Liar, Liar, Apples on Fire

Rarity isn't mad, she swears, just very confused. Did Applejack actually break into her house? And for some inane, frankly incomprehensible reason?

Commision for Dimbulb!

Set after the episode "Trade Ya."

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Vaguely Demented

Vaguely Demented #1 · Feb 8th, 2023 · 10 · ·

Impressive not RariTwi. Love how much denial Rarity has over fritters.

Asolem2

Asolem2 #2 · Feb 8th, 2023 · 18 · ·

Sometimes delicate things required sledgehammers.

She's not wrong

Axolotl222

Axolotl222 #3 · Feb 8th, 2023 · 14 · ·

Rainbow and Twilight were sitting ways away, reading a Daring Do book under the shade of a tree. From what Rarity could hear, they were fervently discussing something they kept calling ‘head cannons,’ which made Rarity hesitate on approving of Sweetie reading said books. Cannons being shot at pony’s heads did not sound like appropriate reading for a gentle, sweet filly like her sister.

She has a point. Talks about head cannons do tend to get pretty violent...

The Voice in the Water

The Voice in the Water #4 · Feb 8th, 2023 · 6 · ·

Rarity's a relentless hunter, isn't she. She saw her prey, and slowly wore it down until she had it in her clutches.

PhycoKrusk

PhycoKrusk #5 · Feb 8th, 2023 · 8 · ·

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That's not true and you'd better admit it, or I'll have to resort to violence

chip43

chip43 #6 · Feb 8th, 2023 · 2 · ·

And then they kissed, you forgot that pat.

6-D Pegasus

6-D Pegasus #7 · Feb 8th, 2023 · 2 · ·

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Dundun, dun, dundun

Axolotl222

Axolotl222 #8 · Feb 8th, 2023 · 1 · ·

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FanOfMostEverything

FanOfMostEverything #9 · Feb 8th, 2023 · 8 · ·

Shocking. Utterly shocking. The very foundations of my worldview have been shaken.

In all seriousness, lovely moment. Thank you for it.

falloutshelters

falloutshelters #10 · Feb 8th, 2023 · · ·

I don't know about anyone else, but I can definitely feel that monochromatic is less passionate about this ship than raritwi from the writing.

6-D Pegasus

6-D Pegasus #11 · Feb 8th, 2023 · · ·

Hahaha even your lesser favored ships in your stories still work when you're the one writing it

new55

new55 #12 · Feb 9th, 2023 · · ·

That was a good story.

errant

errant #13 · Feb 10th, 2023 · 1 · ·

Very cute, and your portrayals of AJ and Rarity were perfect - I could easily read the whole thing in their voices.

Jeweled Pen

Jeweled Pen #14 · Feb 11th, 2023 · · ·

Very cute, I giggled. Was a great thing to read right before bed. I especially liked the way you portrayed AJ's mistake with Rainbow's element. The quick catch was adorable and very smoothly written.

Fillyfoolish

Fillyfoolish #15 · Mar 8th, 2023 · 3 · ·

Woo-wee, can't believe ah pulled that off, now Rarity just thinks I have a crush on her, was real worried she'd've figured out ah broke into her house there.