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DeltaXeno1138

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Somber Concerto
Somber Concerto #1 · Dec 12th, 2020 · · · Crossbreeding is in (part 1) ·
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"There's also something about getting a clean bill of health, but that's only required for direct relatives like siblings, parents, or grandparents.

Sorry to be any sort of grammar nazi, but you forgot an end quote here. Other then that, amazing story! Very well written.

DeltaXeno1138
DeltaXeno1138 #3 · Dec 12th, 2020 · · · Crossbreeding is in (part 3) ·
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10577494
Thanks for pointing that out. There’s always at least one that slips by me when I preread.

spoonlol
spoonlol #4 · Dec 12th, 2020 · · · Crossbreeding is in (part 3) ·
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You don’t see much with the oranges considering they were all the way in S1. Nice to see them get some love

Admiral Stoic Rum
Admiral Stoic Rum #5 · Dec 13th, 2020 · · · Crossbreeding is in (part 3) ·
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Didn't the oranges make an appearance at an apple family reunion with that whole raise this barn song?

TheraseVoidCaller
TheraseVoidCaller #8 · Feb 24th, 2021 · · · Crossbreeding is in (part 3) ·
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"Oh, Big Mac was just telling me about this crazy thought he had two nights ago" Cotrus replied non chalantly.

Citrus*

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