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So, did that Guard turn into a pillow or was it just a "few minutes" thing? xD
7697012 There never was a guard. The guard only existed within Luna's imagination.
Oh, I see. But cool story
Looks like the Ackerman took your mind, the only way to Purge him is to make a sequel.
7697344 What exactly would a sequel of this entail? Kinda used all the subject material up already.
also thanks for the comment my dude. Did you enjoy the story?
7697361 well a sequel could have a guard walk in while she is doing the do, also cool story bro. It was good
7697413 Or, maybe she tries doing it for real?
That was hinted at in the end, if you remember
If you enjoyed it, consider giving a favorite and a like, my dude.
I might be wrong but, given what I imagined (lol) the position to be, wouldn't it be the opposite of the bolded word?
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7697016 Every pillow on Luna's bed is one of her victims. Luna is the pillowy equivalent of Medusa!
7699392 Yes, it would. Sorry; kind of a confusing thing to imagine in my mind, and if you were imagining her riding him cowboy style, with her front facing his; you're right.
7699410 Yeah, sexy Twister comes to mind, sometimes, trying to work these things out in one's head.
Yeah, I HAD to read this at work wearing sweats.
Thanks.
Great story, bro
7716347 LOL! Thanks, and I'm very glad you enjoyed it! I know the feeling of reading a quick clop story while on lunch break...
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...I would not be adverse to seeing that become reality...
~Skeeter The Lurker
I like this. Way too often, I think, Luna turns way too much open and extroverted. Yes, it's "porn", but getting the character right, I think, is important in all forms of fanfiction.
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Glad you liked this, and it's funny... I never actually realized that Luna doing this worked towards her introvert character traits. I thought it was a good way of showing that she knows how to do some neat shit with her magic.
7869498 In my experience, introverted people will find very clever, and often, crafty ways to work around their difficulty to deal with others.
Also the fact that she didn't want her sister to find out and had the mare in charge of the laundry keep her secret. I'd love to see how that conversation went.
People love Luna in the fandom and I feel like they have a tendency to make her powerful, (which she should be) but in doing that, many of the stories I've read put Luna in positions she probably wouldn't feel comfortable, such as holding court, organizing events and the such, being the center of attention... Or hunting down a partner for a session of raunchy bondage with little regard for keeping her identity secret from that pony. I wish people would do more of that for Celestia, which I feel should be a complimentary opposite to Luna. (Preferably without turning her into a maniac that eats too much cake)
Finally, I think that stories like this one are refreshing, because more often than not, people do powerplay and bondage as rape instead of 'in-fiction' fantasy. Nothing wrong with that, just not my cup of tea.
Fianlly... Some time ago my mind was blown by the realization of how much people find in stories that wasn't intentionally put into them. It really is funny. Most often, it seems to be something bad, though. Well, you also did show that she can do some cool magic. I guess it's a win for all involved then.
7869562 Jeez, thank you for such a detailed comment! I didn't really expect that to happen on this story, lol.
I don't quite know how to respond to your points made other than... thank you? So, yeah... thank you, and I'm happy to see you could find enjoyment in such a simple little story!