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This story is a sequel to But It's So Generic!

Twilight and Spike have both written Power Pony fanfictions and release them to the hungry public. Will they do well, or will the annoying trolls and over-analytical readers tear them apart? Find out!

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Now with a French translation!

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Comments ( 189 )

Ohhhhhhhh shit yo, you put the pussy on the chainwax.

4556094 that i did :coolphoto:

you know, I forgot who i was poking fun at halfway through this fic: the annoying people who write lame clop stories, the annoying commentors who troll everyone, or the writers who flip out about their stories not getting popular. Something to do with those three

Tidal #3 · Jun 16th, 2014 · · 1 ·

Good lord... Absolute genius. Everyday fimfic life right here.

well done my friend!

You forget something at the end there?

4560158 that was purely intentional. :derpytongue2:

Manes #7 · Jun 17th, 2014 · · 1 ·


How the public should react to Spike's story:
"Your story is bad and you should feel bad!"
How the public actually reacts to Spike's story:
"Fap fap fap."

That is our society, people. Are you happy like this!?

Nice I was surprised you didn't do more with the Hum-Drum (Spike angle) I like to think he has fans like our little dragon, whelp, god, thingy has.

Although you did good with the anti-hum-drum (Spike) bit. Sorta like a certain anti-Spike crusade that didn't make it off the floor.

Wonder how the rest of the Mane 6 will like one of the stories?

I feel like Twilight in this situation, except I can't write worth shit anyway.:scootangel:

I knew that would happen to Twilight. :rainbowlaugh:
:twilightangry2:NOT FUNNY!
You're right. It's Hilarious! :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

Hahaha this is the greatest thing ever...

4560195 I'd care but I'm too busy fapping.

4561230 EXACTLY MY POINT!!! :rainbowlaugh:

"Sorry, Twi, but the majority of ponies care more about cheap and quick thrills as opposed to fine literature."

That's not always true. In fanfiction it is, but not in other forms of creative media.

4561276 I'm aware :scootangel: I'm just poking fun at stereotypes and such. Sorry if I offended you :fluttershysad:

4561324 nah, it's cool bro.

"Sorry, Twi, but the majority of ponies care more about cheap and quick thrills as opposed to fine literature."

Your story does have an audience. Its just a smaller one.

at least you had a solid story. The beginning was good, the middle was great, and that ending was flawless.

Poor Twilight. I share your pain, oh mistress of purple.

Cool story, bro. Have some things. :twilightsmile:

I feel you are trying to say something. Well, back to writing about lesbian horses.

This story doesn't have enough lesbians.

Subtlety. I do not believe this story knows of it.

But who cares? This was awesome and hilarious.

Er mah gerd, this sucks.

Er mah gerd.

4564077 i knew that was coming :rainbowlaugh:

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Also known as, "Best Pre-reader".

On an altogether different note...



Reminds me of the days when actual meta was allowed.

You know....

Spike's story has to be a thing now.

I love this!! I'm gonna go read the sequel now!

4564294 something tells me this is as close to meta you can get noww:rainbowlaugh:

I gave up on quality a long time ago.

In the end, though, what really matters is if you yourself enjoyed writing your story and think you did a good job. If anyone else liked it, that's a bonus. Trying to please the unpleasable masses is a fool's game.

You make me like meta. :rainbowlaugh:

4564294 I might end up doing that with Famous's help. :derpytongue2:

4561324 See I write what I like and make try to make them in my own image.

Alt Title:
Fimfiction: The Fanfic.

The lack of butthurt proves the indestructibility of your meta.
Good show, old bean.
~Dash The Stampede

4564597 I know right. I was expecting some legit butthurt by now:yay:

No! There are some fine literatures from fan fics that get considerable popularity! My favorite example being Hard Reset. Good writing, an interesting overarching plot, and 1,000s of likes! A good story!

Proof that not every fanfic requires at least a small cess pond of just what people wa-
Oh wait... Main character Twilight is a lesbian in that story...


Comment posted by FamousLastWords deleted Jun 18th, 2014

4564800 so you didn't like my story? Or didya? Sorry, your comment confused me :twilightsheepish:

Comment posted by Manes deleted Jun 18th, 2014

Up goes the thumb and it made me smile today.:moustache:

Ahh, so this is why I don't get that many views on stories. Looks like I'm gonna have to do a Twijack story!

That's some funny shit. Gaping plot hole:rainbowlaugh:!

what most authors forget is how to make their first few chapters interesting. if they drag on people get bored

Hey its up! :D And it's still pretty darn awesome! Nice work!

That's awesome.

This is all far too accurate! :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

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