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Rainbow Dash had always been a mare of action, but recently, the thought of the future had been scaring her. Who else better to comfort her than her closest friend?
Cute TwiDash one shot, filled to the brim with cuteness and snuggles and all things cute!
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The story was emotionally pleasing. I likey this stuff.
The biggest problem I had were the names, tho. After all, twilight is a time and dash is a - or a fast run.
Great ship hit in the feels though.
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D'aww! Thank you! ^~^
Okay, first off, let me just say that this story was a great one. But, I hope I don't sound rude, I found a few errors... such as:
It should be Applejack.
Twilight should be capitalized.
Rainbow Dash should be capitalized too.
Rainbow should be capitalized also.
Other than those, everything else seems pretty on point. Again, this is a great story, I loved it!
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