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I hope there's going to be more?....:unsuresweetie:

Is Spike and Shining gonna beat the f**k outa each other if the secret is exposed? :pinkiecrazy:

And this is how the Crystal civil war began.

That picture tho O.O

Spike and Cadance... why do I think the Crystal Ponies would not have a problem with that?

Love the story please do more 😁

Why am I thinking of Home Alone Tonight by Luke Bryan right now?

Well, I have a strange feeling that her "husband" is NOT her husband. Something tells me that her real husband is in grave danger.

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If this story can get over a thousand likes, and or is Featured, I will make a sequel that is much longer and more detailed. :moustache:

Revenge is the best, especially when its justified.

A divorce would be too kind, it would only give Armor a reason to see Twilight more and it could weaken the morale of the Crystal Empire’s citizens.

She could remarry Spike and the Crystal ponies would go gaga over that, and she still has the recording. Time to teach her 'husband' and 'sister' the meaning of loyalty. Looks like she has something BIG planned for Spike.

K. I demand a sequel.

And maybe anoter story with SPike an Chrysalis.

Hope Spike will be ok after he learns that :fluttercry:

So... as said Twilight and shining cheated on their partners, Spike and Cadance respectively. The main question I have is why? Twilight and Spike we’re together for 4 years, 4 YEARS!! And she shags up with Armor for... what? I’m sorry this kind of story really sets me off. Justified cheating, there is such a thing, is fine go at it like rabbits for all it’s worth. Unjustified cheating, that is what this seems to be, is not.

Man this was great and all. But as a twispike shipper I'm hurt. God thats horrible. What Happ not the story, the story gets a thumbs up, nice

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so the answer's no?

As a great man once said. Revenge solves everything.

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You want me to enter this story in this Contest? :rainbowhuh:

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The answer is yes actually... it got featured :D

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Somehow this story was Featured...so there will be a Sequel in the works. I can either do another 1K, or go into much greater length and detail. Which do you prefer?

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I’m not saying anything. Just that if you’re going to write something like this, you might as well try to win some money on the side. :raritywink:

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I’ll give it a shot. Win or lose, I still have a chance to write something for someone to enjoy.

Good. Now i gotta wait for more :fluttershbad:

Well, there's the feature. Sequel incoming?

I would love to see more detail for this. I get that your "testing" the waters with this, and I hope you found what your looking for to continue.

I'm looking forward to a detailed explanation, incest sex that probably dates back to earlier years, hot piny princess on dragon clop (with a height increase for Spike), drama and maybe, just maybe, a new married couple.
Because let face it, a princess, a hero and a nation of loving ponies would be a better fit for the Empire!:moustache:

When Shinning armor And spike see each other after.

Shinning- Sub zero
Spike- Scorpion

FEATURED 09/11/18

In America, this is September 11
In EU, this is November 9
In ISO, this isn't even correct, but would be close to November 18, 2009 (I think)

So...

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Good start. Definitely needs more chapters though.
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This wasn't the only mistake, but definitely the biggest.

and gaze. It seems Armor’s passion

"It seems

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*sniff sniff*
I smelled a Spike story, so here I am.

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I don’t care! I just like to see how it ends, and how Spike and Candace get revenge on those two backstabbing pricks.

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Thank you, I was in such a rush to add that, I messed up the date :rainbowlaugh:

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I was recommended to your contest, i will be submitting another Spike cheating love story to it. That’s all the hints you’ll get :moustache:

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It would appear so. :twilightsmile:

Cadance knew this, because the night after Flurry was born, Armor wasted no time fucking his wife to make up for the months she was pregnant.

This seems rather ill-advised, at best.

I'm not a doctor, but to my understanding, doctors would say sex is okay during pregnancy since it reduces hypertension, as long as they don't do anything too extreme during sex, or if there's complications that would cause it to put the baby at risk.

Also, to my knowledge, doctors typically heavily discourage having sex for the first six weeks after giving birth.

If I'm wrong, please tell me so in the comments.

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No, you are medically correct and sex during pregnancy is discouraged only within the last month or so to prevent inducing labor. But since we are going by horse anatomy and not humans, i figured I can be a tad different about it. But you are correct.

If this was meant to be the first chapter of a story then I would be more forgiving toward the paltry word count and the lack of content that would warrant those tags, but since you admitted upfront that a followup is optional (though it looks like it will happen), I feel like you're doing the reader a great disservice here.

But hey, I guess the teasing worked. :scootangel:

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Well this is part of my 1K, and since it was Featured, i will be doing a much longer and much more detailed Sequel. :twilightsmile:

Alright, I'll bite. You've got me interested. Tracking to see where this goes.

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I guess if its not any trouble longer and more detailed:ajsmug:

Hmm, I’ll keep an eye on this, just work out most of the mistakes if you can, then I’ll upvote

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it was hard to tell if it was going to be: I have no idea what gets something featured (hell, I got banned once for posting a prank chapter that was nothing but the letter "a" a million times over, because it somehow got featured!) but one thing's for sure: getting featured is DEFINITELY more feasible than getting 1,000 upvotes

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Cause Cadence is their lost ruler who's returned to fight evil and Spike saved the Crystal Empire twice. Or I'm just a weird hobo who's a Princess Cadence Fan and thinks that Spike is Awesome. Either option works.

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So this a preview then? Fine, I'll wait.

OH my somedrake is going to get some pink puss and does spike have two dicks or just one

Spikes been dating twilight for four years and they have never had sex? If he is not waiting for a specific reason then it’s probably best they break upas it’s not going anywhere.

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