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RainbowDash1990


Hi! I'm RainbowDash1990! I enjoy making snuggly/cute fanfictions! Feel free to donate to me on patreon to help support me! https://www.patreon.com/rainbowdash1990

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Rainbow Dash had always been a mare of action, but recently, the thought of the future had been scaring her. Who else better to comfort her than her closest friend?

Cute TwiDash one shot, filled to the brim with cuteness and snuggles and all things cute!

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Comments ( 5 )

The story was emotionally pleasing. I likey this stuff.

The biggest problem I had were the names, tho. After all, twilight is a time and dash is a - or a fast run.

Great ship hit in the feels though.

Okay, first off, let me just say that this story was a great one. But, I hope I don't sound rude, I found a few errors... such as:

...with apple Jack having a sudden influx of cider orders, and an array of many other things...

It should be Applejack.

...with twilight frequently being too busy to spend any substantial amount of time with her...

Twilight should be capitalized.

The rainbow dash, the tough, go-lucky mare of action, lonely?

Rainbow Dash should be capitalized too.

"Of course I will rainbow."

Rainbow should be capitalized also.

Other than those, everything else seems pretty on point. Again, this is a great story, I loved it!

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