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What the f*** is wrong with her? If she admits that the sex was "good", then why is she damning herself to miss out a very good and constant sex for over 20 years!? Her "reasoning" makes no f***ing sense. Makes her no better than a Karen.
I highly doubt it, because if Flurry was acting like this. It clearly shows that both Cadence and Gleaming WEREN'T doing very good job at being parents without ya.
Please, please do. I hope you can finally talk down to Cadence, and finally get rid of her damn stallion-hating attitude once and for all.
How the hell can she be a "princess of love", if she still has this toxic hatred within her!?
I highly, highly doubt it. You are way worse in my opinion. And unlike Flurry, at least she doesn't hate a single gender for very toxic reasons.
Even after 20 long dang years.
She is literally damning herself to not have his amazing "dong" ever again? We all know how she felt during that night, but she is still acting like a total fool on not doing again with him. Just because of his gender!?
I can't believe I'm saying this, but she really is a f***ing Karen in this story!
Cadence is still pissing me off. If she just accepted him as her real husband. Maybe Flurry having her father probably wouldn't act like this in the first place.
Of course he is, he's the father. And you need to stop it with your attitude, or I will!
Please fix her, or let someone else will like Luna or Twilight.
Even I can do with her toxic attitude, and fix her straight.
See, you are diluting and hurting yourself for no good reason.
You could have a wonderful husband/father if you just accepted him!
Oh crap! That stupid pact is obviously a trap!!!
Because, we all know where this is heading between him and Flurry. And that will obviously "break" the past anyway.
He'll be doped from the start.
Ok, how in the hell can someone be angry at another person for 20 YEARS when that person didn’t do anything but treat them with respect and kindness?
This is how I know that’s a Spell is a better person than me. Because if someone did nothing but disrespect me for no damn reason, I’m going to snap and unload all of my anger on that person.
To be honest, someone needs to slap some sense into Cadence.
To be honest, she doesn’t deserve the title of “princess of love.” (In this timeline.)
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I know, right!!!???

Celestia, or Luna, or even Twilight needs to finally TALK to her about this.
If not, I hope Spell actually gets frickin tired of it, and finally gives a piece of his mind. Princess or not!!!!
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This was a very well thought out, and detailed analysis. Thank you so much, I appreciate when readers put this much care and interest in my stories. And I hope you enjoy more of what is to come.
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I agree with you on that comrade, she is definitely the queen of all Karens.
This bitch needs someone to knock her off her high horse once and for all. You know it’s bad when blue blood looks like a saint compared to her.
Sweet a sequal! While some bits dont make sense im just gonna trust that the writer knows what their doing. And as for the 20 years thing remember that she's an Alicorn. 20 years isnt even a sliver of their lifespan. To a normal person its probably the equivalent of a few weeks or months.
Yes, a sequel. And with Flurry Heart, no less!!
Good old Trollestia is at it again. She's obviously plotting to kill three birds with one stone.
We all know that spell will end up fucking Flurry and by the end it will solve a lot of problems at once.
Very nice!!
Flurry Heart really did learn from her parents. That sneaky little princess.
Thanks for another good chapter
Meh hope this is gonna get turned around on her soon. Plus if he really gave a damn he could just have Celestial or Luna remove it.
Well, it seems that everyone truly underestimated Flurry Heart. Though this shouldn't be a surprise to Cadance and Gleaming, they both know how much of whore Flurry is and should have known that no that no matter what, that girl will get what she wants.
So, in the end the pact was completely pointless just as keeping who her father a secret was just as useless.
I still believe Celestia knew this was going to happen, nothing in the pact said anything about Flurry pulling off the trick she used to get him to fuck her, and she knows how much all Spell's daughters wants to fuck him and knowing just how much of whore Flurry is, she was no different.
Spell and Cadance should have known that this pact was never going to work. They underestimated Flurry and who she is. At this point, Spell should just come clean cause now there's no point in keeping who he is a secret from her anymore. Flurry wanted to fuck her father and did, so just tell her already, it won't make any difference now that he knows her true self.
What a whore….
That's pretty fucked up, ngl
Damn it, Spell
Stop holding out. There's literally no point and you have no excuse to keep the truth hidden from her.
She wants to fuck her father. She's barely any different from all your daughters that also wants to fuck you. So, why keep up this charade. She's a whore, you know she's a whore, everyone knows she's a whore. You already broken your vow to never fuck any of your kids. This was going to happen no matter what, so stop messing around.
Its clear that Celestia and Luna are trying to get you two together. They clearly don't approve of Cadance way of handling the situation between you and Flurry. That contract was just a hoax because it never mentioned anything about Flurry starting things and abusing her power as a princess over you, a royal guard
As I said before, everyone knows Flurry a whore. That includes the royal sisters. Hell, I wouldn't be surprised if Flurry already knows that you're her father and just pretending that she doesn't. There are two ways this is possible.
1. You said it before yourself. Flurry is clever. She may always have cock on the mind but that doesn't mean she's not intelligent.
Not to mention the way you were treating her when you two went out for ice cream. There's no way she didn't figure it out on her own. You're just too stupid to realize that because you keep underestimating her intelligence. You did so last chapter and look how well she played you.
And the second reason she could have known. Is that Celestia told her, before the contract deal was made. Celestia probably set this all up with Flurry, long before her birthday. Thus, both you and Cadance got played. Especially Cadance.
Celestia was way too prepared when coming up with that contract. As if she knew exactly how things would go.
As I said before, the contract does not mention Flurry doing anything.
Celestia must have told Flurry who her father is before the party. Told her all about him and what a magnificent lover he is. The two then came up with a plan to fool both Spell and Cadance. That moment when Flurry was eating ice cream with Spell. Her emotions were probably genuine, more than enough to fool Cadance.
Celestia and Flurry obviously knows that Cadance can read emotions. Which is why it was important for Flurry to feed into the emotions of meeting and spending time with her dad. It was all part of the plan and Cadance fell for it.
Both Cadance and Spell got played. They underestimated Flurry as well as Celestia and I bet Gleaming is also in cahoots with them. She's also a major slut.
The time will come when Cadance learns that Spell is fucking Flurry, and I won't be surprised if Flurry is the one to reveal that he is to her. No doubt Celestia, Luna, and Gleaming has a plan to get Cadance to admit that she does loves Spell's cock and stop lying to herself and Spell would no longer have any excuse to not fuck his other children. Because no doubt Celestia might tell them all.
This whole story is probably about getting both Cadance and Spell to drop their pointless morals and insecurities and open up.
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I have to say, I really enjoy reading this analysis of this story. It really shows how much you've been paying attention, and how well everything seems to look. I appreciate the comments my friend. Amazing work!
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I just love analyzing stories like this.
Thanks
Now I can only hope to see if my theories are on the money. I look forward to seeing the next chapter.
A fantastic chapter as always. I love when this series updates.
well this can count as my christmas gift
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Bravo, my man. Bravo on this amazing analysis. I also agree with the major stupidity of both Cadence and even Spell.
I really want them both to look back in the past, and feel really regretful of their very dumb choices back then, and should actually be thankful of Flurry Heart, their own daughter!!!
And even Celestia/Luna, Twilight, and Gleaming for opening their damn eyes of those two morons!!!

Ok, it's official. Flurry had known this entire time that Spell is her father and just keeps on teasing him for fun.
This proves that Gleaming is on the whole thing with Celestia, Luna and Flurry. They're all working together and now know that Twilight is on it as well.
This is how Gleaming learned about the "Daddy" thing. Flurry obviously sent her letter and more explaining things. No doubt Celestia was being told the news as everything was going as they planned.
Seriously Cadance. Everyone knows about your ability to read emotions. Which means there's something being used to fool your ability. I don't know exactly what and how, but you are definitely being played.
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But now there's only one thing left to figure out, and that's how our team of manipulators plan to get Cadance to confess that she loves cock mainly Spell's.
I'd theorize that they would want to get her to confess all on her own and I can think of one way they could do that and that's by pulling the old switcheroo.
The next time Flurry and Spell have sex they're going to be doing a bit of roleplay, where Flurry would "pretend
" to be Spell's daughter and only call him daddy the whole time.
Spell doesn't talk much during sex and I don't think he ever called out Flurry's name. All in all, he'll just call her names like whore or what not like he usually does.
As the sex grows more and more intense. Flurry would scream out how much she absolutely loves Spell's cock. Going crazy as she keeps saying how she really loves cock so much and how the cock fucking her now reminds her of Spell's amazing dick and admits how much she misses getting railed by it.
Spell is far too into his own pleasure to notice Flurry's words but he to also confesses to Flurry that he's her father and he absolutely loves fucking his own daughter. Believing that Flurry wouldn't take what he said seriously because of the roleplay.
Eventually the reach their peak together and came. With Flurry riding on top of Spell as he unloads inside her. Their eyes rolled to the back of their heads as they experience the greatest orgasm they ever had before.
And when they finally come down from their orgasmic high. They turn to look at each other only to be absolutely shocked at who they were staring at.
Instead of Flurry, Spell was looking at Cadance and instead of Gleaming, Cadance was looking at Spell. Both were absolutely confused until the sound of someone else's voice caught their attention.
Turning towards the direction of the noise. Cadance and Spell could see Celestia, Luna, Twilight, Gleaming, and Flurry, standing there with smug looks on their faces as they all say in unison.
"GOTCHA!"
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Nice~~~~~

Oh boy, something tells me that Twilight is also gonna be part of it. And I hope I'm right because I'm so excited!
Anyway, I love where this is going! Keep up the great job!
Great chapter
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IS THAT REALLY WHAT’S HAPPENING?! ARE YOU PULLING OUT MY TAIL BONE RIGHT NOW?
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As I said. It's just a theory.
Ooohh, I see we are enacting more of Hooves-art's animations
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i am fully expecting future chapters to have the "spell fucks flurry while cadance is beyond a door" and the "cadance gives spell a titjob during interrogation"
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I totally agree with you, but seeing how Cadance doesn't fully trust Spell and she hates dick, one could wonder how those scenarios would work?
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Unless Cadance starts to suspect Spell and that moment when she's in the door was the final tipping point.
We know Cadance can sense others emotions and she's been using that ability to see if Spell and Flurry had sex or they're lusting for each other. There's clearly some way that Cadance spell is being block and if that was happening during the door image, it only proves it without a doubt. The first two times we seen her use it, Flurry and Spell weren't fucking at the time, but for her to not sense their lust when they are having sex right there next to her, shows that's she being played. But that doesn't mean they can block her suspicions, as she will start to notice Spell and Flurry disappearing together way too often.
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So, she captures Spell and interrogates him, and seeing that she has him alone, she uses the interrogation to have sex with him again. Admitting how much she misses his cock and when she does, she's no doubt caught by both Flurry and Gleaming, if not along with Celestia and Luna. Catching Cadance in the act as she finally admitted that she does love Spell's dick. Not only that but Spell would also admit to fucking Flurry and how much he loved fucking his daughter.
Thus, both are caught admitting their true feelings, which was exactly what this whole thing had been about.
Wow This is a bizarre turn of events, but I’m not opposed to it now I’m curious what will happen next
I never thought I would be so mad at a character before.
Cadence is so pathetic that she tried to find a reason to hate spell and try to force him to give up flurry. That is such a heartless thing to do, why would she think that that would be ok thing to demand? And have the nerve to act all surprised when spell snapped.
I hope under Spell’s guidance, Flurry matures and becomes better than her pathetic mothers.
Because they are the definition of ‘every child deserves a parent, but not every parent deserves a child.’
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There's no way in hell that she didn't already know he was her father since or even before, day bucking one. There's just far too many clues indicating that she does. Flurry may be whore with cock on the brain at all times, but that doesn't mean she isn't intelligent, and she had proven just how smart she is through her many manipulations. Which is why I still strongly believe that there is a conspiracy going on.
Celestia, Luna, Twilight, Gleaming, and Flurry have to be working together. Everything that has been happening throughout this story strongly supports this theory and I believe I've figured out the set up to this stage of the plan and it all started with Cozy Glow.
It was with Cozy that Flurry made that bet, knowing that Spell would lose, this way he would have no choice but to fuck her whenever, wherever.
And of course, it was Gleaming who convince Cadance to talk to Spell, but only did so on his day off, which Flurry would of course take full advantage of.
Gleaming already knows that Spell and Flurry are fucking, she somehow knew they were fucking on the train ride home and confronted him about it. Even if you say she didn't know about the bet, she does know that the two are having sex. EVERYONE knows that Flurry is a whore, so of course Gleaming knows that Flurry was going to fuck Spell throughout his entire day off, it was all part of the plan to get Cadance to catch Spell in the act and as I said, it all started with the Bet that was made using Cozy Glow.
Gleaming and Flurry had been planning this whole thing. Gleaming role was to keep tabs on Cadance about how she felt about Spell and when the time was right, send her off to catch him fucking Flurry, which would lead to the two having a serious talk, which of course, Flurry just happened to be there to overhear everything. Even Cadance being there to overhear Flurry and Spell was also planned.
As I stated before, this is all to get Cadance and Spell to drop their insecurities, like they're both are in the middle of the world's most extremis romance counseling.
And Celestia, Luna, Twilight, Gleaming, and Flurry are their therapists.
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I really hope Gleaming, Celestia, Luna or even Twilight actually f**king slapped her for that!!!!
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A slap is too merciful. She deserves to get her ass whooped by the entire royal family.
Cadance is infuriated, not a monster?! Are you kidding me? I beg to differ. Those who fights monsters should see to it that they themselves do not become a monster. And Cadance has proven herself to be ANYTHING but FAR from worthy of deserving of the title of Princess of Love or Princess in general, and tragic backstories are no excuse for her actions. Agree to Disagree Holocron!
That's it!? That's how they "resolved" everything!?
I'm sorry, but why do I feel like this "ending" feels a bit rushed to quickly resolve the long-ass, DECADES-long problem of Cadence's unfair b**chly attitude.
And speaking about her, why does she get a slap on the wrist after everything she did to poor Spell Break!?
Me and other commenters agree that she should deserve a bit worse.
And hears proof of our comments;
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Anyways, onto a different topic, the opposite happens;
Her own "punishment" with Spell Break wasn't fair nor justified either, and you just let Twilight/Celestia/Luna think it's somehow "fair" and within her "right"!?
What!?
Not only this feels BS, but feels too biased in HER favor!?
And P.S. besides, this "Pact" is f***ing stupid and worthless from the start anyways.
Mpony1 made perfectly good sense of why the "Pact" itself is nothing but a waste of paper and ink;
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And another issue for me is; Your "final version" of the "ending" is making us think that Flurry Heart isn't smart or too naive/ignorant enough to secretly know Spell Break is her father beforehand?
And once again, Mpony1 rightfully said; "Furry Heart not knowing his true identity this whole time feels total BS!"
I completely agree with MPony1 that just because Furry Heart is a cock-loving slut, doesn't mean she isn't dumb or doesn't have a brain with some common sense!!!
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Anything else you want to cope with?
It’s the author’s decision of how it ends. You don’t have to like but you should respect it!
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i cant disagree but i still like it
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I did say I will apologized in advance for what I have to say.
I just need to reveal my honest criticism on how it poorly "resolved" the issues/drama in the end.
That's all I have to say.
Just need to see what the others will think about this?
Nice
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Acceptance" What a perfect name for this chapter, because I don't accept this at all. I can't accept this, I refuse to accept it, because it's all nothing but absolute,
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You mean that absolute, useless, pointless, waste of time contract, that has the BIGGEST loophole in it, that even a blind, brain-dead monkey could see..... From space!
I said it once, I said it Twice, and I'll keep on saying it until it finally sticks.
EVERYONE
KNOWS
THAT
FLURRY
IS
A
WHORE!!!!!!
It's no secret among the royals that she is, they all know she's a whore who would fuck any cock she sees.
So, what made any of them think for even a fraction of a second, that this contract was going to do anything? As I said, the contract has a loophole that was never address. That loophole being,
PRINCESS FLURRY HEART HERSELF!
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Emphasis on the word "PRINCESS" and Spell is a "ROYAL GUARD" and since EVERYONE knows how big of a WHORE Flurry is, there's no way that three fucking princesses did. Not. See. The obvious events that will happen because of this.
Cadance gets a free pass because she actually suspected something like this was going to happen and there was her ability to sense and read other ponies emotions. She did this twice, and yet for some reason, she couldn't get a true read on both Flurry and Spell's emotions, more specifically, after the two returned from the beach.
I just don't see how Cadance wouldn't be able to see the truth. She can literally read how a person feels, deep in their heart. Flurry and Spell just had sex, not that long ago, on the train, they had been doing it multiple times at the beach. They both have very strong sexual feelings for one another. So, how the hell couldn't Cadance not read them properly?
They could act all proper on the outside, but on the inside, that's a whole different level. There's no way that they can simply hide their feelings so casually like that. They aren't highly trained ninjas who were thought how to keep their emotions in check so that creatures like Cadance can't read them and yet Gleaming, who doesn't have this ability, can easily tell that Spell and Flurry did indeed had sex. In fact, it's not that she could tell, instead she already KNEW before the train arrived. I pointed this out before.
Here is my comment from the chapter "Back in the empire."
Ok, it's official. Flurry had known this entire time that Spell is her father and just keeps on teasing him for fun.
This proves that Gleaming is on the whole thing with Celestia, Luna and Flurry. They're all working together and now know that Twilight is on it as well.
This is how Gleaming learned about the "Daddy" thing. Flurry obviously sent her letter and more explaining things. No doubt Celestia was being told the news as everything was going as they planned.
Seriously Cadance. Everyone knows about your ability to read emotions. Which means there's something being used to fool your ability. I don't know exactly what and how, but you are definitely being played.
You all saw it yourself, Gleaming not only knew that Spell fuck Flurry, but more importantly, she knew that Flurry called him "daddy"
So, explain to me how the hell did she know about that one piece of knowledge. She wasn't there, Flurry and Spell went on that trip alone and the first time she called him "Daddy" was on the train in private. Clearly no one else walked up to Gleaming and told her.
Even if you want to argue the fact that Flurry called him "Daddy" just before the door opened and Gleaming read her daughter's lips through the window, then wouldn't Cadance be able to do the same?
Even the argument that Flurry calling him "Daddy" in that moment was a way to get his feelings to switch over from lust to a caring father, so Cadance can't read his true emotions isn't guaranteed, because they been fucking like crazy so many times.
Exactly, there was no point to any of this. If this is how things is truly going to end, then what was even the point to all of it?
I'm sorry, I seriously can't accept this ending with the amount of plot holes it has. There're just far too many reasons to believe that everything was planned by Celestia, Luna, Twilight, Flurry, and Gleaming, in order to help both Cadance and Spell with their personal issues and seeing that's what happened in the end anyway. There's no way that all this was simply a coincidence.
Don't get me wrong, I still loved the story, but nothing that I read about these characters, tells me that all this was a happy accident and it's all because of one major contradiction.
I said it before, and I'll say it again.
EVERYONE AND I MEAN EVERYONE,
KNOWS
THAT
FLURRY
IS
A
WHORE!!!!!!
That fact alone sums up everything, that and the fact that she has proven multiple times to be quite intelligent. She's not just some dumb slut. So, Flurry not being able to tell on her own, that Spell is her father is pure absolute,
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And everyone knowing how big of whore she is and the fact that she's a princess and can easily order Spell to do anything. Is just too big of a plot hole.
The only way that this ending would make any sense, and fix all contradictions is the contract itself.
Remember the contract said nothing about Flurry doing anything. You would think that Cadance who KNOWS her daughter would at the very least included in the contract, that if Flurry ever tries to use her position as a princess to get Spell to fuck her, he is permitted to disobey any order given to him by Flurry that he deemed would get him to have sex with her.
If the contract had something like that written in it and he breaks it, then yeah, it would be all his fault for given into his lust, and yet nopony bothered to consider pointing out that glaring obvious fact.
That Flurry is a princess and Spell is a guard, bound to always follow his princess orders, that includes a total whore like,
Flurry Heart
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Enough said.
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Enough said. Bravo! 👏
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THANKS!
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Getting this heated about pony incest porn on the internet. Fucking hell......
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Even so, but am I wrong?
Finally, Cadence got over her hatred for guys and spell. I never thought this day would come. I am glad that she saw the error of her ways and not treat Spell like shit.
A fantastic chapter even if it had its issues. Is this the final chapter of this series or are we gonna get more?
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The final chapter for this story. Should the client like me to continue with another story of Flurry Heart and Spell Break, then it'll be done.