Spike waits for his mail to come and has a chat with the mail pony.
Art by Epulson
Prereading and Editing by Jack of a Few Trades and NorrisThePony
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I guess Rarity takes trashy romance novels literally.
That was more sweet than muffins with extra prunes in them!
D'aaawww.
That was really cute and sweet! I like this slice of life interaction with different characters. Good writing, too!
*narrator's voice*
and thus did the man's heart melt thrice that day.
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This was freaking:
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"Dear Spike, I'm sorry to have to turn you down, but I can't help but feel that you're too young for me, and I'm not quite looking for an inter-species relationship at this time; no offense meant to you my dear, as you are without a doubt one of the most amazing people I am privileged to know, pony, dragon, or otherwise, and I wish you all the best of luck in your future endeavors."
"That said, I think it would be better for both of us to remain as we are, friends; sincerely, Rarity."
There, now was that so freakin' hard? Took me less than five minutes to come up with that one.
Spike should be getting fan mail from the Crystal Empire . . .
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or other junk mail
Cute!
Looking good!
6846998 Oh yeah, she's hardcore like that.
6847080 Muffins make everything better
6847091 Derpy is unlawfully cute.
6847098 Thanks a lot, man! It was a lot of fun to write!
6847117 I have that effect on people.
6847340 Thanks bro. I appreciate it.
6847392 Rarity was probably just so occupied with all of the love letters she was getting, she forgot to tell poor Spike.
This story was pretty amazeballs
p.s. jack is a loser
6847822
any chance of a follow up AFTER the event took place?
*looks for a wink emote and finds none*
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Wow. That's a really nice story. I'm glad this site is finally producing amazing (and original) things again. I can always appreciate writers that can do so much with so few words.
Aww, that's so sweet. Sweet like the diabetes that's now coursing through my veins. Thanks for that.
6847930
Original ...?
6848201 Spike x Derpy for the win.
Sperpy FTW! But... Starburst is best ship.
D'awwww, that's too cute
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Have a favourite!
6848201 At least comparatively.
Much needed smile, thank you for writing this ^_^
D'awww. I think I have diabetes now..
I stumbled upon Spike x Derpy on accident in my story, and it had always been something that is super adorable and endearing to me. Alas, the number of stories with this ship is absolutely lacking...
The Spike in this story is so... Spikey! I love it!
This ship... I like it. In fact, I like it a lot.
The story was short, conveys its point, and shows rather than tells. Well done.
I would like to see the dance, though. I feel that this story ended way too soon, and could be more interesting if we were to see the antics at the dance. I felt that it left a build-up that didn't pay off, and instead ended abruptly. Other than that, there's little else to criticize.
Edit:
You said, "the moment." Twice.
You know, we don't see nearly enough Derpy with unusual parings like this - good for Spike. Best pony and Best Dragon! Bonus points!
6848424 Cute was the name of the game here.
6848663 thanks for reading!
I'd really like to see more of this story! It's way too short. Maybe do a sequel? I'd do it, but I'm not so sure I can convey things the same way you do.
Just keep hitting the feature box while you're at it you magnificent bastard
6849282 Maybe if I keep trying, i'll get buff and have nice hair like you you sexy beast, you.
This gave my diabeetus diabeetus
Congrats on making the featured story line!
Kawai.
Wow, I gotta say I'm impressed! As someone who loves crackships, I never would've thought of shipping Spike with Derpy. But in this case, it was not only sweet, but fairly feasible! I can totally see this being a thing, and I wholeheartedly approve.
Cute.
Thumbs up.
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Yea, I approve of this fic.
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And so does Batman.
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...and Darth Vader.
~Leonzilla
no twilight
don't eat the gems twilight
dude, not cool
6849474 Thanks a lot!
Nice and sweet.
I only have only one thing to say about this Fic .... Daaaawwww
aww very very cute
Aw ^-^ loves it.
wait.............that pony was an actual one from the show? is that his actual name? that's the only thing that i care about right now. your story is on the back burner until this is answered.
6849968 I gave him my own name.
Great story, and this ship is adorable. The real question begging to be answered, though, is just who is the beautiful bird taking Owlowiscious out?
And the fact that you spelled it "Derpy Whooves"...ouch. Poor her, not just being turned down but possibly even divorced...
6849991 Yeah, I like to leave a lot of clues for readers to figure out on their own. It can help make the experience more enriching for short stories like these.
6849973 you called him dustin?
6850000 Correction: I made up a name.