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Holocron


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A most interesting concept.
Looking forward to reading more.
:rainbowdetermined2:👍

I see many up and down sides to this all:

Pro:
- Experience the other side of the coin, no more
"you can't possibly understand me".
- Perhaps population problems through gender imbalance can be fixed?
- More equal laws and sicial interactions, because the feminist might become a male or the masculinity over all supremacy suddenly had to fear getting to life fir the time of his punishment as female.
- Sexuell criminal if one gender suddenly became the gender they wronged... I can see the benefits of a hands on experience of what they deal out before!

Con:
It could create problems with social life and ones entire house hold might need changing up.
A male probably has no woman hygienic products at hand and no practical experience using them.
Woman noticing how redicules everything they sometimes buy is that turn out to not be necessary at all...

Things to be cautionary about:
- Will the return their bodys back and originaly?
(Having a smaller or bigger equicment, body proportions or even new problems do to chemical imbalances...)

So mutch potencial fun in... Self examination
:twilightblush:👍

Imagen this potencial gender swap on Alicorn mares, after a contract that the foals have no right to the throne:
Foals everywhere! Alicorns rare?
Try a 100 and if you get just one Flurryheart or even a colt?
Bingo!
Even if it's don't work out, we are going to have Big Macintosh kind of Earthponys.
Rainbowdash level of Pegasus.
Twilight Sparkle or Starlight Glimmer kind of gifted Unicorns ♡

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I literally explained everything exception the very first thing, what in turn can be answered by anyone that got through puberty.

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Conflict of any kind is an important part of creating a compelling story.
As much as it's an important part of character development and its progress for the storyline itself.

It keeps things interesting, helps us empathize and grow strong attachment with the characters and their stories.
Sad how many movies can't fill them out any longer...
By simply trying to go over basics like that, it would helps to add depth and intrigue to the overall tone and themes of any movie they make.

They could take this story for example and have a really nice story.
We live in disappointing times as far Canon content is concerning.
To bad we can't have half a competence as we read here.
Would the Authors of other stories have kicked in thinking about the topics presented here?
It let us climb instantly up for more since it makes us things about complicated topics.
What we're trying to convey within our stories themselves is what makes our readers come back again and again.

This story for example could be easy made into a educational and entertaining comic.
Very sad that we probably never get movies like that for Starwars or existing big franchises by the universe owners anymore :ajsleepy:

Here is a list of questions on conflict and how it's used in stories like here in FIMfiction:

1. What is the central conflict?
2. What or who caused it?
3 How did it happen?
4. Why did it happen?
5. What needs to be done to fix it?
6. What helps and/or hinders the progress needed to fix it?
7. Are there any secondary conflicts?
8. What’s at stake?
9. Why are they at stake?
10. Why are they important for the readers?
11. How do the conflict and stakes affect the character and make the readers invested in the story?
12. How would they affect the themes of canon or this Fan work?
13. How do they match the tone of the show?

By answer all of them especially for a story currently running it keeps the readers engage.
Otherwise it's a simply entertaining little side story :twilightsmile:

How they help to create an memorable, emotional, and compelling experience for us readers as well as help you convey what a story try to tell us.

Have a magnificent day :pinkiesmile:

This is really hot

(Reads description)
Better than being Demoted.

“Take your time.” Maverick responded, her voice almost sounding flirty and seemingly unphased by the now higher pitch in her new tone. “By all means, let me know if there’s something good.”

That's "unfazed"

Azure had always been a “by the books” guard, focusing on her duty the Equestria, Canterlot, and to the Princesses. So it was not much of a surprise to the doctor that this same serious expression remained on his new face. Azure didn’t seem too phased by this change. If anything, he seemed to be focusing in the direction that the doctor had sent the others to get their new clothes. Whatever he was thinking, it had a goal in mind, and this new gender change seemed to be part of this plan.

Wrong fazed.

“You are still bound within the confines of the law.” Luna explained, looking at the stallion. “Aside from that, and the previously mentioned restrictions, you are all encouraged to engage with the citizens and come to an understanding with your new genders.” Looking around, she paused for breath. “Are there any further questions?...No?...Very well, you are all dismissed.”

Orgy time! :trollestia:

Welp, he or rather see oretty mutch ask for a escalated situation. Can't feel sorry for getting his own medicine :duck:👍

Entertaining and wholesome, nice combination
:pinkiesmile:👍

“Don’t worry, sister.” Luna commented, walking up to give Celestia a hug. “They’ll be fine. And who knows. Maybe some of them will learn a lesson or two.”

“I certainly hope so.” Celestia replied, letting out a nervous sigh. “This is all a very unconventional and risky experiment you persuaded me to conduct.”

“I understand, but don’t worry. I made sure all the precautions have been taken care of.” Luna explained, wanting to put her sister at ease. “I have some special, elite and hidden guards among the populace. Typically I use them to make sure any invading force, or other spying enemies can be found faster.”

Well, to her credit, she didn't Say It

“Looks like you’ve learned your lesson.” Said the stern and masculine voice of Azure. Crimson only looked at him with remorseful eyes. “Well, let’s see if that little whore learns hers.”

Don't tell me... :facehoof:

Maverick’s clothes were nearly torn off her body, showing off at least one of her boobs being pressed against the toilet stand, as well as her bottoms ripped and resting on the ground. What was once her panties was laying in half on the dirty floor. Her pussy was damaged, already leaking out whatever cum this scumbag stallion managed to release in her. And though it was hard to say how aware of her surroundings she was, but Maverick was crying.

“Ugh, such a pain in the ass.” Azure groaned in annoyance.

https://m.

“No, I don’t think so.” Nimbus nodded with a smile. Walking away, she returned to Midnight who was still looking through pants and belts. “Alright, so I’m too big.”

(After some searching)

Breasts with an H cup size are considered above average and amongst the largest cup sizes. The cup size is also not very common, so you may have encountered some issues when shopping for a bra that fits.

Personal opinion: glad I don't have a problem like tha.l

“Oh, no, no, no. This is just how I always eat here.” Nimbus explained, wiping his mouth with a napkin. “Pegasi have a very high metabolism, so we need to eat a lot and it tends to burn pretty fast. Which is why only pegasi who don’t fly a lot end up actually developing chests, hips, and flanks.”

“I…I see…” Midnight exclaimed with some surprise. “Bat Ponies are a little different. We have a rather slower metabolism, and often eat a lot less often than other ponies. For example…” He pointed to all the food that has been eaten so far. “This alone would set up the average bat pony for about a week where we would only need to nibble and drink water here and there.”

So regular Pegasi are... Not quite the eaters that someone like the Flash is, while Lunar Pegasi use the fridge more often.

“To live life!” Midnight cheered, tapping her glass against Nimbus’. “Now then, let’s see what else we can have here?”

This can only end terribly.:facehoof:

Fun for some deserving after all, the end result will be interesting. That former guardsmare knows how to party. Population growth might be in the cards with results like these!

Very well done.

As soon as they left the castle, Moonstone and Ty were already making a direct march over to the local gym. The two of them felt an incredible rush of adrenaline as they were curious what their new bodies could offer in terms of working out. As well as this, they were eager to see if the other could keep it. Though it wasn’t really something talked about, both Moonstone and Ty weren’t just good friends, but they were also highly competitive. Each always tried to outdo the other in terms of physical and athletic might.

So kinda like Rainbow Dash and Applejack.

Is there going to be a sequel?

Getting raped was part of the plan? What the fuck?

With that, the two Princesses dismissed the eight ponies. The four who wanted to return to their original genders went in one direction. While the other eight went in another direction.

Error!

I expect this story running longer, it was a interesting concept and better to end it early than never ending it...

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Would be fun :rainbowdetermined2:👍
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Of course! It's nr3 on the list!
Nr.1 Gangbang
Nr.2 STD - Sexual Transmitted Disease
Nr.3 Non consent coitus

See? It's in the list! You just didn't read the small print
:moustache:🤝:raritywink:

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I’m with PlieRow666 I’m interested in what will happen

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