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Holy shit, that was pretty intense. Though, somehow less so then last time? Perhaps because Celestia went into it willingly.
It was definitely an interesting take on the princesses' relationship.
7999643 That, and the reader understands that this has 0 consequence in the real world minus Celestia being a bit stressed in the following day. Thanks for commenting, my dude, and I'm glad you liked it!
7999675 True. Aside from that, though, I think this was the better story, I rather enjoyed it.
This story is currently on Popular Stories sections, (don't confuse with the feature box).
7999799 Straight up.
Bean me up, coffee
I want to see when Luna does it to Celestia in the real world(or at least mlp don't bring them to the human world(just clarifying ))
7999936 thats a 10/10 meme, fam
Im too old for this shit... so ill give it a read tomorrow i guess.
Well,... that was mess up, yet I was be able to tolerate it somewhat because it wasn't real, it was all just a dream, but... damn.
CoffeBean, what's in your mind that make you write stories like this?
8005208 I dunno man. There's some crazy shit up there. Don't worry, the next little clop I have coming after this will be FAR more docile.
Damn Luna is messed up.
8026347 Oh, that's a pretty glaring error. Also, I do think it's funny; this story is somehow more tame than the prequel, despite being far more brutal. I think its a combination of perspective and context. This story follows an understandable perspective; one of fear and disgust, because Celestia hardly enjoys herself during this, and its within a dream. Meanwhile, the prequel shows just how much fun Luna has with her prey, and it is something that happened in the real world as opposed to the dream world.
8026763 its more tame since we know its just a dream, truth be told i still just skimmed part of the gore.
8027141 Don't blame you, lol.
To be clear, how many ponies has Luna done this to in the waking world?
8075091 Well... I imagined 4, but I never really had the opportunity to write that into the story. The first three were a long time ago; before her banishment.
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So back when it was less...Heinous for them to do that?
8075099 Back when it was easier to cover up. I had this whole thing planned where two of them were Royal Guards, and they ended up volunteering for it. The very first, however; was somepony she snatched from the streets late at night.
There's a lot of things I think of, but never actually manage to write into stories, lol.
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If she hadn't been prepared for the fear, as said in the last story, how did she manage this four times before the events of the story?
8075115 Ah, you found my only plot hole. Half-way through writing the first story I had the idea that this wasn't a first time occurrence, and never went through to change things. Maybe I'll do that now...
8095685 Welcome to what happens when I don't pre-read my own shit, lol. Thanks for pointing out that error. So... other than that little blunder, has the story been good thus far? (the prequel is better tbh)
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WHAT THE FUCK DID I JUST READ?
PEOPLE GET PLEASURE... FROM THAT SHIT?? HELL NO! HELL, NO! I AM GOING TO AVOID THESE KIND OF PEOPLE. Luna is still best pony.
This was disgustingly brutal. As stated, though, much more tame since there are no real consequences.
What makes this one so interesting though, Luna simply provided an image. Celestia’s own mind was the engine. So really, Celestia wanted all those things to happen to her. She wanted to experience her worst fears. And that paints the whole thing in an entirely different light. In simple terms, we’ve learned that Celestia is a Masochist and Luna is a Sadist. But it feels so much bigger than that. It feels like there’s meaning behind it all. I just can’t put what I’m feeling into words, right now.
Good story though. Really good.
I HATE IT I HATE IT SO MUCH
but why the hell am i getting turned on ?
Gone may you be, but a gift this story be. Such exquisit death, it steals one's breath.