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by shortskirtsandexplosions

and backrooms

Author's Note:

No

Yes

No

Yes

It's

Starting to make sense

No

Now

No

It's

Starting to make sense

Now

You stare at them

Feathers

Lavender feathers

That's

It's not

Look at them

Scattered

Across

The carpet

Lavender against yellow

A cold contrast

Left in a hurry

A flurry

There

There must be

No

A pegasus

Somewhere

With your coat color

No

Lost here with you

They don't leave a trail

They're just

Scattered

Like leaves

Lavender leaves

Soft and freshly-plucked

Yes

We all know

No

Yes, we all know why they're here

No

Just

You shudder

We all know why you're here

Just keep

You stumble

So broken

Just keep moving

You limp forward

Hooves over feathers

Hooves over carpet

Such a failure

Don't

Just

Please

You quicken your pace

The buzz follows

More feathers

After all, Twilight Sparkle

More feathers

Nothing belongs here

More feathers

Unless it needs to be fixed

More feathers

Comments

[FloydienSlip]

I'm digging this.

[zaponator]

This is way more neat than I initially thought.

[Merula]

I'm starting to get an idea of whats going on here....

[SparklingVynegar]

Okay, but, hold on. If this is Unicorn Twilight who was brought here because she was replaced by Princess Twilight, then... Why are there feathers here? If this place is some universal recycle bin, shouldn't there be no sign of feathers that are used in the show?

Did something happen to Ali-twi, too?

[Wydril]

I'm assuming something enlightening is going to happen in one of these chapters because right now it really just feels like a pretentious "too deep for you" writing.

[Kowhaifan]

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