Due to her reckless antics and tomboyish behavior, Rainbow Dash has generally been thought of as one that had no real interest in the matters of love and dating. However, she gets challenged by Spike one day when he tells his friends that he would never be able to fall in love with her. Given Rainbow's competitive nature, a new challenge between the two of them begins.
She tries to steal Spike's heart and if he falls in love, he loses!
Between awkward dates, friendly interference, a jealous Rarity, an over-protective Twilight and a betting pool stretching all across Equestria, who knows what ending awaits them!
Chapters (12)
I notice there are too few RainbowSpike fiction pieces in existence. Therefore, I've taken it upon myself to produce one. The reason I find Spike and Rainbow Dash to be absolutely perfect for each other is due to this clip:
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Oh This Is GONNA BE GOOD. But i will read later. Not enough time tonight.
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This is really well written! I can't wait for the next few chapters
This can't possibly end well. Read the first chapter and you have my interest.
As far as constructive criticism: Everything seems fine, except for the occasional wall of text. Other than that, keep it up.
I like it. Started out pretty good, i'm sure you will make a great story.
This is one heck of an opening chapter, if I say so myself.
This interests me greatley. I shall await the next chapter.
Rainbow spike shipping FTW!
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TRACKED AND LIKED!!
Yes! Yes! Ummm.... Maybe!
Oh this is going to be good.
Spike and Rainbow Dash are the bros of FIM, there is no question.
Screw whoever thumbed this down, this story is awesome!
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*few
Little is used to describe items that can't be properly counted; "There was too little water," for example. Few is for quantifiable measurements, like the number of RainbowSpike stories.
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Lyra qnd Bon Bon acting that way is new for me to read. Good story continue
Dude I will stalk this story's brains out I want more
Soarin'
Sometimes better than
And better than
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I am going to fav this SO HARD! YEAH!
Fail to see how Dashie was being a douce in the clip. She knew the statement and the concept of literally remaining stationary for one or two days was completely ridiculous and it was all in the name of fun. Spike was the one who took it too far.
Heheheh... Now let's see, where's the gif of the black guy with a folding chair? I can't think of a more appropriate caption than that... Here we go.
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[grammar nazi]Should that apostrophe in the title really be there mate?[/grammar nazi]
Wow, that was one of the better reads I've had in a while! Loved it, detailed and concise, but not lacking in any way!
But Lyra and Bon Bon were kinda bitchy, especially to Spike and Rainbow. What are they, like, highschool fillies or somethin'?
After Spike and Rainbow first speak to eachother... Rainbow Dash takes Doctor Whoove's tiemsheen and goes to the future and has sex with older Spike.
dis gonna be good
You have piqued my interest.
Go on.
from a dude that reads mostly sadfics, you've enticed me
Read, liked, faved. Can't wait for the next chapter!
I can really see the spidash, spike x rainbowdash, love thang going down (if their is a better name for it I would like to know) cause spike is such a bro and rainbow dash is like the Michelle Rodriguez of mlp. (I totally heard myself saying that last sentence in archers voice, if you haven't seen archer watch it on Netflix, it's really freaking funny)
Apparently.
*Steel taps his chin as he looks among his reading group; Twilight, Spike, Rainbow and Rarity all share a turn in his vision. Spike shakes his head.*
Then you figure it could work as a story idea?
I'd take that bet.
I'm saying the kid's too short to really 'fall' for you.
Ok, young. Too young.
...What.
"I'm sorry, I don't think I heard you right...did you say you could make Spike 'love you'?"
"Yeah!"
"What about it?"
*Steel and Twilight look at each other, before collapsing in a laugh.*
Just the impossibility of the situation! C'mon, Rainbow, this isn't a stunt, you're playing games with emotions here! As if it could ever work! Hahahahahaha!
You're on!
"Eeeeasyyyy money!"
*Steel and Twilight bump fists, grinning to each other.*
Easy money.
"Too easy."
Huh. I like this ship.
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This made me laugh so hard. Thank you, oh, so VERY much for this creative comment! This comment should be a featured piece! Well done!
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We comment to please.
"We still have to read the story..."
Yeah, and once it's over, we can rub the split pot of our bet in Rainbow's face!
"Can't wait!"
Diving in!
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This is such a unique idea. I love it
the dialog between Spike and RD really set things up and raise my expectations. Please continue.
Ack! All I can think about is the chorus to Special Delivery by The Offspring!!!
And the voices told me to blow you away
You're gonna fall for me
You're gonna fall for me!
Shut up, Peppermint!
Ha ha, no and it's Peppermint Cream, Finest Baker In Cloudsdale!
Just because you found away to talk on here doesn't mean you can pester me all the time.
Fiiiiiiine, I'll go... but I'm not happy!
Great, now that she's gone, I can give feedback on the story!
First of all, humorous beginning: Nailed it! Twas quite funny and I'm sure there was a reference that I didn't get :)
Spike+Dash: Not common, so a bigger chance for originality. Which this definitely has, I've never seen anything like it before.
Hmmmm... I have nothing else to say except that this, is great!
Meh, I've seen better.
PEPPERMINT CREAM, GET YOUR ASS OUTTA HERE RIGHT NOW! Sorry about her guys, I'm leaving now and taking her with me. Bye!
Interesting.
I'll watch and see where it goes.
Also, The Game
Lyra and Bon were assholes!
... I have a question: Why is "Pegasus" capitalized but "dragon" is not? If you're referring to the mythological flying horse, his name was Pegasus. If his species was pegasus, it would be lower case.
... I apologize. Carry on.
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My phone/computer auto-capitalizes the word "Pegasus". It just did it right now,
In fact. So I just leave it. I understand the audience is intelligent enough to understand what I mean. Thanks for the comment!
I think that this quote wil be appropriate for the coming chapters: "ALL ABOARD!! HAHAHA!" -Ozzy Osbourne
"....My Little Dashie"
I see what you did there.
A 'Rainbow Spike' class ship is a rare vessel indead in the oceans filled with vessels of all sizes, such as the mighty 'Sparity" class battleship. The 'Rainbow Spike' class is unique in that it is a very fast and manuverable ship but has the strong armor plating to allow it to take a beating. 'Rainbow Spike' ships may lack a bit in firepower but its survivability has allowed them to take on bigger ships and win. One example is the daring tatics of Capt. Lancie who took out a powerfule Chinese 'Twixie' class ship with the first 'Rainbow Spike' ship in the fleet.
Sorry about that battleship thing... I've been watching alot of ST:TNG lately.
This will mark the first Rainbow Spike for me where Spike isn't older and with wings.
I look foward to hilarity and for potentially serious (and hilarious) romance that will bloom as a result.
I expect sudden sloppy make outs by say.... chapter 5.
Any takers? I have $20 on make outs by chapter 5.
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Thank you very much for this creative comment! This made me just smile wryly and chuckle. Well done, my brony pal!
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Thanks for the story! Now I'll continue to enjoy the creative writing and ignore the fact that Rainbow Dash just voluntarily agreed to woo an infant.
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I'll take you up on that offer I will bet $20 that there is in fact no kissing of any kind between Spike and Rainbow in chapter 5.
Also to the author, cool story bro. This is the first Rainbow/Spike story I have read, but shouldn't the bet have more stipulations than that like rules of engagement, what the winner gets, or even just a time limit. Seriously though I like the story and I can easily see Rainbow making a bet like that simply because somepony told her that it would never happen, also I really liked the the descriptions you employed in your writing style.
I must see where this leads.