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I am loving this story more and more
First time I've ever seen the first chapter of a story with 31,000 words, pretty impressive in itself
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Fixed! Thanks.
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Yeah it probably coulda gotten broken down a little but honestly I like writing giant chapters and with how fimfiction tracks reading progress it really doesnt matter so much anymore.
You know I've got alot of positive comments about this story so far but it seems like its mostly disliked. :( Too bad.
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Dude, haters gonna hate.
Who cares what matters is that you take pride in what your own creation (Your own universe)
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One upvote from me either way, love this story
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I saw "31,000 words" in the comments and went. "... whoa. I'm.. I"m going to have to nip at this chapter one piece at a time..."
I do love transformy one-shots, but I do enjoy post-stuff as well. Especially with "how to deal with..." always a fun time.
That's an absolutely massive chapter...
This was a fun read I wonder what will happen next for Rarity.
Yay it begins and very little interesting, what does Elusive have planned?
Dude, this must be the biggest chapter I've ever seen
Nice story, though I have no idea why you got so many downvotes. I've certainly seen much worse be much less disliked.
Earned my like and a track, anyway. The jury is still out on that fave.
I hope this incident could lift the love-hunger-curse from the baby changeling queen.
I can't help but think that this isn't going to end well for the changelings if/when the truth about Elusive gets out, especially if it gets out to the public. If ponies are going full Ku Klux Klan on changelings now, just imagine what it'd be like if it got out that changelings can invade people's bodies and rewrite them and their minds at will...and that this ISN'T some BS cooked up by the racists? That's not just gonna make it harder on changelings, but ponies too, as everyone starts getting paranoid about wondering if their friends and family have been infected.
Also I have little sympathy for Chrysalis' whining about how changelings are being treated post invasion, since that's pretty much her fault. She attacked Canterlot, so she should have been prepared to face the consequences if she failed.
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The longest chapter I’ve ever read was in Fallout: Equestria, which had a 51k word chapter in it. When I first saw that, I couldn’t believe my eyes.
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Really? It has been quite some years since I read it, so I wouldn't remember. This one is still among the top 5 stories with huge chapters, though. Probably the only one with the first this huge.
Still want more soon, though
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I think the longest I've ever seen was some of those stories with the funny chapter names. Like Kwa something or other. has like 100K word chapters. .. 50 chapters+ and many still going. D:
Condescending or whiplash. I can't decide.
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More will come, eventually.
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What?
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Yeah, I've seen some 60+k monsters as well...
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The audience is supposed to feel pity about the race of shapeshifters who literally destroyed EVERY level of an entire nation in a single day because the ponies fought back and only won because of an asspull?
What the fuck?
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Beat, not destroy. Destroy insinuates permanency, death.
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Sounds pretty destroyed to me.
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The guard, not the changelings.
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*facepalm* Just... nevermind dude.
Now this is a quality chapter! Shame on the people downvoting though. I Wonder what the reasoning for that is.
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Excellent answer.
Now when are you going to reveal to the audience that Celestia is also a sleeper agent?
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NSFW stuff gets a certain amount of downvotes no matter its quality, I've seen some amazing nsfw still get a decent amount of early downvotes because people see it on the front page. After that you have to look through the groups to find it so only people who want to find this type of content, do. After this its usually upvote city.
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Here let me construct a play by play for you.
https://i.imgur.com/oeIdry1.png
Here you can see that the conversation is around the guard, as I am citing the part of the qoute wherein the guard was stated as being beaten, not destroyed.
https://i.imgur.com/mWdgx1w.png
Then here you decided that somehow I was talking about the changelings, when I was in fact, not.
I would advise that you get more real-world experience in conversing with others as this will help in understanding the subtle nuances of conversation.
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All ponies are changeling sleeper agents or mind controlled pony-changeling hybrids. Chrysalis wins. The end.
Did I guess the ending right?
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Please stop commenting.
Can't wait for more!
I want not expecting to be this long and was nice. Can't wait for next but i'm afraid it will not be fast if next one will be half long as this one. this one can be divided for 2 or 3 episodes.
So yes, some of outcomes can be predicted but , journey is not only beginning and end but also all that happened between and some time after end, making beginning new journey.
And there is Father, Mother and Grandmother plus other memner of ther familis.
I noticed an unfinished sentence:
There were also a ton of repeated words and spelling errors.
However, that being said, I enjoyed this immensely, and cannot wait for further chapters.
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Yeah I noticed a few after I posted it so me and my editor will be going over it again soon. Thanks!
Literally, the biggest chapter I have ever read... and I read Past Sins goddamnit!
Looks good and eager for more here.
oh this is just having me giddy for the rest of the story
though i guess that's mostly because Rarity and Elusive's current situation is satisfying my desire for corruption 
I'm eagerly looking forward to the next chapter
Eh.
Skimmed/skipped half the chapter because the CMC truly annoy me, too often it's just dumb kids being dumb, which isn't nearly as enjoyable to me as it once was in large quantities.
Also since it's been a while, so I can't remember just how big the egg was, just that there were issues getting it up there. Between that and the other modifications Rarity should look pregnant if not heavily pregnant! I understand Elusive is running interference so she doesn't notice, but should other ponies, especially Twilight, notice?
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She shifted her body and organs around to make it less noticable. Plus it's only been a few days of growing.
It seems Elusive's mentality has changed more and more away from usual Changelings. Maybe one day she and Rarity would fully merged and become a new kind of pony with best of both worlds? I bet Twilight would be delight to know that her lover could become anypony she dreamed about.
I do see how twilight being turned into a hybrid will affect t her going alicorn
So now Elusive is planning on having other changelings take over ponies, and more of the mane 6 no less.
I see nothing helpful for the changeling's cause in this plan at all. I don't know what all is going into this 'peace treaty' but I'd bet that the negotiations aren't taking 'changelings possessing ponies' into account. The way things are going, I half expect Equestria First being declared justified in their actions and Ponyville being burned down as 'Infested beyond saving' with Sweetie Belle holding the torch.
So delicious XD
i practically squeed out loud when i saw that this chapter was uploaded and had 26k words XD
am getting a bit worried about Sweetie belle though :/ she might actually aid those Equestria first dweebs... and her reaction to Rarity's situation has the potential to either break Rarity.... or cause her to hate Elusive with a passion :/ which would be really bad for the both of them....
Another huge chapter, lovely! Although the anal pieces in clop do make me uncomfortable as this does not fit my tastes, the plot overall greatly made up for it!
And with merging more ponies and changelings together? Not sure if I'd fancy that, even if it might better both. Especially since I'd like to preserve Twilight as she is now for some odd reason I can not really explain. Maybe the adorable way she is written here makes me want her to be immune to change. Exclusively having Rarity and Elusive is enough in my opinion.
But these are just opinions of mine. I will keep the follow on here to see where it goes, Thanks for updating, Jest!
P.S. Poor Silver Spoon, I really hope she gets accepted back in town soon, she has not done anything wrong!
Exited for the potential merge with Twilight. Great work, keep it up.
Very long chapters but very good chapters! Really enjoying reading this awesome story! Can hardly wait for more!
Right, so looks like pinkie is going to be joining up next. then i'd say fluttershy, followed by AJ and rainbow.
Also, i'm pretty sure Sweetie belle is going to screw rarity and elusive over big time at some point, well elusive anyway. depends on how merged they become.
Jeez, this is getting into some very deep planning now and I’m so eager for more!
Holy hell these word counts.
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No kidding, and in only two months? I couldn't write that much in two years.
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5k words everyday baby.