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ScarletRibbon


Just a pone who likes to write about other pones in compromising situations ranging from sexy to deadly and everywhere in between. https://ko-fi.com/scarletribbon

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“And that is why you shouldn’t ask out a filly in the Spring,” Granny continued. “Because fillies are stupid, colts are stupider, and there ain’t any money!”

You can't fight wild, animalistic desire love with reason and logic, Granny :rainbowlaugh:

I wouldn't be bothered by the comparably low amount of votes and views your story got, if I were you. The incest clopfic market is simply over-saturated at this point due to the recent contest.

I would have enjoyed the clop part more if the two were more awkward and less skilled at pleasuring each other, seeing as it seemed to be their first sexual experience and AJ already managed to deep-throat her brother without much difficulty.

That said, I enjoyed the story overall, and will be looking forward to more chapters. Liked and tracked :twilightsmile:

cant wait to read more

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I am sorry I made you wait so long.

Pretty good so far. Small continuity error in chapter 2 though. Only AJ and Rarity were raised in Ponyville. Even if you believe Shy is the oldest of the six she wouldn't quite be old enough to be living on her own.

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There's a much larger continuity error in Chapter 3, but since this entire fic was planned before S9 aired, there's not much I can do about that.

oh hell granny caught them! whats gonna happen next? and will this take another year? find out next time!

Any chance we'll see Applejack actually pregnant in chapter 3?

I tripped and found a second chapter

Wait a minute. Was there a second chapter? I as just rereading some olden goldies. Didn't even know this had a second one.

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Your timing with this was impeccable. I was planning to publish as soon as Summer Sin was over.

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