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Beneath the Empire

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Alticron

Alticron #1 · March 8th · · ·

Pretty good story, though there are a couple of grammar mistakes you may want to edit.

For example, there's a part where you call both Cadance and Frosty princesses.

he Princess and Princess moaned out, feeling as their passions only swelled and swelled.

And one part where you say "effect" instead of "effective".

“You don’t say.” Cadance replied, almost wide eyed as she was realizing what he was getting at. Nervously laughing, she couldn’t help but fidget a little. “And…how effect would this enchantment be?”

Holocron

Holocron #2 · March 8th · · ·

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Thanks, I was struggling a lot cause I hardly ever do a Flurry genderbend story.

francisthewitcher

francisthewitcher #3 · March 17th · · ·

Wow that was so good! Is there gonna be a sequel?

Holocron

Holocron #4 · March 17th · · ·

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If the commissioner wants it.

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