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Zennistrad


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“Wait, you killed me?”

“I’m pretty sure you were at least clinically dead for a couple minutes. So technically, yes.”

Takes place directly after the Twilight vs. Raven Death Battle. Spoilers for that, in case that wasn’t obvious.

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I was a bit sad that Twilight lost, but you can’t beat good ol’ science, logic, fact, and evidence, all of which Death Battle excels at.

Ergoan #2 · Mar 1st, 2018 · · 4 ·

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your joking right?

Raven actually watching MLP?

Headcanon accepted.

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I nearly choked on my dinner laughing at the comment. No. Literally.

This should've been the TRUE ending to the Death Battle. Becides that they're both voiced by Tara Strong they actually would get along if you think about it.

Awesome fanfic! I love it!

At least, that's a way to make up for it! Nice work! I give ya a couple of squee!

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Well she was shown in the preview analysis to watch Gossip Girl religiously so then there's that.

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Not just headcanon, it’s literally canon in Teen Titans Go that she’s a huge fan of the My Little Pony-equivalent of her world. Say what you will about that show, that’s actually a pretty amusing in-joke.

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Teen Titans Go... she is obsessed with their version of MLP (Pretty Pretty Pegasus)

You know what? That's a good ending to today's Death Battle! Thanks for writing! :pinkiehappy:

I LOVE this story, thought I hated that Twilight lost in her Death Battle, anyway you brought Pinkie and Deadpool into the story, why not Rainbow and she coughs up Starscreams spark before she chomps it back down?

A good little bit of stupid fun. Thanks for that.

I had a feeling someone would make a fanfic about the most recent Death Battle.

This fic pleases me after the predictable loss we just have. Now we need to prep Rarity, Applejack, Fluttershy, and possibly Starlight for the next one.

Sure kinda sucks that Twilight lost (watch out spoilers ahoy!), but at least unlike most Death Battles this one was left ambiguous whether or not Twilight actually died (hey, TVTropes said it that way at least, don't give those weird looks at me). I personally liked this fanfic for that reason; straight into fav!

I read there’s a bit of an ambiguous ending to the battle. Twilight lost (disappointing but oh well) but we don’t actually see her dead body, we only see an impact creator with her outline. She has gone through some serious injuries in the show, so some think there’s a chance she survived, albeit with a serious case of “amusing injuries” like she suffered in episode 15. It also helps that no episode with a pony fighter technically had a death before, since Starscream was immortal and Deadpool and Pinkie became friends. I guess take that anyway you want to but I thought it was interesting.

Also, good story.

Saw this one coming ... but no room for an appearance of Rainbow Dash belching out Starscream's spark?

(Could be worse, Screamer ... could be the other end.)

You could say raven's demon side did not like being inter-dimension teleportation and she couldn't control it's rage.
Maybe this might sound better than "Sorry about the whole ‘trying to kill you’ thing. I was just...really upset when you summoned me, and I got angry." But it's your choice how to tell your story and a happy conclusion to the actually fight

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My thoughts exactly, mein freund.
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Besides, if Twilight really did die, Raven might find herself at the business end of two fourth-wall breaking characters determined to make her loss very personal.

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Yup, Starscream just never catches a break.

I'm declaring this fanfic canon to the death battle. I love it! ^_^

Trigon would probably get along swimmingly with Tirek.

While I was a little disappointed that Twilight lost the Death Battle, I have to admit I kind of figured that Raven was going to win. She simply put has more combat experience than Twilight. This story really helped; I’m considering it to be canon to the DB.

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I was disappointed that Vegeta and Mewtwo ended with a friendship, but the princess of friendship didn't.

I honestly really couldn't see that battle going in Twilight's favor. Like they explained at the end of the battle, a lot of Twilight's most powerful attacks were from others' assistance, so I called Raven's win before the battle even started. Was still a pretty good match, though. And I like this as an add-on to the ending. It's quite believable given what Raven was doing when she appeared at the start.

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That was my thinking as well—could have brought RD and SS in at some point also. But if we had to choose one of the other MLP battles over the other, Pinkie and Deadpool was the obvious choice.

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Yeah, Discord and Pinkie plus Celestia , Luna and Cadence would be coming for her head.

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It's actually gonna be more than that; her brother, her friends, her best assistant, and so many more.

Yeah, Raven won't stand a good chance if that happened.


Perhaps I may add to the honor of doing a TVTropes page for this fanfic?

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Its not a headcanon. Raven's a pegasister in TTG.

THIS IS MY NEW DB HEAD CANNON!

Awesome and great ts my head cannon twilight didn't actually die since we didn't see her body

1 Win, 1 Loss, and 1 Draw for the Mane 6 so far.

Who do you think the rest of them will face off against (if at all)?

Here's some of my hopeful speculation for flavor:

Fluttershy vs. Cream The Rabbit (Sonic The Hedgehog Series)
Applejack vs. Jack (MAR Anime/Manga Series)
Rarity vs. Pearl (Steven Universe Series)

Rather than echoing what everyone else is saying about this being the perfect headcanon (and it is; well done), I'm going to point out that Tara Strong voiced both Raven and Twilight Sparkle and just kinda let the irony sit.

This story was awesome, good sir.

Guys, I don't know if it's going to contain enough material, but does anyone think that this fanfic deserves it's own TVTropes page?

Heh. Fun.
Especially the bit that referenced the Pinkie/Deadpool battle.

Actually, last I heard there were only fifty-two universes,” said Raven. She paused for a moment, reconsidering her statement. “Though to be honest, I really have no idea how the cosmology works. It sometimes feels like whoever made it all is just making it up as they go along.”

*looks to DC*

Do you get it?

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Ah yeah, their New 52. I hated how they characterized Raven and Mr. Freeze there.
Though I must say, Batman proposing to Catwoman was cute and heartfelt.

Wow...that was quick. The video only came out like what 12 hours ago? Man you work fast, but all in all a jolly good story!

I laughed. Nothing more need be said.

"What the... She's back up, Wiz! She's back up!"

"Indeed. This is one of those rare Death Battles where it really did just end in a knockout. Given Celestia and Luna, it's entirely possible that when Twilight became an alicorn, she also became immortal, though clearly not invulnerable. We can't tell for sure given that Raven revived her, but it would explain her continued brain activity even after getting crushed by the soul-self."

"But, but it's right there in the name! Death Battle! What a ripoff."

"This may actually be for the best."

"A tiny baby horse girl toy still walks, Wiz. Explain how that is for the best."

"Remember, Boomstick, Equestria has two princesses who move celestial objects on a daily basis, a spirit of chaos who can do almost anything... and a pony who knows where we live."

"Oh. Right. The pink one. Yeah, probably a good thing Raven didn't double tap. ... You don't think she noticed, do you?"

"Oh, she noticed alright."

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....Ok. That last one gets one point. Mostly because it’s the one pairing that I see working.

I think Talia is a crazy bitch, by the way.

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OH SHIT.

ABORT ABORT ABORT!

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Pfft! The moment a friend told me DB was doing this matchup I just scrunched my face up and said: "Huh... Voice Actor Match. And Raven's going to DESTROY Twilight."

Did they kind of gloss over Raven's vastly superior combat experience?

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I knew from the start Twilight is going to be heavily disadvantaged; Raven can beat an empowered demon all by herself while Twilight needed the help of three alicorns to do the same. I'm kinda surprised they didn't do the whole deal they did with Deadpool and Pinkie though.
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Deh, never liked that crazy sword-assassin. Too evil for my tastes.
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WELL DON'T JUST STAND THERE. BAIL OUT OF THE FOURTH WALL!

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Probably too many fans of DB out there who would cry for blood if SOMEONE didn't actually beat a pony the third time 'round. Raven was the perfect setup, really.

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Well, as much as I try to pertain from swearing, these people can go to hell..

Eh, whatever, at least DB was nice enough to give that ambiguous ending.

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I already knew it from the get-go. I knew Raven will Win, because, seriously. Raven literally had a HUGE advantage between Twilight. I have no regrets of knowing the outcome to this battle. Well played.

Raven let out a sharp gasp. “Oh my god! That was Twilight Sparkle! I just crushed my favorite pony!”

Suddenly she heard an distant voice:
:rainbowdetermined2:: "Hey! I'm supposed to be everyone's favorite pony""

“Don’t worry about it,” said Twilight. “Hay, I can think of at least two ponies who have tried to kill me that are now some of my closest friends.”

Let's see: Nightmare Moon/Luna, Pinkie Pie (hot sauce in episode 1), Starlight Glimmer, Sunset Shimmer, probably a few more.

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