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Caladis


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Preggo epilogue on the way? <3 maybe all three of them got pregnancy/motherhood cutie marks in this dimension…

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Nice story! Hope we can see an epilogue.

can't wait to see what happens in a possible sequel

Rarity cleared her throat. “I don’t suppose there is any point in trying to talk you out of this, so I won’t try. That being said… there is more than one way to be a dominatrix. As a matter of fact… there are at least 19 different styles… though I doubt that girls as young as you could pull off all of them. In general, a dominatrix, as the name implies, is normally the dominant one. The most common time is during sex or during some other sexual foreplay. However, outside of the bedroom, it can also involve manipulation… or emotional control… like offering to take a partner out to eat but then changing your mind halfway there and claiming that they didn’t really want to eat there in the first place.”

No that last part sounds like being a dick different from being the dominatrix

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You'd be surprised how many people appear to enjoy being treated like trash. When I was doing the research to write the story I was shocked to discover 19 different styles of Dominatrix. I have no first hand experience with it and this was my first attempt at a domination style story. I was hoping it would be passable if not good.

Fever dream high in the quiet of the night
You know that I caught it
Bad, bad boy
Shiny toy with a price
You know that I bought it

Killing me slow, out the window
I'm always waiting for you to be waiting below
Devils roll the dice, angels roll their eyes
What doesn't kill me makes me want you more

And it's new, the shape of your body
It's blue, the feeling I've got
And it's ooh, whoa, oh
It's a cruel summer
It's cool, that's what I tell 'em
No rules in breakable heaven
But ooh, whoa oh
It's a cruel summer
With you

Hang your head low
In the glow of the vending machine
I'm not dying
You say that we'll just screw it up in these trying times
We're not trying

So cut the headlights, summer's a knife
I'm always waiting for you just to cut to the bone
Devils roll the dice, angels roll their eyes
And if I bleed, you'll be the last to know

Oh, it's new, the shape of your body
It's blue, the feeling I've got
And it's ooh, whoa, oh
It's a cruel summer
It's cool, that's what I tell 'em
No rules in breakable heaven
But ooh, whoa, oh
It's a cruel summer
With you

I'm drunk in the back of the car
And I cried like a baby coming home from the bar (oh)
Said, "I'm fine, " but it wasn't true
I don't wanna keep secrets just to keep you
And I snuck in through the garden gate
Every night that summer just to seal my fate (oh)
And I screamed for whatever it's worth
"I love you, " ain't that the worst thing you ever heard?
He looks up grinning like a devil

It's new, the shape of your body
It's blue, the feeling I've got
And it's ooh, whoa, oh
It's a cruel summer
It's cool, that's what I tell 'em
No rules, in breakable heaven
But ooh, whoa, oh
It's a cruel summer
With you

I'm drunk in the back of the car
And I cried like a baby coming home from the bar (oh)
Said, "I'm fine, " but it wasn't true
I don't wanna keep secrets just to keep you
And I snuck in through the garden gate
Every night that summer just to seal my fate (oh)
And I screamed for whatever it's worth
"I love you, " ain't that the worst thing you ever heard?

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Oh don't worry your story was good. I just thought that last part was more being a dick than being any kind of dom

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