Butterscotch's Bat Breakdown

MHumbling and Healing
MLP: FiM
Romance
Drama
Slice of Life
In the aftermath of Butterbat vs. Zecora, the latter is left learning deeply about himself and being more providing to his femcolts. Meanwhile, they work for Applejack with underlying tension between the farmpony and Butterscotch [RULE 63]
Fetish
Sex
Profanity
Alt. Universe
Fluttershy
Rainbow Dash
Applejack
Zecora
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Jackelope

Jackelope #1 · Jul 15th, 2023 · 6 · · Struggling Submissive ·

Liked the last story. I'm team Butterbat though - 'bout time Zecora had a taste of his own medicine.

Pillowfight

Pillowfight #2 · Jul 15th, 2023 · 3 · · Struggling Submissive ·

Team Butterbat here as well, it’s good to see him thinking about what he really needs out of the relationship. Thanks for doing the rhyming Zecora dialogue, btw! It doesn’t feel right otherwise...

Mix-up

Mix-up #3 · Jul 15th, 2023 · 1 · · Struggling Submissive ·

Nice to see a sequel to this, I wonder how this will play out.

PuzzleMaster98

PuzzleMaster98 #4 · Jul 23rd, 2023 · · · Battered Butterscotch ·

Man I feel bad for butterscotch.

So in denial that he shifted into butterbat

Pillowfight

Pillowfight #5 · Jul 23rd, 2023 · 1 · · Battered Butterscotch ·

Oof, no lie, that new pegasex position is 🔥🔥🔥

Holding out hope for a happy ending, Butterscotch has a lot of friends who care about him.

SexyBugGodofLove

SexyBugGodofLove #6 · Jul 26th, 2023 · · · Butt Slut Blitz ·

Curious to see if this will have multiple endings

Pillowfight

Pillowfight #7 · Jul 27th, 2023 · 2 · · Butt Slut Blitz ·

If Zecora handles this well, he could end up with a cute femcolt sub and a hot goth dom... the best of both worlds!

It’s a small thing but I smiled to see Butterbat check in on Blitz and keep him hydrated. Details like that show there’s love and friendship underneath the power games.

Turbotune

Turbotune #8 · Aug 1st, 2023 · · · Butt Slut Blitz ·

Yay for Butterscotch reclaiming dominance over his coltfriend and love of his life~

Turbotune

Turbotune #9 · Aug 1st, 2023 · · · Souls Searched ·

This is indeed a very enjoyable tale throughout, and I especially love their relationships' development since Their Rightful Place. Being dominant and using the other as a sex slave sure is hot, but at the end of the day (or rather at the beginning of a new day), it's the mutual love that matters. It's an important factor, and it certainly is a sign that they can finally give each other and themselves the respect necessary for a committed love. Culture differences can be hard to overcome but with some empathy and compassion, love can thrive through it all, with everyone changing for the better and learning to be a better creature. (boy I sound like one of those friendship reports, do I...)

Oh wait, there's also porn in this story...yeah, those parts where Butterbat acts smug and challenges Zecora for dominance is amazing, and it provides a turnaround for the usual species-superior-than-ponies stuff. Just saying that with all the species dominance before, it's a breath of fresh air to see ponies on the top for a change. Also the sex is great, but the acts of love sprinkled inside is really the icing on the cake, and made it all the sweeter to read.

See you next time!

Pillowfight