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Backstreet's Back... Alright!



Just for fun, Spike and Twilight try to write a Power Ponies fanfiction. Simple and easy fun, right?


There are a few things about the fanfiction world Twilight needs to learn if she wants ponies to like her story.

Now with a French translation!

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Comments ( 135 )

I'm crying from how hard I was laughing at the end. Dude...dude...all of my yes.

4401351 i'm gonna get hung on a stake in the TwiDash groups when this gets posted :rainbowlaugh:

Shhh... do you hear that? It's the sound of butthurt TwiDash fans... crying out in petty whines... It is a beautiful sound :pinkiesad2:

4401360 oh man, it's gonna get so hectic up in hea

4401368 ahh yes, the sound of an angry mob approaches. I revel in it :pinkiecrazy:

oh I fear the wrath you have called down upon yourself good sir, I shall pray in the light of the seven for your safety. But also this was hilarious.

4401960 i appreciate the support my friend :moustache: May the grace of whatever deity you believe in rescue my soul from judgement tonight :ajsleepy:

:rainbowlaugh:My sides!

I demand to see twilight's OC. Until then, 9/10
And a like
And a favorite
And your babies

4402000 my first attempt at comedy... succeeds! :twistnerd:

*imitating the Heavy* BWAHAHAHA!

Wonderful story, 5 stars A+ 4 stars :pinkiehappy: You can get away with this, it's totally not twidash, thats believable right ... right :twilightblush:

*Reads story*


Indeed. Your username is somewhat fitting at this moment. :derpytongue2:

omg, dustin. so true... so true

Ummm . . . For once in my life I'm at a loss for words - I simply have nothing educated to say. So instead of saying something educated, I'm going to be refreshingly, honestly generic: I loved this piece! I loved the concept, I loved the execution, I appreciated the hidden jokes and the way you used satire to ridicule practically half the writers on this site . . . In short, I loved it and I will be looking forward to seeing more from you in the future.

4402064 thanks! :pinkiehappy: i made sure to ridicule myself a bit too, because I kind of have a tendency to be annoying like Twi when it comes to generic stories. :twilightblush::rainbowlaugh:

The satire in this... Man, I love it.

Extra points for irony for Spike delivering the lines on no one wanting to read a Hum-Drum story.

:rainbowderp that was deep... in a really funny way

"There are ponies who won’t even read something if it has Hum-Drum as the main character. They’ll just look at it, say that it sucks, and move on.”

This is where I hit the uprate button.

(Psst--it should be "she and Spike." And I still laughed!)

4402184 Thanks, sir. I wanted to give my two cents on the annoying fanfiction stereotypes in a fun way. :twilightblush:

All. My. Yes.

It’s generic, cliche, horribly paced, and makes no sense. It’s just an excuse for a lesbian make-out session!

It's so true.:rainbowlaugh:

4402194 M'am, but still applies!

4402224 sorry, ma'am. no disrespect intended.

4402385 that gif was beyond epic :rainbowderp:

Excellent satire, my dear author. I smiled the whole way through. Normally i'd try and give a more detailed and in depth review, but I feel that would only defeat the purpose of this piece, so I shall refrain this time (that and it', like, 11:30pm and I'm too tired to do so).

You'll have my upvote when the counter doesn't read 42 anymore. Good luck in your future endeavors.

~ Lupo

and one about Fili-Second eating a baked potato.

Now that that's out of the way, someone write 'Fili-Second Eats a Baked Potato', :rainbowdetermined2:

:moustache: I have had this new idea, it is a second person story where the reader falls in love with Rarit- Radience.


haha this story so reminds me of people on here with their editors haha. This really relates to people and i love it!

10 out of 10 for Comedy
9 out of 10 for grammar
10 out of 10 for overall story.

A l i k e a n d a f a v e y u o r w a y :moustache:

Curse you! We humans need to breath! :rainbowlaugh:

Sad thing is, I've had a very similar conversation with my cousin (I being Twi) when I first discovered fanfiction.

Truer words were never written.

Worth the wait of page loading.

Pretty sure you just subtly dissed 99.9% of the 'romance' writers on this site.
And the rest of them are laughing.

(Yes I know the word doesn't work that way.)

Enjoy your practically obligatory fave and upvote.
You know. Since you covered the room in blood and organs from my sides splitting.

4404031 :rainbowlaugh: hope you have a mop handy :rainbowlaugh: and thanks man.I'm glad you liked it

I get the strangest feeling that this story is trying to tell me something. But what is it?

Oh yeah, that it requires a green thumb.

As for TwiDash, I ain't even mad.

I love the cover art.

Fillysecond eating a potato reminds me of Batman eating a hotdog.:rainbowlaugh:

4404414 lol thanks :twistnerd: i thought it fit fairly well :rainbowkiss:

Yep, sounds like the average Feature Box fic.

What has been will be again,
what has been done will be done again;
there is nothing new under the sun.

This is the stuff TVtropes are made of.

4404437 And THAT reminded ME of THIS! Small world, huh?

Hahaha! Small world indeed.:rainbowlaugh:

For the record, I don't believe a word of that A/N at the bottom...:trixieshiftright:

That sounds like an average feature box and :facehoof: for making laugh with its generic stupidity.

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