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space is a waste


Nothing belongs here

Unless it's meant to be fixed

Twilight Sparkle

Chapters (14)
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I don’t know what you’ve been doing, but evidentially you’ve been doing a lot of it, and where can I get some? This reads like trying to get directions from Syd Barrett, you may take that as you wish.

And this is why you never buy a timeshare in lost Carcosa.

Whoah, just what is this?

I love it already

Now its getting interesting....

Its all in her head, isn't it?

Your eyes widen

A stab of pain

Brightness and brightness

Piercing gravity

And as you look down

And as you look up

You lose track of either

Are these stairs going up?

Or down?

I rather liked this bit here. Fits in well with the header image and 90% with how it's cropped.

Ending right on a cliff hanger....damn you, skirts! :flutterrage:

Aw I was hoping to publish an art-Cancelled fic first, one of these days

The cancelled status gives me the same feeling as the spinning top in the ending scene of Inception.

If there is an award for cleverest use of non-completion, you've won it.

Or have you?

This is really neat. I enjoyed this.

holy fuck this was good

You tried too hard.

Comment posted by TheAncientPolitzanian deleted May 21st, 2019

You never can avoid all the damnable yellow signs.

How did you know there would be another?

... This wasn't here before. This just got a lot more interesting. Though I may yet hold by my comment regarding eldritch cities.

.won desrever s'tI :rainbowhuh:

I have no idea what this is, but I love it!

Not sure if I like this voice or not... :ajbemused:



Feh, dimensional traps only work on people without supreme powers... meaning they're not meaningful anyway. :trollestia:

This is way more neat than I initially thought.

Wow...so many left turns. Ever thought about just breaking the room?

...wait, if the rooms are broken, do they belong in themselves?

Replaced you...with a G5 pony! :raritydespair:

Chapters are disappearing, reappearing, and being replaced. I'm scared of this fic. :fluttershbad:

The author constantly logging in and out doesn't really help, either.

I have MANY questions, but I’m not sure I want answers.

Oh my god. What in the world is happening?

From the image source:
"If you're not careful and noclip out of reality in the wrong areas, you'll end up in the Backrooms, where it's nothing but the stink of old moist carpet, the madness of mono-yellow, the endless background noise of fluorescent lights at maximum hum-buzz, and approximately six hundred million square miles of randomly segmented empty rooms to be trapped in. God save you if you hear something wandering around nearby, because it sure as hell has heard you."


So, from what little I can discern out of the chapters I could read before they disappeared, this is unicorn Twilight. She was "replaced" by alicorn Twilight, and has been trapped in this weird endless space for what seems to have been quite a long time (she found that molt from Spike's wings, so it's probably close to the current season). The two voices could just be her own (a cynical side and a comforting / encouraging side) or something else entirely.

Really digging the presentation, though. Hope we'll get to see all the chapters when the experiment is done :twilightsmile:

Whelp, RIP Spike. I think? I honestly have no clue, and I'm getting kinda bored waiting for answers.

Jiminy Christmas, chapters are appearing, disappearing, moving, and replacing. I swear on every bits of my soul it was 6 or 4 chapters earlier.

"Oh, wow, 12K words in one chapter! Maybe there'll be an actual story now- CELESTIA D*MN IT!"

they replaced him, they replaced you too, you know


This is eerie as hell. Holy crap. :rainbowderp:

What in fresh hell is going on. :rainbowderp:

The cover image changed!

Everything is changing.

This chapter shifted. I saw it.

the Backrooms? Hmm.

It says canceled... but is it really?

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