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I thought it was pretty good and hot. Though I wouldn't mind seeing this be continued to see how Artemis deals with it, along with Silver Strike.
Not bad. I did notice a lot of pronouns being miss used in the beginning. Since celestia stays as her self the pronouns should be ‘her’ and not ‘his’.
Fun read I hope this will lead to a sequel, keep it up.
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Thank you for the info as I said some errors are really persistent.
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Thank you I am glad you liked it. I have a few ideas about how to continue the story.
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Thank you I am glad you liked it. I have a few ideas about how to continue the story.
Can someone explain to me why is there 8 dislike on my story? When I posted it after 10 minutes it has 4. There is no way someone could have read it within that time.
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Trolls what else.
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I hope there will be some BDSM and some mind fuckery on the pore sob, wouldn't be surprise Artemis would need a form to fit his new guard to his new duties with him.
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Your story description could use some editing. It's extra important because a lot of potential readers might turn away simply because your description isn't good (and, yes, they might leave a dislike as well).
And thats besides the bunch who would dislike a story based on rating, tags or subjects they don't like.
I liked it alot
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I am glad you enjoyed it.
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Thanks for the information I will reedit my description. I am really sad about this like dislike balance. I have put a lot of effort to make this story
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Don't worry about it too much. Clop always gets drive by dislikes, and m/m clop even more.
I do hope it continues - poor Artemis could use a friendly little toy like this! ;)
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If it gets 50 likes I will write a sequel. I have a few ideas.
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Sadly, he ain't wrong. I've seen a few stories get downvoted for the clop alone. Sucks but it happens. Hopefully, you get more than 50 likes. I think it deserves it.
When I go to proofread my work I tend to read what I meant to write and not what I actually wrote. I find a text to speech program very useful for proofreading.
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Well I used the site's reading feature for proofreading.
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YAY!
Well now I just want to see them actually date each other.
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There is a sequel coming up but I do not know when will I finish it. I have written only one page yet and I am planning to make it 10-20. So it would take a while.
I loved is and can’t wait for the sequel if there even is going to one
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I am really glad you liked it. Yes the sequel is on its way though it do not have much time to write
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Oh that’s okay ^^
Great story man!
Looking forward to the sequel
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I am working on it but I do not have a lot of time unfortunetly