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An Intricate Disguise

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This is great I am happy to see a new chapter to this for sure. I hope we get to see a chapter for each girl. I don't know if he will end up hooking up with each girl. I honestly think it should be just each girl teasing the hell out of him and them maybe talking about their feelings as he take his pictures of them. Ending with him and Twilight and them taking photos for the shoot, and then taking some photos of them mating. I honestly so see it being from this point onward Spike and Twilight being a thing and regularly going at it. I can see a story of her getting knocked up by Spike and while she is nice and big they have a sexy maternity shoot lol. Which I can see after this story there being connected stories of his first time with each girl and the new herd they end up forming all centered around Spike, his camera, and whatever unique kinks each girl might have.

You're living life on the edge with that cover art, my man.

I mean, hey, it says 'suggestive' on Derpi. They're technically 'featureless crotches', according to the tags. I'm 99.99% sure I'm alright this time.

Hey if it's not, just leave a half link to it in the description like everyone else does.

I've gotten covers taken down for less. The mods don't really abide by a particularly predictable standard unfortunately.

Eyes thumbnail with suspicion, wondering if the mods will let it slide


Let me say this.... You got my attention with the cover photo!!! Cant wait for more

well this went to my tracking folder faster than anything else.

YES!!! It continues!:pinkiehappy:

You're good at capturing a moment.

He has.....the Magikz :coolphoto:

I think i'll just hit the track list. Who knows how many chapters this might hold I hope more than 4 at least. However, I can't judge this fiction till it's complete.

I never done seen so many pony ass in a story art!

I really hope Chrysalis is in this, as well as Zecora. I would love that!!

...that cover art...it makes me weep tears of joy...

wow this was realy good, i can't wait.

That cover art... Dang. Now that's super borderline. But, hey? I don't think it violates the rules to be honest.

Starlight hadn't said a word about it either, but he noticed that she too didn't seem at all as bothered about the presence of his camera now. She didn't offer up lewd poses for him to capture like Twilight did

"Damn. If I do a good job, can I still have the gems?" Spike bit his lip, tail twitching, and grinned when Twilight nodded.

:twilightsmile:: "Maybe even an handful of Rarity's Gems, if you know what I mean..."

Only to find Starlight sitting on his bed, in his bedroom. "Whafahuh?!" Spike eloquently spouted, hands instantly returning to his crotch, and Starlight only sighed.
"You really don't have any shame any more, do you? You just walk around the castle hard now, taking photos of Twilight every time she flashes herself at you?"

:moustache:: "Says the mare sprawled out on my bed!"

"I mean..." Starlight searched for words, waving her hoof around. "Just because I'm shocked, doesn't mean I'm not a little bit excited to try it on. It might be liberating, after all. Kinda wish it had came with some underwear, though..."

:moustache:: "Nah, it's perfect this way."

Maybe if you're lucky, I'll be your little maid for a while after our part of the shoot's done.

Sounds good!

Good chapter!
I can't wait to see what the girls are up to!

Found something you may check:

"In facttt,

In fact, that's probably a typo...

Hopefully this doesn't turn out to be a full on tease story. That would be cruel and disappointing.

Looking forward to more!:moustache:

Hope there will be some actual dom/sub tones in this. Considering all the things that Spike fantasized about in the prequel, and for nothing like that to come of it, was a bit of a dissapointment. And now you have Starlight here mentioning that she might be a maid to Spike. Really hope that you deliver :p

And you other brothers can't deny

Never trust FimFiction. I made an anthro story with Spike and The CMC. The mods deleted it because the eighteen-year-old girls weren't eighteen. I lost bloody everything! Well, good story and everything that almost any author hears.

Did it explicitly say they were 18 in the description and in the story itself?

Did after the first block. Plus the story didn't raise any flags until chapter seven.

Did you post it on other sites, likr Pastebin?


Great to see a new chapter to this story. I am happy to see she didn't sleep with Spike. I think it should just be them letting him know they are interested and teasing him. From there I can see later on stories where he get to be with each girl. This is a nice flip to most harem stories where Spike is the lead, this Spike is more just being pulled into the storm lol.

Good lord I about died with laughter at Spikes situation!! Cant wait for more!! This occurred to me: He's gonna be so dead when Celestia finds out.

Twilight (you, An Intricate Disguise) addressing the readers on things we want to know. :moustache::twilightsheepish:

Twilight nodded with a wink. "It doesss, but you'll have to wait and see who else! You'll know that Fluttershy's January because I left that on the schedule—needless to say, be gentle with her—but I've left the rest blank so this is a little more fun for you..."

How do you know Sunbutt isn't Miss August? (Luna is clearly October.)

Unless she's on the calendar too...Ms July/June would teally suit her summery self.

I'm pretty sure she's one of them. BUt, how will she react to SPike's dragonhood is what im getting at? Will she be disgusted? AMused? TUrned on? Upset? I don't know!! ANd im a little scared to find out.

ANd, WHat if CHrysalis or Eris is involved? Or Zecora? That would make this so much more interesting!!

Yeah. Still, what would her initial response have been though?

On the first day of Christmas my true love gave to me.....

...Photos of Sexy Vet Fluttershy!!!

I just had to!! IM not sorry for this.

Do you know if these photos can be found online?

Hmmm....depends on your view of her personality. If she behaves like someone who has probably seen something similar to this situation multiple times over a millennium long life, she'd probably give stamina advice. If she behaves like the "pure" soul that her subjects see her as, she'd be shocked and dismayed at first, but swiftly turn to pestering Spike to marry/herd with them and proceed to providing her with multiple grandfoals.

How odd, I didn't get turned on

An Intricate Disguise does not hold himself responsible for the loss of erectile function regardless of whether or not it is ostensibly attributed to his content. If the problem persists, please consult your general practitioner or take some Viagra.

"Heh, yeah, I just had to tell them about your—" Twilight covered her mouth, 'eep'ing to herself, then took a moment to clear her throat. "Err... I just had to show them statistics!"

:moustache:: "Let me guess: In truth they just wanted the D!"
:twilightsmile:: "Maybe..."
:moustache:: "Does 'D' stands for dragon in this context?"
:twilightsmile: "Maybe..."

"Please, Spike," Twilight pfft'd. "Do I really strike you as the kind of mare that has the time and patience to plan out something this elaborate just to teach you some kind of lesson?"
"...yes. Yes, you do."

I agree with him.

Hopefully, Fluttershy had chosen to come dressed up as a fucking tree or something.
The door opened, and in trotted the most white and red nurse outfit Spike had ever seen, to the point that it looked distinctly like dress up. Gods, they were hitting him in the weak spots already. A nurse? How could you not want to fuck that?!

The audience is proud of you, Flutters.

How did she manage to so effectively pull cute and sexy off at the same time?

Answer: It's Fluttershy. As a nurse.
As simple as that.

"And that was just January, Spike. Just hope the next mare doesn't want to fuck. Think you've got the stamina for that?"
Spike stared slack-jawed as she continued to walk away, perfectly painted in his essence. "I... uhh... buh. That was amazing."
"Heheh, thank you. You just wait until I get to play with you properly... that was just a warm up. Have fun with the next mare! You deserve it..."

Did anyone mention yet this story is getting better and better?

Here was hoping the next mare would give him a break from heaven, he wasn't sure if he could handle that twelve times in a row.

Defend the honor of all dragons, Spike!

Great story so far!
And in the end it turns out they forgot to put an film in the camera so they have to repeat the entire thing... Not that anyone minds.

I find this both disgusting and vile.

Do write more, please! :twilightblush:

This gives a whole new meaning to D & D

Spike, you should have listened to Twilight. Fluttershy's ass would have covered your distracting hard on perfectly.

I'm actually hoping you'd make princess Luna and Celestia a double shoot, with the two princesses lounging next to eachother, getting more provocative, starting to play with eachother, until full-blown fucking

That's a lotta butts. At least one person has had their wish come true.

That was hot

That's hot! Think this is their way of thanking and claiming Spike for themselves!

I like it!:pinkiehappy: Who's next!:moustache:

My money would be on Applejack. Because she in my top 3 of the six!:ajsmug: Haven't found on place for Starlight, yet.:twilightsheepish:

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