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My kinda Lan Party!
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Hope you enjoyed the story!
Interesting story. Not bad.
I bet it was button who was watching them
Who is Zakia and where is she from?
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Maybe... maybe not. Who knows! I hope when its revealed people enjoy it!
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Zakia's the zebra guy.
He's from my collab series I do with Holocron called Kwa Rushwa, but he's also part of a lot of AU settings I am doing.
Really enjoyed it! Hope we can see Zaki with Button’s mom too.
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Happy to hear you've enjoyed it! Hope many othjers will too!
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MrBroniac
Enjoy your ban from the page. Name calling and harassment isnt tolerated here.
For those downvoting my reply to ban someone for toxicity and harassment when my page clearly states it will not be tolerated. Just because you do not enjoy the content doesn't give you a free pass to be nasty or rude.
So if you wanna speak up I can remove you from viewership as well. I will not tolerate harassment or toxicity to myself or others. Be a decent person.
I hope they get knocked up~
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:3
Very hot stuff. Only criticism would be the eating out part for me. As a girl that's just not how it works and it made me laugh more than anything lol. Still v good tho :3
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Which part? A long snake like tongue with unrealistic standards, the cervix part or something else? A bit vague in your criticism and doesnt really give me anything to work with other than. "Not how it works and I laughed at it." So not really criticism with so little information given.
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Sorry for that, wasn't meant to come across as mocking^^
Mostly the act described just wouldn't feel good, besides the opening and the gspot you don't really feel thaaaaat much further inside, and touching the cervix just hurts like hell. Like curl up in a ball for the next few hours kinda bad.
I guess from a guys perspective it would be like someone writing about squeezing someone's balls and describing it as pleasurable. Maybe some are into the pain but it usually just makes you kinda wince or chuckle reading it.
If you want to write cunnilingus that actually sounds pleasurable to people with pussy, especially if the character is experienced, I'd go with a slow start if not already wet, then playing with the entrance of the hole, working up to lots of attention on the clit, combined with the guy rubbing or pressing against her g-spot.
Again, sorry for sounding mocking, it's just such a trope for people to just shove the tongue right in there. Hope the more constructive criticism helps^^
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No worries, thanks for the additional information!
My own experience has been different to a degree but you arent wrong. I've had a partner that didn't like it and found it very uncomfortable and we changed things up a bit to avoid cervix tapping. (never had a partner that liked actual cervix pen though, cant say if any do or dont on that part.) While I've had another that really enjoy it. I think that comes down to the partner as well and their own preference. This does come out as a bit of a cop-out answer and I can't really elaborate without devling into decent depts into my own sex life and I don't feel like that's approriate for me to share nor do I think you wanna hear about it.
For the cunninlingus scene, I didn't really slow build up. I played fast and loose with a bit of the scene to avoid dragging things on to long. Its not a "Press button, open damn." for most, also depends on the mood.
I used the drug as a bit of a throw back to my other series, Kwa Rushwa I collab with a friend on. Because if I didn't I'd end up having a smut scene that would have dragged on a bit to much.
You have some points, so I appreicate the feedback. Sorry if my answer comes off like a bit of a cop-out, my experience has been a bit varied. I'm glad you enjoyed it all the same and it even gave you a chuckle all the same.
Thanks for taking the time to give your feedback and getting a bit more detailed so I could understand what you meant.
I don't like XYZ genre, character, or pairing.
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Le-gasp!
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Is there gonna be another sequel?
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Yes, I've just been bogged down with school and studies as a whole and a bunch of editorial duties in real life. Sorry for such a long wait between releases!
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No worries just take your time