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zargein


If you write it they will cum.

Comments ( 15 )

Fun read so far keep it up, I hope the guy turns into a pony while being fucked by Mac and crave more cum from him.

Wanted to say just found the story and I love it :duck:

At least big Mac is considerate of his partner's needs

I don't think big Mac would have a problem sharing sugar Bell if she wanted to try itbwith Leon or even adding Leon to his herd.

good story. While not a masterwork, it's well written (for a clop), nothing is done poorly, and its entertaining.

Yes the clop scenes could be a bit more in-depth, but Im not seeing any reason what so ever for the negative ratings.

Is this a new thing where Gay-Clop just gets slammed simply because its G-Clop? Never used to be a thing here in the past. If it wasn't your thing, you just didn't read it.

Monk
“She was very good at assuming the worst, he always did that but she made him look like an amateur at it." -Arelak

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Thank you. It makes me smile just to know that someone enjoys this.

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I know it doesnt seem like it, but you have a following, Keep up the good work.

Monk
“it sounds like they're describing a bacon-flavored dildo with a 10 horse motor.” -Dan_s Comments

You should put in a warning about the poop aspect in this chapter. Thats a fetish that a lot of people really don't want to accidentally run into.

I mean that I would have liked a warning about someone crapping in someones mouth. I don't think this warrants a thumbs down or a negative comment, but jesus, how about a little warning.

Monk

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Because it was cum I didn't know if it warranted the "scat" tag and didn't know what the heck to call it when it ended up in writing, so I just put fetish. But I'll fix it.

Big Mac looked around at all the ponies that were now watching them and noticed something. "Hey... where's my Sugar Belle?"

Busted!

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Why oh why did I google that....

I still dont see why all the thumbs downs. Its not a bad story......Felching not withstanding

Awww.

But, I was hoping for more chapters.

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And the internet has ruined another for life.

Make a part two for the body swap stuff

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