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Legendbringer


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"To the city of Titans you will go, to the days of future past and back through Apocalypse. See the end of ends, and then battle my illusion.

Twilight and friends find themselves in a world of heroes, changed into their power ponies selves. There they must ask, who sent them and why? Meanwhile, two young women deal with nightmares from their past, reminding them of the horrors that they have wrought. United, the trio must go through challenges and many battles to find the cause of all of it, and save the universe once again.

They will travel through hell and back, seeing once and for all the heart of a hero and why friendship will never fail.

A crossover between X-men, Teen Titans, and MLP.

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Comments ( 73 )

This chapter is awesome. I am so excited to see what happens next.

“Jump back and forth between cities you will go. To Apocalypse and back to Future’s Past, you will find your path to the End of Ends. Then, you will meet the Illusion of my facade, before knowing the truth.”

This is a great use of title drops.

Holding out her hand, she began to count on her fingers, “Our friends are missing. I am stuck on a parallel world where I never met my human friends. Stuck in a human body. Some man in a black outfit and the silliest mask I had ever seen in my life sent me here. So all in all,” she let out a sigh and leaned against the wall, “A typical Tuesday in the life of Twilight Elizabeth Sparkle, Princess of Friendship, Duchess of Barnes But-No-Bell, and Conqueror of the Unreadable Mountain.” holding out her hand, she did not notice the faint purple glow that surrounded it, nor a man screaming about his missing cup of coffee. “I wish I had a cup of coffee to help me focus.”

Just as she said this, a cup of coffee levitated into her hand. Her eyes opened wide as she looked at the hot beverage in her hand. Bringing it to her mouth, she sniffed and then took a small drink of the liquid, “Wait, what?” taking another long sip of coffee, she looked at the cup. “How did? When did I?”

Oh, Twilight, this is why we love you.

Loved the opening fight against the Mane-iac, and the nod to Famke Janssen and Sophie Turner.

Just everything involving the Mane Six and cars.

And the end of the chapter...

Why not introduce Spike as Humdrum, but actually make him useful, like hand-to-hand combat or something. Also, since you name-dropped Sunset, so maybe you can invent a heroic identity for her and drop her in the fray

The cover art confuses me. Is this anthro or not?

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They are humanized.


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Because, working with a whole team of X-men, Titans, and ponies and to make room for Spikey-wikey is insane!


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Thank you!

Wow, you got featured pretty darn fast, grats. Definitely gonna read this when I have a moment.

I didn't think anything could make displaced look like good reading, but I'd forgotten of the poisoned well jussonic turned fanmakes into. The crossover section at FF.net is still recovering. :pinkiesick:

So you are also deconstructing Mykan's infamous fanfic I take it?

I still can't believe that you tried to mix Marvel and DC together. If you want to mix them, at least acknowledge that Marvle and DC are two separate Universes, otherwise this is just a story that had a lot of potential but fell flat on its face.

after riffing a certain author's story for a bit, I started to come up with an idea for a story where I could explore the themes and ideals that the author set up and then present my own argument about it.

Hmmm, wonder how connected? Because this fanfic does not really seem to have much to do with that certain author at all, nor have I ever recalled that certain author writing about X-Men. 'Course, I have not read the story yet, but I just want to know ahead of time. Seeing that you title-dropped the End of Ends, though, and this fanfic involves the Teen Titans, I have a certain idea what this story is going to be about. Strange figure is probably the Count, having regained some moment of control and sanity to send the Mane Six to stop evil him.

Will this fanfic have anything to do with your own RoF-verse (that is what I am calling it now)? Or is it more of a thematic connection?

P.S. : Will you ever return to Rebirth-verse again and explore more about the characters? Like for example, the adventure of Lightning Dawn in a new world, trying to find his own identity? Maybe that Legend of Zelda crossover you subconsciously wanted to write about but did not have the time? Also, another question, one I should have asked long ago: who married Krysta?

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I am sorry about that, but I hope the rest of the story makes up for that.


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Ah, you get it. Give it time, the tale has just begun. Let's just say the X-men are replacing a certain team.

Will this fanfic have anything to do with your own RoF-verse (that is what I am calling it now)? Or is it more of a thematic connection?

No, it doesn't have that connection. Trust me, Twilight and the others would be so more battle ready if that were the case.

Will you ever return to Rebirth-verse again and explore more about the characters? Like for example, the adventure of Lightning Dawn in a new world, trying to find his own identity

Maybe. If I can think of ideas for it. I do have an idea for something for the annivserary of the finale.

who married Krysta?

Lighting

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Ah, you get it. Give it time, the tale has just begun. Let's just say the X-men are replacing a certain team.

So it is Count Logan! Wonder who the X-men will be replacing, though, since I never read the original.

Lighting

Hmm, should have figured that out soon. I mean, by the end of your story, Lightning and Krysta were clearly considering being more than just friends, and Krysta did achieve a bigger form when she transformed into a flutterpony.

Maybe. If I can think of ideas for it. I do have an idea for something for the anniversary of the finale.

Ahh, interested. Wonder what that will be. Maybe Lightning finds an alternate idea where the roles were reversed (smug Twilight will be a weird experience). Or an alternate universe where Starfleet was actually heroic (summoned there by a heroic Celesteo in a desperate attempt to cure his All-Might style injury that is preventing him from being more active). Maybe Twilight and co. find out Legend Bringer the pony, who reveals more about the nature of their world. Ideas are endless.

No, it doesn't have that connection. Trust me, Twilight and the others would be so more battle ready if that were the case.

A question, then: how long would the Power Ponies last in their current state against:
1) the forces of Dark Conquest (including Kudos, Rhymey, Raven, and the Necromancer)
2) Starfleet soldiers and the Replacements that Celesteo chose for Lightning (kind of forgetting if Starfleet is the name of the government or Lightning's Sentai team)
3) Gallant and Unos' force

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Lighting

ONE OF THESE DAYS, YOU ARE GOING TO SPELL HIS FREAKING NAME RIGHT!!!!!!

Loved the first chapter can't wait for the next...

(Please feature Iceman...Please feature Iceman...)

Kinda disappointed that Spike got left out.... really wanted to see him contribute to the team....

Also, Rainbow Dash is surprisingly chill about not being the fastest on the team anymore... and I like it, it shows that when the situation is dire she puts everything else before her personal issues. Then again considering she can control lightning, maybe she could supercharge her body to fly faster.

That being said, will the ramifications of the main six going missing from Equestria be explored? Will we see Spike, Starlight, and the rest of their friends trying to find a way to bring them back? Or is this a case of time flowing differently in this world and when they eventually go back only a few minutes will have passed?

Anyway, this story is off to a genuinely interesting start, looking forward to the next chapter!

I realy miss City of Heroes, Champions online wont cut it for me.... Anyway, nice first chapter.

I assume that you're deconstructing The End of Ends.
If so, I can imagine one line the heroes can say to the villain.
"You know, when a guy doesn't get the girl, he doesn't normally go on destructive rampages."
As for the human versions of the Mane 6 in this world acting weird... that was odd. Intentional I'm sure. Also, it's kind of funny how a lot of hair stylists knew a hair-themed supervillain was gonna attack.
I'm surprised that Rainbow Dash forgot about the Crystalling, seeing as she got cold there. Then again, Season 6 was pretty forgettable.
Anyway, let us know when the next chapter comes out.

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I assume that you're deconstructing The End of Ends.
If so, I can imagine one line the heroes can say to the villain.

Bingo.

As for the human versions of the Mane 6 in this world acting weird... that was odd.

This was my way of filling in a plot hole of "Why not ask Sunset for help." and show that this is not the saem human world that the Equestria girls live in. This is a seperate universe where the mane six are all sterotype teenagers and Sunset is a big sister to Twilight.

Also, it's kind of funny how a lot of hair stylists knew a hair-themed supervillain was gonna attack.

That hairstylist man, she knows things. She prdicted the ending of many anime and has also called out sever super villian attacks.

I'm surprised that Rainbow Dash forgot about the Crystalling, seeing as she got cold there. Then again, Season 6 was pretty forgettable.

You can chalk that up to two possible explinations. 1) The cold in the Crystaling was so [pwerful that it over took the natural immunity to coldness. Or two, I kind of forgot that episode since it was kind of a weak opener and kind of dismissed it from my head.


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Never played it, but always wanted to.


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Kinda disappointed that Spike got left out.... really wanted to see him contribute to the team....

Yeah, I am not that good with Spike. So I tend to leave him out of the big adventures.

Also, Rainbow Dash is surprisingly chill about not being the fastest on the team anymore... and I like it, it shows that when the situation is dire she puts everything else before her personal issues.

Thanks, its kind of a thing I notice with Dash in some of my favorite episodes. Putting her friends first when it's something important. If it's something like Discord being cold, eh, who cares, but friends are in real trouble itsthem first. I'll have Dash deal with her personal problems later, but at that moment she knew she was needed.

That being said, will the ramifications of the main six going missing from Equestria be explored? Will we see Spike, Starlight, and the rest of their friends trying to find a way to bring them back? Or is this a case of time flowing differently in this world and when they eventually go back only a few minutes will have passed?

Don't know yet, I might.

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Yeah. The Crystalling was very underwhelming.
The only thing that would make this chapter better would have been Rarity saying how Count Logan's clothes don't match.

Comment posted by heavens-champion deleted Sep 21st, 2018

I'd think rainbow would keep her usual speed even if now pinkie is a speedster by superpower, also combining these 3 worlds/universes hmm... You have me intrigued, now to the armed grande, really? rainbooms? I don't think RD of that world/universe would know that name I thought she'd go by either Mane 6, Wonderbolts or even Power ponies (even if that last one would be a bit corney) and shouldn't Spiderman have stayed to meet a new fellow hero (s)? Also wonder what's gonna happen with Flash, Storm, Wonder-woman & Hulk? (I think I'm missing others names but can't think of them at the moment )

I love each and every moment of this chapter.

Doctor Strange talking with Twilight about magic. Also, the moment of Celestia stepping up to the plate now that the Mane 6 are elsewhere.

Jean and Scott being an adorable married couple.

Diana and Ororo talking about the latter's claustrophobia. Despite the situation, it was hilarious that Ororo destroyed a box designed to contain her with no effort.

The reference to Mr. Cephalopod.

The argument between Perry and Jonah. I appreciate the nod to the 90's Spider-Man cartoon.

Logan accidentally blowing Maggie's undercover op. Also, him flipping the bird.

Matt and Kurt with the nun in the church.

Colossus and Geoforce talking about their respective sisters.

Hmm... It seems Count Logan is actually acting like the guy he's referencing... Can't wait to see what happens.

-In case anyone asks, Jubilee and Kitty are right now on a roadtrip with Babs and Kara. They are having some epic adventures.

I would love to see how that's going.

-Dr. Fate and Dr. Strange do get into matches on who is the best, their wives just roll their eyes at this.

Heh. Wonder what happened after this:

Inza: Really? "I am here to resolve this embarrassment."?

Hmm I imagine another person to never show up is Darkseid because he'd have the same problem the other villains you listed though interestingly he apparently did fight Thanos at one point in the comics during one of the marvel/DC crossovers back when they still did such things and won taking the infinity gauntlet from him only to throw it away as being useless for him(Doesn't work in the DC universe apparently).

A pity but understandable about Doctor Doom not showing up he was always gloriously over the top no matter who he is up against be it spiderman, superman, the fanastic four and other heroes.

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A pity but understandable about Doctor Doom not showing up he was always gloriously over the top no matter who he is up against be it spiderman, superman, the fanastic four and other heroe

Yeah, and that is one of the reasons. The other is that Doom is my favorite villian of comics ever. So, me writing him is like giving me a chance to ditch the other villians.


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Heh. Wonder what happened after this:

Basically she was just tired and did not want to hear it.

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Basically she was just tired and did not want to hear it.

Yeah, that sounds about right.

Not bad. This probably won't happen, but I wonder if the other superhero teams will play supporting roles. I can already imagine Wolverine getting annoyed with Pinkie Pie.

Comment posted by SellZaWarudo deleted Sep 28th, 2020

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I'll reference them, but I am going to try and stick around with just the three teams. I am only one man.


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Also wonder what the game they are talking about is (some plan to stop Calamity Conquest?)

Now I just want Starfleet breath of the wild to be a thing. Actually the game will ebe revealed later on.

Then again, the original X-men probably had the same Question as well.

Yeah, in the original X-men, not much was made of the "protecting those who fear them" idea and they were kind of more just superhero team. There is a reason why they failed as a team for a while until Chris Clairmont came into the picture.

does that mean that some other person named Legend Bringer writes fanfics deconstructing and reconstructing his fanfics?

*Looks at the me from another verse, and waves hi* This kind of thought is so meta and deep man. Anyway, knowing my love of the stories, yeah I am probably doing the same thing.

Interested to see how you would pull off a three-way crossover. Its the X-Men/Teen Titans/MLP crossover. It is going to be a hard chance, especially if people are not familiar with canon (and I doubt anyone really knows all of a comic's canon).

Yeah, it will be tough. Times like that, I usually look at some of my favorite large crossovers and think of what makes work for me. And I take some lessons from a lot of reviews I read. For instance, Avengers and why it worked. You could literally just watch the first two Iron Man films and get there and you would not be lost. Why? Simple, because they just give you the characters and power set without needing to explain much of the backstory. This makes yu curious and you can explain later.

Another example, for me, is a game called Jump Vstars. They just gave me the power set, character names, and I was interested in who those people were and their anime.

Is this person supposed to represent someone? If so, who?

No one, this was based on the gag from the X-men anime where Beast made a super smart squid. I love that joke and decided to do it with a lobster.

2) If the Mane Six have counterparts in the DC/Marvel verse, does that mean the DC/Marvel verse has counterparts in the FiM verse? Is there some pony named Tuner Stark who is busily building magic-powered armor? Was Startling Strange fighting off Dormammu while the battle of Sun and Moon raged on?

Of course! The mane six can't handle all of the problems that a world has. Maybe they arent the excat same, but you know how the multiverse works.

"Somewhere in the multiverse, there is a world where YOU are Captain America."

3) Does Starfleet from RoH have counterparts here? If so, what are they like?

Yeah, and I might have them show up as a fun cameo or a referencre to the eariler story to make you guys go, cool!

4) Can Equestria magic be used in DC/Marvel verse? Does Hamon exist here?

5) Having reread Rise of Harmony, I discovered that Hamon exists there? Does that mean the Joestars and the Zeppelis exist there as well?

They do there, but they are not the usual awesome selves. Who do you think Sunstar was based on?

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Sounds fair. Three teams seems more manageable, anyway.

Comment posted by SellZaWarudo deleted Sep 28th, 2020

should I add adaptational heroism for Logan to the tropes page???

A young japanese school girl ran faster than anyone else,” Ara iyada! Kore ga watashi ga Nihon o hanareru riyūdesu! Watashi wa betsu no mono o motteinai! Ich,Tsu no shokushu no akachan wa jūbun ni arigatō!”

I se what u did there:trollestia:

Comment posted by SellZaWarudo deleted Sep 28th, 2020

MY name’s Hot Missile,” he chuckled and looked to his teammates, “and there is Rock Hard, Steel Ball, and Expendable Crook.”

Who's going to be the first to make an innuendo?

Also, is that the same Steel Balls from Fall of Starfleet: Rebirth of Friendship? The prison warden?

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Nah, different guy, similar name.

Well, this has been an interesting chapter.
As for the museum pieces... I'm not exactly an avid reader of the Marvel comics, but I get the impression that the suit of armor was supposed to foreshadow Apocalypse. Not sure what the rest are foreshadowing, though.
As for the mysterious force controlling Beast Boy, there's just something about the green eyes and feminine voice that makes me think of Queen Chrysalis, but I'm pretty sure it's someone else.

I read ‘Dark Prognosticus’ and immediately thought ‘Bleh-heh-heh! BLECK!’ Anyone else?

Oh mah god
Dats an awesome cover
I can just hear the infinity war theme

Is the power ponies episode canon in this?

Ehhhh I think it's a bit past for the reflection and self loathing making applejack misinterpret her friends words And Fluttershy wasn't a complete hulk clone more like inner beast ability cause at the end of the comic episode she was still big and buff and passive maybe this is me being nit picky but I feel like it has to be said

Comment posted by heavens-champion deleted Nov 30th, 2018

The leader of the criminal group, dressed in a burned leather jacket and jeans, stepped up to the top of a car and shouted, “Yeah, listen up all of you worthless pieces of crud, Intergang is in town! That’s right, we’re putting ourselves in here and takin over! MY name’s Hot Missile,” he chuckled and looked to his teammates, “and there is Rock Hard, Steel Ball, and Expendable Crook.”

Expendable Crook. That's embarrassing.

I was kinda hoping that Spike would be included with the ponies (But as a more competent Humdrum where he uses martial arts)

While in the midst of Rainbow performing a roundhouse kick into the chest, one of Mane-iac’s tentacles grabbed her extended leg and flung her up into the air and then slammed Dash hard into the ground.

It's a good thing Rainbow Dash is a superhero, otherwise that would have killed her.

Comment posted by heavens-champion deleted Mar 22nd, 2019

If the main OCs in this story and the Power Ponies were voiced, what would they sound like?

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