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Cupid's arrow makes ponies fall in love? No problem! Twilight Sparkle makes a love potion with the same result? Oh, hello moral ambiguity! Things only got worse when Rainbow drank the potion... then gazed at me... smiling... oh no...
This story is dedicated to the runt, the grunt, the unt missing a 'c', An Intricate Disguise!
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So, I once had to stop reading a story because of how underhanded tactics led to a marriage while one side was under the influence of alcohol and a drug. Thus, it says quite a lot that I actually enjoyed this. It's not a perfect romance, and I feel like they'll have some problems down the line, but overall I'm left with the impression that this is probably going to work out.
You walked a fine line and came out in the clear. I respect that. Well done.
That was adorable, oh my gosh!
Well done
nice story. love potion∑(ﾟωﾟ
This reminds me of another fimfiction. But I don't remember the name. Something like "A note from a secret Admirer?" I don't know. I'll have to check it out. But this reminds me of it. Really good. Keep it up.
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Found it. it's "Letters from a secret admirer."
Oi, what's that supposed to mean
Great and cute story
"Mane", not "man".
Change the last "me" to "her".
Is "position" supposed to be "potion"?
Change "winking" to "thinking".
Extra period needs removal.
"Flash" to "flask".
Despite the grammar that were mentioned or not, this story was funny and cute to read.
Position, or potion?
...Twilight and Spike do. Several different things would've happened, all of them awful.
You put what away? "Independents"? That makes no sense.
Missing a word: "other than that".
"Pink"? Yeah, no, she's clearly purple.
Aside from numerous typoes or grammar errors, many of which were already pointed out by other commenters, I found this to be a very fluffy and adorable story. Almost threw me for a very bad loop when Rainbow announced it was a prank in the end, but the justification and reasoning behind it made enough sense to dodge that bullet.
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Made the edits. Much appreciated, lads.
Uhhh
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Seconded
Awesome love fluff story good job.
I guess it should be flask.
Otherwise, a great story with an absolutely fantastic ending! Thumbs up from me.
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Thank you for the save and kind words.
Well that was beautiful
Exactly why is this an alternate universe
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Because there was already an episode with a love potion. I didn't watch it. AU was to cover my tracks.
That was gorgeous. Absolutely stunning writing!
Oh my gawd this was an amazing story I loved it
This was a really nice story. I’m not gonna lie, it was really cute. I thought it was pretty dumb that Rainbow was just playing a prank, but it leads to a good ending. The pacing for the story was perfect, not too fast, not too slow. With a cliffhanger like that, you need a sequel though. I would’ve liked to see something in Raibow’s point of view, but Twilight’s personal commentary was really nice though. Overall, amazing story. You’ve earned a rare fav from yours truly. Congratulations.
You’re truly,
Donnnnnnn
I didn't get that last bit... That's hinting at something else in play.
I really enjoy this story. I've read it a few times now and I enjoy it every time. But the first couple times I read it I got hung up on Rainbow Dash and her dip. I was just trying to figure who the hell eats pizza with dip...and then I ordered pizza today and the place gives you this garlic dip and I realized I would never order this pizza without that garlic dip and was reminded of this story so I had to come read it again and be like "Damn it, Rainbow Dash was right."
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Hehe.
“Your eyes were glowing pink though, how did you manage that?”
“Luminescent paint.”
“That sounds...agonizing.”
“It was...is...any chance we can go to a hospital now?”
This is still my favorite TwiDash fic.
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Thanks homie.