "You still haven't accepted the fact there is nothing you can do to stop me. Your sister, your little pathetic ponies, and not even your friends from Earth can stop me.”

“Let her go!”

Celestia shifted her eyes to the side as she tried to follow the sound of the voice. As she did however, her throat was constricted even tighter, causing her entire body to buckle. Then all of a sudden, she felt herself thrown across the street, skidding to a stop on the hard concrete. The princess began coughing vigorously in an attempt to refill her empty lungs. Then, a pair of hooves came up from behind and lifted her head off the ground, “Who… whos there? she wheezed out between pants. As she gazed up to her helper, her eyes shot open to the size of dinner plates at who it was.

“T-Twilight!?”

Sure enough, Twilight and the rest of her friends were all standing there, not a single scratch on her body. “Princess Celestia, are you alright?”

“How… how are you alive? I saw you die…”

“Right before he hit us, I was able to teleport us away.” Twilight answered, “Now come on, get up, lets get out of here!”

Chuckling at the sight, Broly slowly walked towards the group of ponies. “You’re quite stubborn aren’t you? I thought you all died right there. How about I test that out again?”

“You aren't going to hurt them!”

Music

All of them, including Broly turned to see Gohan land on the ground, his body cut up and mouth lined with several trails of blood. Broly grunted in frustration at the half saiyan’s tenacity. “Why can’t you just roll over and die already like your father!"

Wiping away some of the blood from his lip, Gohan looked back and forth between the ponies as they huddled amongst one another. While they stood together, he could see the fear in their eyes. He turned his head to See Luna beaten near to her death, slumped into the street and not moving. He then saw the destruction throughout the city, the ponies home left in ruins just because Broly thought his was all amusing for himself. That is what made him the most furious; This monster was simply killing to kill. No true motive to his actions.

Gohan could feel his blood boiling with anger, his fists clenching so hard his knuckles turned white. He bared his teeth in fury and stomped back to face Broly. “I said you aren’t going to hurt them anymore!” Throwing his arms down at his sides, Gohan began charging his ki once again, the golden aura pulsing out from his body. “You are going to STOP!”

a massive shockwave of aura burst out from Gohans position, pushing back all of the ponies a few feet from the force. “What’s going on!?” Twilight yelled out in confusion.

“I don’t know, I didn’t see this earlier!” Celestia responded, using her wing to shield the blinding light coming from Gohan.

Broly watched in amazement as Gohan’s energy began skyrocketing above what it was before, the very ground beneath him beginning to crack from the pressure. Instead of worry however, it only brought a smirk to his face. “So, he has a little trick up his sleeve as well.”

“RAAHHHHH!” Gohan's voice echoed through the sky as he screamed out, his energy grew higher and higher every moment. His feet began breaking through the ground from the force emitted from his body. His muscles were growing more defined, along with his hair beginning to stand straight up into the air. With one final yell, his energy erupted out, shattering the windows all across the entire street and splitting the ground in all directions. Then almost as fast as it came, the bright light disappeared.

Standing there was Gohan, his aura flowing around him in a constant dance. Lines of static electricity pulsed constantly, the blue lightning flickering all around his form. Even his hair now stood straight up from his head except for one part in front of his face. Celestia could only gaze in amazement to the transformation he had undergone. “Amazing… his power is nothing like it was before.”

Gohan looked back at Broly, his fists ready to fight once again. “I said I wasn’t going to let you hurt them anymore. Now I am going to make sure of it!”

Comments ( 53 )

Oh god :rainbowlaugh: I'm trying to imagine Gohan actually sticking up for the ponies in one of those classic twenty minute no action time spans and I can't stop laughing.

Well he's fucked. When you push Gohan to his limits then get him mad, he goes Kaio-Ken X9001!

Wyrme #3 · Dec 2nd, 2013 · · 6 ·

I have a pet peeve with this story, actually, thought it IS good.
The ponies constantly getting smashed around. In crossovers, one franchise getting ripped apart constantly is terribly dull. Like in this story, with Celestia and Luna getting pwned to the extreme.
Something I kinda doubt, even with a Saiyan as powerful as Broly. I mean, the Royal Sisters MOVE enormous celestial bodies that are MILLIONS of miles away on a daily basis and aren't worn out. Heck, Celetia moved both the sun and moon for a thousand years and didn't even break a sweat. Even Broly would have trouble dealing with someone that powerful, let alone TWO beings like that.
However, if you don't support the "alicorns are super-powerful" fanon, I'll cut you some slack.

You almost had me going with the Elements of Harmony being down and out. I was about to say 'Bad End' until I read that Twilight teleported her and her friends to safety. Now we'll see Gohan step up into the fray with his Super Saiyan badassery. :rainbowdetermined2:

3566606 I think we saw that Celestia isn't that powerful when it comes to combat, back at the changeling invasion.

3566606 Luna and Celestia were able to stand up to Broly in his standard SSJ form, even managing to dominate him, but the he uses his legendary form, wich far surprases the abilities of a standard SSJ 1.

If gohan wins I'll be very disappointed

I'm expecting this to be a close battle. Nothing like Gohan curbstomping Broly, but catching him off guard and then being perfectly even with each other.

3567897
An even match with Broly... It's a damn shame that none of the OVAs did something like that. That'd be incredible to see. :pinkiehappy:

3567375 Point taken.:moustache:

WOOO Gohan!

Fight of the Century go.:pinkiecrazy:

3567897 Highly unlikely. This Broly would be at the same level of power as in Second Coming. Even a combined Kamehameha from SSJ2 Gohan. SSJ2 Goku (after training for 7 years), and SSJ Goten was still getting beat back by broly alone. The only reason they won was because of a distraction from Trunks. Gohan as he is now should still be no match for Broly.

3573248 actually Pony Vegeta, Goku wasn't a SSJ2 during the beam struggle in Movie 10 he was only SSJ. The reason I think this is that some people say that the 2nd Coming movie came out before Goku 1st turned SSJ2 to fight Majin Vegeta. Plus Goku's face features say that he was only SSJ, but I believe Gohan mastered his SSJ2 form by the time of 2nd Coming. So I think Gohan went SSJ2 against Broly but Broly was still able to take out SSJ2 Gohan with relative ease. So yes if Trunks didn't interfere Broly would have overwhelmed SSJ2 Gohan, SSJ Goku and SSJ Goten in that beam struggle. Gohan also claims he should be stronger then last time, which means he was referring to his Movie 8 counterpart, but Gohan was WAY stronger by the time of the Cell Games then he was in Movie 8. Also in the Buu Saga, Vegeta said that Gohan was stronger as a child when he fought Cell while Gohan was fighting Dabura which leads me to believe Gohan (Cell Games)>>Gohan (Buu Saga/2nd Coming)>>>Gohan (Movie 8). So out of all the Gohans (Besides Mystic Gohan of course), Cell Games Gohan aka the Gohan in this story is the most powerful after Mystic Gohan. I still say (Movie 10) LSSJ Broly>(Cell Games) SSJ2 Gohan, but the gap won't be so big that Broly overwhelms Gohan in a couple of hits like in Movie 10. They would be more evenly matched but Broly basically has unlimited Ki/Energy since it keeps replenishing, while Gohan's Ki doesn't replenish so fighting Broly is like fighting Android 17 or 18. So even if Gohan and Broly are even at the start of their fight Gohan is going to start losing Energy sooner or later, and then Broly is going to start gaining the upper hand not to mention Broly takes hits like Tank I mean Broly took a charged Kamhameha point blank, and he was completely unaffected lol so yeah I still agree that Broly wins but he will have to put quite a bit of effort into beating (Cell Games) SSJ2 Teen Gohan.

3573570
Is this the longest sentence ever? I think this is the longest sentence ever.

Princesses: "We is r so powrfulz, fer uz!"
Broly: "...wtf? Just die weaklings!"
Princesses: "Nooooooo!!!"

Seriously, they should just stay out of the way of real people warriors. The stupid ponies are just getting in the way and making amusing squeaky toy sounds as they are beaten to a pulp.

I wonder how the ponies would feel if they knew that Vegeta used to be a lot like Broly mentally. In fact, if not for Freiza's betrayal, so would Gohan and Goku.

Love the cover-art, by the way!

3573570
USE A PERIOD FOR GOD'S SAKE!!!!!!!!!!

3566606
It's their special talent. Look at it; it's tattooed on their asses. You can't miss it.

Got it?

Good.

Yes, they may use magic to move the celestial bodies, but that doesn't mean much. I doubt that any unicorn on the planet, even one with the same amount of magical power as Tia, could move the Sun.

Why? Cause it's not it's Sun to move. That, is what I believe their cutie marks represent. I don't even think it takes as much power to lift a teacup as it does to lift the sun for Tia.

Instead of trying to cope to the new world, however, the insane super Saiyan sees the peaceful ponies as pathetic life forms that should be destroyed.

INSTANT hook

3566606 This is The Legendary Super Saiyan we're talking about here. The same Saiyan that destroyed an entire galaxy by himself. In his Legendary Super Saiyan form, Broly has literally an infinite amount of ki as his power level is always slowly increasing. And you also seem to have completely skipped over how fast Dragon Ball characters fight at either because you don't know or you think its what is shown in the show.

The fighting in Dragon Ball and Dragon Ball Z is drastically slowed down so we are capable of seeing it. Don't believe me? I'll prove it.

At around 19:30, Piccolo clearly states-

"He dodged it. He's faster than the speed of light."

And their speed only increased as the show progressed.

Can Celestia and Luna move at those speeds? Not even anywhere close actually. The only hope they have of defeating a Dragon Ball Z character, let alone the Legendary Super Saiyan is their magic, but by the time they even think of using a spell, they've already had a hole punched through their body.

3573570 Sup.

This part of the message is to the author. The part where Twilight teleported her and her friends out of the way of Broly's attack is very unlikely due to the reply I made to EarthBound Pwny. I'm not going to bash on you for it, but all I'm saying is do the research next time.

3985263 I apologize for not knowing every single little thing about the DragonBall universe.:ajbemused:

3989744 Bro, we have the internet. Fucking use it.

3991020 I have more important things to do than research everything about DragonBall Z.

3991020 hey, ease up. Just because someone is interested in something doesn't mean they have to know every single fact about it. I'm a fan of the show and can't remember every tiny detail from every small part.

3991191 There's a fine line between tiny details and common knowledge.

3985263

Ahhh...a fool who likes to use the English translation of the dragon ball Z Anime when it's convenient for him and likens hyperbole to literalism...

Say...didn't Goku once say that Instant Transmission is only light speed when he was explaining it to Trunks?

4001253 It was a simple mistake. It really is instant. The English version of the Anime has a few of these, but the light speed in the fight with Raditz one being true to the Manga.

Back in Dragon Ball, Kid Goku moved as fast as lightning after his training on the lookout.

On Namek, Goku escaped Frieza's Imprisonment Light Ball the instant it exploded.

If you really want actual proof of this, then look no further.

http://www.screwattack.com/news/goku-vs-superman-why-goku-would-win

4002840

"It was a simple mistake. It really is instant."

You mean like the mistake everyone seems to make whenever someone's clothes are caught on fire or lava is introduced and how everyone acts like those are such potentially lethal big deals despite how these dudes are supposed to be able to withstand much greater destructive forces? And before your bring up Broly from the movie second coming, it's obvious his refreshing mint green shield took the lava and for Goku fighting Freiza on Nameck, it's not really clear if he tanked the lava or was able to dash away in time before the lava even managed to touch him.

"The English version of the Anime has a few of these, but the light speed in the fight with Raditz one being true to the Manga."

By that logic, when Coldcast said in 'What's So Funny About Truth, Justice, and the American way,' that the force he hit Post-Crises Superman with was like, 'Fifteen suns exploding in his face,' that meant that Post-Crises Superman's durability was such that fifteen Supernovas from the sun, you know, that thing Goku likes to destroy his enemies, like Cooler for instance, with, wouldn't be enough power to kill Post-Crises Supey.

By that logic, Superman is also as strong as infinity considering he was able to once lift a book with Infinite Pages in it. After all, if it has infinite pages in it, it must have infinite weight, and if Superman was able to lift something with infinite weight, that must mean he's infinitely strong.

"Back in Dragon Ball, Kid Goku moved as fast as lightning after his training on the lookout."

That's...not really all that impressive considering the actual lightning bolt itself only travels at about 224,000 miles per hour or 3,700 miles per second and the speed of light in a vacuum is about 180,000 miles per second and considering the high end speeds we're supposed to be seeing here. Oh sure, the light emitted by the bolt travels at the speed of light...in an atmosphere comprised of the elements ours is, but the actual bolt itself.

"On Namek, Goku escaped Frieza's Imprisonment Light Ball the instant it exploded."

And I wrote this the 'instant' you posted it. And here I thought only instant transmission was 'instant' in the absolute sense. ;)

"http://www.screwattack.com/news/goku-vs-superman-why-goku-would-win"

Yeah...no. In my experience, the Goku fanatics like to whine and complain about how Post-Crises Superman is 'overpowered' and 'lame,' yet funnily enough, also like to whine and complain that their guy lost in the Death Battle, yet can't see the logical conclusion that, if he did win, he'd be more 'overpowered' and 'lame' than the other guy they claim is 'overpowered' and 'lame.' Fans that are so emotionally vitriolic who can't even fathom this simple logical implication of Goku's possible victory in light of their feelings for Post-Crses Supes aren't ones to be reasoned with, they're ones filled with sour grapes that don't really hold up as well as they think they do under scrutiny.

All of this is irrelevant, though, because the author, as a ff writer like myself, reserves the right to write whatever the heck he wants using whatever he feels would make for an interesting story.

In other words, if he says, 'No Shirt,' 'No Shoes,' 'No Service,' considering you are under no obligation to read his stuff, though you may call it drivel, he is under no obligation to bend to your will.

So, in other words, if you're angry that Broly isn't strong enough to punch out Galactus in this fic, write your own. :pinkiehappy:

4002840
4004381 uhh, can we take this debate somewhere else please?


And to Raian , if I were to make this as accurate as you make it, why didn't Broly simply flick Celestia in the face and kill her?

:facehoof:

This is the joys of fan fiction, you can change it so it is more entertaining

4004450

Who said I was debating? I was simply defending your decision to accurately depict Broly in your fanfiction.
:ajsmug::ajsmug::ajsmug:

4004381 If you think those petty insults will actual hurt my feelings, you're dead wrong. And I was using that article as an example. But, judging from what you wrote, you didn't bother reading the article cause you're scared of being proved wrong. It doesn't matter what kind of FACTS I bring to you, you'll still give me some stupid inane fucking excuse cause your a brainless, spineless, mobile sack of flesh.

If Dragon Ball Z characters can't fight at FTL speed, bring an actual fact to prove it, don't just sit there with your head up your fucking ass saying that they can't fight at FTL speeds without giving a fact to back it up.

Good day.

4004929 yeah I agree that DBZ characters move at FTL speeds, but dude you put Celestia and Luna at SSJ3 level in your fanfic while Chaos has Celestia and Luna at SSJ level in this fanfic, and Broly's maximum power is I believe only equal to or slightly above SPC and SSJ2 Teen Gohan, but their is NO WAY Movie 10 Broly as a LSSJ is even touching SSJ3 or ANY form of Majin Buu heck even Buu in his weakest form would stomp LSSJ Movie 10 Broly lol

Interesting fanfic in a sea of "Original Character" Dragon Ball fics that bore me to tears.

Chaos2012; you have a story here that I am looking forward to seeing more of. Please continue with this when you get the chance and don't leave us hanging! :derpytongue2:

I look down at the nonsense in the review section though.

"This is The Legendary Super Saiyan we're talking about here. The same Saiyan that destroyed an entire galaxy by himself. In his Legendary Super Saiyan form"

No. Stop with that. He destroyed an entire Galaxy. That isn't impressive. Any of the Saiyan crew can do that. It's not a big deal. Never once did they state that the South Galaxy was wiped out all at once. They merely state that it was 'destroyed' and they show the planets to be in ruins in the aftermath. As a series which likes to exaggerate (Piccolo destroying the moon for example) such things can be taken with a grain of salt.

Also, a Saiyan can't breathe in space. So there was no way in hell he hovered in the vacuum of space and blew up each planet.

"He dodged it. He's faster than the speed of light."

So, why did it take Goku two-hundred and seven days to fly the span of 625,000 miles immediately after this battle in the Otherworld? Even if this was Dragon Ball Exaggeration; that still sucks. Faster than the speed of light. Right. Average distance from the Earth to the Moon? 238,854 miles. It would take around a second for light to cross that. I get that Goku is weaker than Radditz at that point; but only by so much. So, no. The whole "Speed of Light" thing is complete and utter crap until much, much later in the series.

"Broly has literally an infinite amount of ki as his power level is always slowly increasing"

Another thing that fans like to jerk about. The nearest to that being stated was a few quotes about his "Legendary" state having constantly raised Ki. It was never once said that his power never stops growing.

Do I believe Celestia and Luna can beat Broly? No.

Doesn't mean that Broly is that powerful however. He's "The Legendary Super Saiyan" can be sprouted all you like - but he's still not impressive. It's a title given to a 'legend' like any other. He was born with a 'Power Level' (Silly thing..) of 10,000 and had power given to him like candy with very little training or effort. Gohan was far beyond him and his silly little transformation at the age of nine years (or around that age - depending on your verse/fandom).

Legendary Super Saiyan? What a joke. More like a crybaby.

Gohan has dealt with beings who whine and complain his entire life. Who do nothing but talk about how strong they are. Who think just because they have a bit of power they think they can do what they want.

If anyone deserves the so-called "title" of Legendary Super Saiyan; it's him. I'm looking forward to seeing Gohan do exactly what he did to Cell.

Show him a true monster is one that should never have been woken up in the first place.

I want to see everyone die and Broly to live (:

4372102 i actually agree. mostly since it would make sense.
Logically, nothing in Equestria is powerful enough to take down even Saiyan Saga Vegeta (if you ask me), let alone Brolly.

I'm just Saiyan this shouldn't be tagged "human." :pinkiecrazy:

This makes me wonder, if the ponies here turn out to be completely defenceless, and only the DBZ warriors can do something. Or will the ponies be more than just that.

How long until the next chapter is ready

5104947 HA, Dragonball puns.

4004450 you should do akuma and his forms

When will the next chapter come

When will the next Chapter come?

The cover art for this story amuses me more than it should...

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