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Kaii-Leiko


A simple brony who loves writing and one day hopes to make a career of it. Loves anime, MLP, reading and Writing. Loves making new friends as well, if anyone wants to add me to Skype just contact me.

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Twilight Sparkle moves to Ponyville and begins learning the friendship is magic, little did she know she would also start learning the meaning of love. Rainbow Dash and Pinkie pie struggle with keeping their relationship a secret, and of being the, to their knowledge, only same-sex couple in Ponyville.

First Chapter will include things directly from the show as well as original, everything after Chapter 1 will be original, Will take place around the canon events of the show, with things from the episode being mentioned but happening before and after them. Some things are changed around though, such as Pinkie Pie and Rainbow Dash knowing each other before Twilight moves to Ponyville.

Chapters (9)
Comments ( 105 )

Oh, I do hope you continue this. Hope to see this updated soon. It's interesting seeing the "behind the scenes" so to speak. Do you plan on diverging at any point in the story? i.e. the characters like Dash and Pinkie actually letting the others know about their relationships?

One typo I caught. Okay, but Rainbow Dash...If your (you're) sad you can talk about it.โ€

Thumbs up from me and favorited!

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Thanks, I really, really, really appreciate your comment! Believe it or not I also appreciate your pointing out my typo, I try my best to keep them out. And yes, I definitely do intend on diverging from the story later on. As far as my plans go, this chapter is the only one that should contain scenes from the actual show, or at least for quite a while.

Once again, thanks a lot and I'm glad you enjoyed it.:twilightsmile:

It's alright- transitions could be smoother.

FAV, CAUSE' I ALWAYS LOVE TWISHY :rainbowkiss:

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Yes, Twishy is indeed mega!:yay:

And thanks, I'll be sure to try and improve my transitions.

Wait the fuck up... Dash and Pinkie supposedly never met eachother before Twilight came... I have nothing wrong with this fic besides that and I'm not askin you to rewrite it, but just add the Alternate Universe tag.:pinkiehappy:

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Are you serious? o-o I had no idea, honestly! Oh wow, yeah I'll be sure to change that. Thanks!

Well done. Didn't expect Twishy to be in here as a side story, so that's a nice touch, however, this chapter made it seem more twishy oriented than PinkieDash. Not sure what that could mean, but We'll see. :D
Can't wait to see what happens next.

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Hehe, one doesn't really take priority over the other. It's both a Twishy and Rainbow Pie story, but yeah some chapters will focus more on one than the other. At any rate, thanks for the comment and I'm really glad you enjoyed it. :twilightsmile:

Love every word of it:rainbowkiss: would be nice if you updated more often. Its really good and i love this story. Can i ask for moar?
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You most certainly can, and I wish I could update faster as well, unfortunately I can;t bring myself to rush just to get it out faster. I fear it would affect the quality. I promise I work as fast as I can and that I'll get chapter 3 out as quickly as I can. I'm glad you enjoyed it and I really appreciate your comment! Thanks!:twilightsmile:

Stupid storm knocked out my internet last night and kept me from reading this update. How dare it keep me from reading Twishy...
Anyways, I liked this chapter.

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Wow, must of been a pretty bad storm. Glad you enjoyed it, and thanks for the comment ^^

TWISHY! :yay::heart::twilightsheepish:
LOVE this soooo much! please more twishy! :rainbowlaugh:

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Thanks, I'm happy you liked it. If it helps at all I'm hard at work on chapter 3. :twilightsmile::yay:

This is a good story. We don't see much TwiShy and I think you did a good job with it. Also,in the upcoming chapters, is the rating going to switch to teen or mature? ;)

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Thank you for your feedback, I really appreciate it and am super glad you enjoyed it. I'm hard at work on chapter 3, just having a difficult time which is why it's taken so long but it shouldn't be much longer now. In the future chapters, yes I do believe it is definitely going to switch to teen and possibly a mature rating.

Ps: Bulbasaur is awesome

I'm looking forward to the next chapters. (Also, Bulbasaur is my favorite Pokemon EVAR!)

Um, are there going to be any more chapters? This is going good :rainbowhuh:

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There most certainly will be and I'm sorry it's taking so long. I just moved to a new place and starters new job so it's been super busy. Finally getting back on track with this!

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Oh, I seem to have cut a bit of my message, I referred to the Twilight and Lyra story. Congrats, btw :twilightsmile:

I'm glad you updated after such a long time. And chapter 3 was nice to read in my opinion. Can't wait for more. :)

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Glad you liked it! I'm gonn try and make you guys not wait so long for Chapter 4 hehe. Although I did just upload a new fic to unblock myself and it helped me plan out chapter 4 so I don't think it should be long at all ^^ Anyway, thanks for the read and comment.

D'aww... Can't wait for Flutter's reaction.

I noticed a couple errors here and there, such as missing punctuation, but..
I'm on my phone and it's 1:30 in the morning where I'm at so it'd be a little difficult to point them out.

Great chapter though, eagerly awaiting more.

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Actually it`s super weird. When I bring the text in from wherever I write it most of the time anything like paragraphs being separated or anything in italics is gone. It basically gives me a giant wall of text that I have to re-edit. It`s super frustrating and I don`t know why it does that...Anyway thanks, I`m glad you enjoyed it.

Now time to try and find some of those missing punctuations...

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Yeah, that happens to me too when I copy and paste things from Word.

Double spacing on here is when you have an extra line (or press of enter, to simplify... I guess) in between paragraphs. Word kind of auto-formats, but doesn't double space the same way.

Oh well.

Thanks for the new chapter. Can't wait to see Fluttershys reaction to the kiss, too. I liked how you writed Twilights inner thoughts. :twilightsmile:

Then applejack sees them, says things, they go to the party, gilda leaves, pink and dash come out, twilight and flutters come out, applejack and rarity (maybe), then spike gets the rest of the mares in ponyville leaving big mac with doctor whooves... I spend too much time on this site.

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Thanks, glad you liked it. :twilightsmile:

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Thanks man, now I gotta change my entire plot!

The conversations between the ponies was really cute. Liked it. You are doing a good job. :twilightsmile:

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Thanks, I like to think I've improved since the first chapter. Thanks for being a reader since like...The beginning. Means a lot to me. :twilightsmile:

(Joke) Alt. Title: Everybody Loves (Stuff In The Featured Box)

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xD Not gonna lie. Made me laugh hard.

D'Aww... Glad to see them finally together.

Its not perfect, but its good enough to entertain me

It was kinda weird on applejack to asume that Twilight ran after crying fluttershy just because she had a crush on her

I mean its only natural to try and cheer someone up, especially a friend >.>

Will follow, and I hope that you will keep up the good work

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Me too. ^.^

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I agree completely.

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Yeah thinking back on it, it wasn't my smartest choice hehe...I figured with her finding the books and how Twilight was acting kind of weird during their previous talk and with everything combined Applejack would have figured it out, but I see what you mean.

Thanks for the favourite and I'm glad you're at least enjoying it. I'll try to keep it up, although I'm currently writing events based around the Trixie episode and I'm kinda stumped, hehe...

I hope the next chapter comes soon!

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I've been working on it for a while. I'll have it up sometime next week, I'm taking a break currently due to the release of Dead Space 3.

Once more be sure to change out of hand or on the other hand to hoof, unless you're taalking about Spike. Other then that be sure to put " or even itacics (spelled that wrong) or bold the thoughts so others could understand it. As said before I'm a huge Pinkie Dash fan and love Twishy as well, though I 100% DESPISE Spike/Rarity but if it's just background noise then I can deal, honestly hoping you re-edit this chapter to clear up any mistakes, well read on now:twilightsmile:

Rather impressive, but I noticed a lot of errors with this chapter, please be sure to correct this. I really loved it though, though now I'm questioning just how six mortal ponies could defeat a Godddess......huh. Thought the battle against any of the Gods would be very, very hard. Or near impossible:facehoof:

Damn, I really loved this chapter but this was very, very hard to read. To be honest this needs to be seriously re edited. Poor Pinkie but I hope that they tell their friends soon and odd to see Flutter's get mad but nice to see once in a while. Can't wait to see more:ajsmug: Wonder if AJ loves anypony.:unsuresweetie:

A very well done chatper, this one was really amazing, Pinkie seems like she could use a smoke....or a drink:derpytongue2: Wonder if Derpy will be in this at all. And there you go Twi, go with what your heart says, not your rain:rainbowlaugh: I really liked this chapter, hoping that Rarity falls for Applejack or Big Macintosh as well:yay: Onto the next one. I'm glad Dash is going to tell everyone of her love for Pinkie.

I'm rather impressed by this, you had done very, very well with this. I love Gilda, she's my third favorite villian and I love seeing her be in fics. Damn, Rainbow really hurt Pinkie but it worked out real well, good for her, I'm quite impressed, I shall await for more:twilightsmile:

Ah'm gonna be honest here ya :ajsmug:... ah really wasn't expectin' a uptdate. But it was SOOO cool! :rainbowwild: And I like the way this is going. :twilightsmile: *Gasp* Andidontknowifyoueveraregoingtoupdatethisagainbutifyoudoimgoingtobelike.:pinkiegasp: So be a dear and pleeease uptdate this because I want to know how this end. It such a beautiful story. :raritystarry: If that is okay with you I mean, please don't be mad at me for saying it :fluttershyouch:

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Don't worry. I intend on seeing this through to the end, I really do. I can't always promise quick updates but I'll do my best.:twilightsmile:

Thanks for the support.

Shortish for my tastes, but I like all the dynamics between the couples and what is going on. Can't wait to see what comes next. : ).....geh, I say that *Can't wait* line in all my comments...but it's always true!

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