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DeltaXeno1138


I like FiM, Star Wars, and Tarantino

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You know, with that cover art. The Coercion and Mind Control isn't really needed just by the artist involved alone.

8034629 HA! Excellent my friend! :rainbowlaugh:

You know just how to make me hard instantly. I was throbbing. So congratulations!

I remember looking at that exact image and thinking "I sure wish there was a fanfic of that." I guess it's my lucky day!

8035506 Exact type of thinking that lead me to write this.

8035506 Exact type of thinking that lead me to edit this.

DeltaXeno1138: "Come edit my story."

Shakespearicles: "Eh, I'm really busy writing. Plus I have all these weights to lift."

DeltaXeno1138: "It's Sparklecest."

Shakespearicles:
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Hey this is pretty fucking good. Thanks to Shakespearicles for sending me here.

I would definitely love to read another chapter.

8035680 :rainbowlaugh:

It's like it happened all over again.

yep this is defiantly going to be a story to keep a close eye on.

That was great can't wait to see the rest

Very hot story you got here, can't wait to see more soon.

Nice chapter, though there's a recurring spelling error you may want to edit.

"Yes mam."

"Yes mam!" Shining grabbed hold of his mother's flanks again before slamming himself into her.

That should be "ma'am". Also, I think either Shining's spell was either just a light, made him more fertile, or made Velvet ovulate.

I can't wait for the next chapter.

8080431 Thanks. Corrected.

And as to your guess.............



Maybe. Teehee!

8080431 to be fair here in the UK "Mam" is a perfectly acceptable substitute for "Mom" mostly because how bloody weird "mom" sounds in our accent, so depending on how you look at it it's either a spelling mistake or a cheeky little English nod.

8080486 It's supposed to be in the sense of "madam" for this.

8080498 Fair enough, either way i'm loving the story c:

More? o[o

8150172 There will be. Soon, hopefully. Life has been quite distracting as of late.

CW

Yes a very good story

CW

8150222
My life is hard too my parents were drugatics

Well, this is turning out great... Now to see how well it goes when their neighbor wants in on the action, this time, fully invested on it.

Definitely amongst the best Shining x Velvet stories I've found. :pinkiehappy:

Shakespearicles: I could write the next chapter for you if you like.


Me


Also:

Fucking amazing!

Soon, mother and son were asleep, the latter the only one knowledgeable in what his earlier spell actually did. Or rather, what it didn't do.

"To new beginnings," he said. He leaned to tap her glass with his, placing his hand on her stomach. They clinked their glasses and each sipped their wine. She reached down with her hand and placed it over his on her abdomen.

"What's this about?" she asked. He pulled his hand away and blushed.

"Oh, uh, I was going for your breast, but I remembered where we were and thought better of it," he said. She shook her head and drank a bit more of her wine.

Hmmmmmmmmmmm >_>

the amount of love in this chapter just amazing.

Can you do more please

8403046 I will. Later. I just got this chapter out.

Nothing quite like a mother's love for her kid. 👩‍❤️‍💋‍👨

Comment posted by Maxxx81 deleted Oct 1st, 2017

THE PLOT THICKENED!
Yay! New Update! Love How The Stories Goes! Quite Unique! Keep It Up!!!

Comment posted by Maxxx81 deleted Oct 2nd, 2017

reveling in the feeling of her son's warm seed filling her up and knowing it could impregante her.

That had to be on purpose. :rainbowlaugh:

Every time I finish a chapter, I go to hit the like button, only to see that I did that long ago. If only I could like this fic seven more times. :pinkiecrazy:

8477176 I often want to do the same with stories I really like.

Nice. But I do wonder why it's anthro. In this story the anthro part does nothing but weaken the story.

8482975 It's anthro because I was inspired by the works of Kanashiipanda, I wanted breasts to be present, and I wanted to utilize magic so I couldn't exactly do it human, and some other small stuff. How does it weaken the story?

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Them not being humans allows you to get away with this better. It also adds to the magical feel. There is a certain intrigue in having them be not human in their body shape. Anthro is still human shape so they are essentially human.
If you use the ones from Kanashiipanda why pick a non-anthro one? Not to mention I always think his anthro drawings are far inferior to his non-anthro ones.

8483448 Well that sounds like your own feelings towards the idea. It isn't mine. They're still not entirely human so there's still an intrigue. They have coats and manes and horns and wings and hooves instead of feet. There are plenty of other examples that fit this, Lola Bunny, Judy Hopps, Twileks in star wars, the green chicks in star trek. And there's a shit ton of anthro art so clearly a lot of people also like it.


I used that picture because it fit best with the story. Kanashii's anthro art for these two is drawn in a way that cropping it to leave out exlicit parts, if possible, would leave it an odd image to use.

8483448 I get it if anthro isn't really your thing. I'm not into some things too. But please consider how other people might look at something before you make an objective sounding judgement when it's really subjective.

8483472
I'm not saying anthro can't have it's merits but non-anthro is better. It's just that non-anthro is much harder to do. Those creatures are anthro because they need to perform very human acts. The characters in your story don't act overly human and there is still plenty of magic and lore. So why aren't they equines?

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